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Urotas
Posts : 16
Join date : 2011-02-04
Age : 20
Location : Nowhere, elsewhere and summer wear
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Iggy
Admin
Posts : 3583
Join date : 2008-07-02
Age : 31
Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:03 pm | |
| The ice fruit is banned if I'm not mistaken. | |
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Urotas
Posts : 16
Join date : 2011-02-04
Age : 20
Location : Nowhere, elsewhere and summer wear
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Cobdogred
Admin
Posts : 2934
Join date : 2011-01-06
Age : 33
Location : In a galaxy far far away
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GoreFish
Posts : 2909
Join date : 2010-05-01
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Fri Feb 04, 2011 8:46 pm | |
| Cog, I swear, if you don't stop this posting right now....
If you know you're not supposed to do it, then don't! there's a reason this rule exists, and breaking it to tell someone else he broke another one is kind of lame, as well, don't you think? Two wrongs don't make a right, and all those things.
So, after I got that off my heart, Cog's right. Remove that devilfruit or replace it with something that's allowed.
Oh, and also, this is much too short, especially the appearance, personality, history.... Increase all of it, please. | |
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Iggy
Admin
Posts : 3583
Join date : 2008-07-02
Age : 31
Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
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GoreFish
Posts : 2909
Join date : 2010-05-01
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:09 pm | |
| Oh dang, got me. But I think we don't allow this, as well? Isn't it too strong? | |
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Iggy
Admin
Posts : 3583
Join date : 2008-07-02
Age : 31
Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
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nikz200
Posts : 7605
Join date : 2010-02-19
Age : 34
Location : Malaysia
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:36 pm | |
| no the ice df is allowed Iggy, we have been approving it, just not the intangibility | |
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Iggy
Admin
Posts : 3583
Join date : 2008-07-02
Age : 31
Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:10 am | |
| I'm still not sure. It would take away the one weakness of a devil fruit user, and I thought Admin-sama was also against it. | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605
Join date : 2010-02-19
Age : 34
Location : Malaysia
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:11 am | |
| look again Iggy, its been removed as a banned ability | |
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Urotas
Posts : 16
Join date : 2011-02-04
Age : 20
Location : Nowhere, elsewhere and summer wear
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Sat Feb 05, 2011 4:55 am | |
| edited back to ice with more history and personality | |
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Cryptic Terror
Posts : 1070
Join date : 2010-05-09
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Sat Feb 05, 2011 6:35 am | |
| Please use complete sentences, correct punctuation, tenses, and capitalization. If you cannot invest the time and effort into using correct grammar and complete sentences, it seems unfair to expect someone else to invest the time in reading something that is technically incomplete.
Your history is still far too short; it is scarcely longer than your appearance. The point of RPing here is to create believable characters and cleverly complex story lines that everyone can enjoy, not to make the most obscenely powerful character you can muster with the goal of one-upping everyone in your periphery. | |
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Maxulus
Posts : 4224
Join date : 2010-07-05
Age : 30
Location : Glarg
| | Subject: Re: Deleted Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:04 am | |
| I am sorry for posting this but I would have to PM all of you to tell this otherwise. You are all talking about the Ice fruit while the techniques are all a copy-paste from Aokiji in One Piece Wiki. | |
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