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PostSubject: Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures   Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures Icon_minitimeSun Nov 06, 2011 7:25 am

-Introduction-
After escaping from the island his crew got killed in a battle, Abdalah, the sole survivor and the former captain of the crew, is trying to return back at his home. He has regretted of his actions as a pirate, but now it is too late as he is a wanted person and marines and bounty hunters are chasing him for his bounty.
The first story starts in the middle of the sea. The former captain is in the middle of a violent storm and he tries to escape from it. However, a lightning strikes and destroys the ship. The captain falls in the water and tries to swim, but in no time he falls unconscious... The next morning, he wakes up on a beach. He gets up and he starts walking towards the city that is around him and he realises that the biggest part of the city is built on water. The city is being rebuilt. It seemed that something had happened recently there. He asks and he finds out that he is in Water 7. A big part of the city was destroyed during the attack of a pirate named Unholy and so the bystanders are rebuilding it. Also, he is informed that at the place there are many shipwrights and he realises that he can get a ship from there to finally return to his home. However, as he is lacking money, he cannot afford one and so the only way for him to leave is to steal one... And while, he is trying to figure out a way to steal a ship and escape, "Blen Gharf", an infamous Bounty Hunter approaches the place, knowing that many pirates are going there to get a better ship. He sets his eyes on Abdalah and a game of "Hide and Seek" starts in the whole city, with Abdalah hiding and Blen chasing him.

-Cast-
1. Abdalah "Of the Tribe" - Protagonist - Maxulus

Abdalah is the protagonist of the storyline. He is the leader of the Wobdur Tribe, a Tribe in West Blue. After his father's death in a battle against another tribe, he became a cold-hearted person and tried to become the Pirate King. However, while in the Grand Line, when he killed a father that was trying to save his child, he remembered how his father died and realised his mistakes. In that battle he lost all of his crewmembers and he is now sailing alone at the Grand Line, hoping to return to his home island, fully regretful for his past actions. However, that is something difficult as Marines and Bounty Hunters are chasing him for his Bounty while other pirates are also a danger for him, just like they are for innocent people.

2.Blen Gharf - Main Antagonist - Rodoku97

Blen Gharf is the main antagonist of the first chapter. He is a bounty hunter who has gone to Water 7, knowing that many pirates get there in order to get a good ship. He is an explosives specialist and he uses many different explosives in his battles. When he encounters Abdalah, he starts chasing him in Water 7, which is getting rebuilt, and a game of "hide and seek" starts between the two.

-List of chapters-
-Chapter 1: Hide and Seek (Yet to be made)

Technical stuff: Each post has to have at least 150 words to avoid one line posts. 150 words are 5-6 lines so it is not something difficult at all. Any limited char is going to be accepted to the threads, as long as there is a good explanation about their appearance at the place. For the first thread, I would like a possible enemy for a future thread to be introduced. Finally, the main antagonist of the first thread is going to be a NPC, unless I find a PC antagonist to modify the story and make the PC antagonist the main one and the NPC a minor one.

Note: As nobody else has ever made a limited thread, please excuse me for any mistakes I happen to make.


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PostSubject: Re: Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures   Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures Icon_minitimeMon Nov 07, 2011 3:19 am

Its a good start and I feel if it had some fleshing out it could be something very worthwhile, just one question, the bounty hunter, Georgio Montgomery, is he going to be a player character? He seems exceptionally major to be an NPC, also doing an entire chapter by yourself isn't the best way to drum up a story, Id like to see if someone would make him or a character to fill the role. Otherwise it looks definitely passable.
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PostSubject: Re: Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures   Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures Icon_minitimeMon Nov 07, 2011 8:03 am

Rodoku is going to make an antagonist, called Blen Gharf. Is the thread okay now?
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PostSubject: Re: Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures   Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures Icon_minitimeMon Nov 07, 2011 4:12 pm

it will be once we've gotten a chance to approve the finished character, use this time to get others who want to join as secondary characters and update your sheet for Blen Gharf
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PostSubject: Re: Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures   Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures Icon_minitimeMon Nov 07, 2011 4:16 pm

I would update the sheet with Blen as soon as the char is approved, but if you ask so, I will do it right now. *goes to update*.
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PostSubject: Re: Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures   Limited Plot Index: Abdalah's Adventures Icon_minitimeSat Nov 12, 2011 7:00 pm

rock on

APPROVED!

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