Serious: Ryu and Minato Assassinate Mara!!! Chapter 1

(dont know but i think we killed her but she hasnt replyed)

(Yeh this a tough call, The only way for Mara to survive would be find to get out of his situation. I can't really think of anything - she cant use her DF abilities nor can she dodge while injured and attached to that cannonball. She would need a miracle like Superman turning back time! lol or having Goku wish her back to life)

(or having Xark give her energy to come back to life......<_<...>_>...i didn't say anything...)

I thought gohan's char wanted her alve for a client.... I need to read more carefully

That was the original idea but Ryu decided to kill her instead, and well Minato didn't want to seem weak in front his new friend by hestitating.

who was the client, anyone we know?

Yep The Client is one of the Yonkou, they promised to pay 36,000,000 (If DEAD) Berries to share with everyone who helped. (50,000,000 If alive)

well now Sano just has a reason to hate everyone doesn't he

Yup lol that is funny

((I'm gone for a couple of days and look at what happens. All I can say is that now no one of you will see the epic sword battle that was supposed to occur between Mara and Jackson. Instead, Jackson's gonna be hunting some people down. This will however, give me a chance to create a replacement character. I already have the devil's fruit.

But now I'm sad.))

if you don't want here and then say so and they will have to edit accordedingly

((I'm not going to lie, I would like to avoid the situation as I had not intended for either Jackson or Mara to have died before fighting each other.))

well, if you can't find a way for her to live then.....she's dead now

I don't want to make anyone sad, so If Mara really doesn't want her character to die, she needs to think of a way to get out of this situation legitimately. Well I can think of one way, if someone so fast and so powerful just came in the nick of time and saved her. Someone like Superman *cough*Dartz*cough*

interesting fact is that Cipher Pol Agents that are 6 form users are actually refered to as Superman, Proof: One Piece Manga Chapter 373 Page 11
Direct Link: http://www.onemanga.com/One_Piece/373/11/
Rob Lucchi states that the 6 form users in Cipher Pol are "Choujin" and if you look careful it says *Choujin Means Superman* and I have confirmed with a Japanese-English Translator that its correct.
The only 6 form users currently are Dartz and Admiral Roy Alden and It makes alot more sense for it to be Dartz then the Admiral popping out of nowhere, especially since Dartz was there just moments ago saving Red Beard. So if Red Beard woke up and told Dartz about Captain Mara, Dartz just might go back to save her.)

((That could work. We could also go with the generic, left to die scenario that occurs so often, but is still legit in most animes. I'm pretty sure most of us lost count of the number of times "You're still alive!?!" has been said in what we watch.))

dont mean to be rude but could we just finish the story?

(We will finish it, I will post it as soon as I have free time)

CP8 Leader Dartz was flying the Unconscious Vice-Admiral Red Beard home when suddenly the Vice-Admiral woke up. The Vice-Admiral opened his eyes, and looked around and seemed to panic, "Who are you!?! Wheres the ninja guy I was fighting?" Dartz replied, "My name is Dartz, I am the leader of CP8. I saved you from the ninja-looking pirate who was about to kill you." Vice-Admiral Red Beard replied, "Really? Thanks alot. Wait! Where's Captain Mara!?!" Dartz looked confused, "Who?" Red Beard seemed even more panic stricken, "Captain Mara! She is a Marine Captain, her Ship was the destroyed one where you found me! They might try to execute her! You got to save her!" Dartz, "Alright...I guess I ain't done playing Superhero for today."

(I'm going to do a little twist with my charecters hehehe)

Just then, near the two pirates apears dark, non-human guy from a shadow of a tree. "Who the hell are you?!" yells Ryu. "My name is Xark and I have propesision for what to do with the human girl.", he answers. "Um, she's already dead." says Minato. "Is she now?" Then she comes out of a shadow next to him, knocked out and they look at where she was and there was just a crater. Ryu yells "WHY'D YOU SAVE HER?!" "Listen to my idea. If you let her live you can use this." He takes out a small black creature." Minato asks, "Whats that?" "Its a parasite spy. If you implant this on her, it will undetectable and be able to hear and see everything she see and hears. Here." He tosses Ryu a black device. "Thats to listen in and sends an image to your eye of what she sees. That way you can have a secret spy within the navy." Ryu askes, "Why are you doing this?" Xark answers, "Lets just say id like to see the world in action alote." He disapears through a shadow.

Superman - I mean CP8 Leader Dartz, was now flying toward where Mara was at such Limitless speeds that he almost broke through the Time Barrier. Which would open a hole to the fourth dimension: turning time back! However Dartz had limited his speed just enough to avoid that. Instead he was slowing time down to a point where it looked where everyone and everything around him was standing still like time had stopped! In no time he reached the Island where Mara was supposed to be, and landed next to the two pirates that he met earlier. He also saw an unconcious women on the floor....Mara!!! "I will take Captain Mara back, if you want to taste the ground, feel free to attack me." He slowly was walking in Mara's direction.

((She's still unconscious then. Don't want people thinking I'm not here.))

(Yes, we know your actively here. Your character will awaken in no time, I just need to beat Ryu and Minato with Dartz that is if they even got the guts to try and stop him)

Ryu dashes at him and tryes to attack but Dartz just knocked him back. While Ryu was flying back he past by Mara. At that second he placed the black creature the stranger gave him next to her, hoping it will work. He then keeps flying and land on the floor.

The All-Powerful CP8 Leader Dartz was walking closer and closer to Captain Mara. Minato saw his companion sent flying again with one blow. Minato was wondering if he could defeat such a monster, but he did not want to seem weak or scared in front of Ryu so he charged Dartz and performed, "Ama Kakeru Ryu No Hirameki!" dealing his incredible combo at Beyond God-Like speed! Unfortunately for Minato, beyond god-like speed was like a 90 year old's walking speed and blocked the sword slash with nothing more than his bare right hand. Then before Minato could even think of following up with his vortex-like second strike, Dartz had grabbed his sword and thrown Minato, sword and all, several meters to where had just landed before. Minato refused to give up and stood back up and took out his 360 pound cannonball and used his force push powers to have the cannonball spinning at Ludicrous speeds before launching this unstoppable force, "Spinning 360 Pound Cannon!!!" The Cannon flew as fast as ever with its overwhelming speed and force at Dartz! Dartz however, without showing any signs of concern or emotion, just extended his right arm and effortlessly caught the 360 pound cannonball moving at a far greater speed then if it fell from the empire state building, as if it was a small baseball(except he didn't even need to a baseball glove) thrown by a fellow teammate. Minato's expression was pure terror and shock, "I-Impossible!!!" Dartz held the cannonball with his right hand and with with the left he flicked his index finger sending the ball back to Minato at a speed at least 100 Times greater than Minato had previously launched it at! Minato had barely dodged the cannonball from instantly killing him with the speed and force it was traveling it! Just the air pressure around the cannonball alone was enough to inflict a significant wound on Minato's right shoulder, causing it too bleed badly. The Cannonball had gone so fast that it went flying for miles and miles! Dartz spoke, "I have alot more power in one finger than both of you combined have in your whole body. If you continue to get in my way, you will die..."

"He Minato!" Ryu said. "I think we better leave. We cant fight this guy like we are now."