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ruthja03

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PostSubject: Jun Fishman   Jun Fishman Icon_minitimeSun Sep 04, 2011 4:43 pm

Name: Jun

Age: 26

Bounty: 0

Species: Fishman

Occupation: Navigator
Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Ryugu Kingdom

Appearance: Jun is a whale shark fishman making him one of the largest species of fishman. He is about 15 feet tall and is very large weighing over 600 lbs. His gills are located on the side of his neck. He is an sea blue color that helps him camouflage while swimming. He also has rather dark brown eyes that are almost black. He has black long hair that he puts up when he is about to fight. He has a row of very sharp teeth. He has one large scar that goes down the right side of his body. He wears a loose fitting white shirt and black pants.

History: Jun was born to a well off family. His father was a manta ray fishman and part of the royal guard and his mom was a celebrity. She was a beautiful angel fishwoman that sang the most amazing songs. As a young boy he would love listening to her beautiful music. This and training at the fishman dojo were his favorite things to do. At the dojo his father was the teacher and took special interest in his son. Not just because of there relationship but also because his son was a natural. He learned moves a lot faster than kids his age and do to his size they struck with a lot more force. After training and school he would go home and train more with his dad until they heard his mothers beautiful voice telling them it was time for dinner. This was basically his whole childhood. He didn't have any close friends but that was ok because he still had his family. When he reached the age of 18 he enlisted in the army. He was put under his fathers command and under him they did great things. He was promoted countless times and they were heroes.

Jun loved his family and loved Ryuga but every day he would look at the sunlight and wanted to go up and see more. He wanted to learn more about the animals up there the vegetation everything. But most of all he wanted to learn about the humans. Not just the occasional pirate that came down but all of them in whole. He had been this way since he was 8. He came out and just lay on his roof looking up and wondering if it would ever happen. Eventually it did.

His father loved that his sun was such a good warrior but his mother could tell Jun wanted more. She came to him one day and asked him what he really wanted him to do. He explained to her that he really wanted to explore the outside world and go everywhere. He fell asleep that night to her singing to him and woke up early the next morning to her voice. She whispered to him "Go on live out your dream." She then handed him a pack with things he would need. A map, some food, clothes and a tone dial with her singing on it. He left that morning after leaving a note for his father. He set off on his adventure to travel around the world.

Personality: Jun is a very nice fishman who is very caring. He loves his friends and family and will protect him. Because of how he looks he can be very intimidating but he is actually very nice. Though if you are his enemy he will show no mercy in killing you. He will use all of his strength and skills to win a fight. Jun also is a hopeless romantic. He loves woman a lot but always ends up getting turned down. He doesn't know a lot about humans. Some of the pirates that come through are horrible and nasty while the rest are nice. So he would like to meet more and learn about them.

Ship: name of ship

Ship Flag: describe

Devil Fruit: Limited to only three devil fruit users per person
type: (only if you have a devil fruit)
effect: (only if you have a devil fruit)

Special Abilities:
Fishman karate
Extreame strength- Due to his size and him being a fishman he is very strong. Able to lift about 1,500 lbs.
Durability- Due to how large he is he can take a lot of hits before he goes down.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
1. Hyakumaigawara Seiken( Hundred tile punch)- A hard punch that can send an opponent flying.
2. Senmaigawara Seiken(thousand tile punch)- A stronger version of the hundred tile that can easliy break ribs or kill a human.
3. Karakusagawara Seiken- A diffrent version of the tile punch that uses the water vapor in the air to hit its opponent from a distnance of 30 feet
4. Yarinami(Spear wave)- Uses the ocean water to create a spear that can puncture ships.

Weapons/Items: Tone dial

Goals: Explore the world


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Hysteria

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PostSubject: Re: Jun Fishman   Jun Fishman Icon_minitimeSun Sep 04, 2011 4:56 pm

Please add at least one full line to both the appearance and personality sections, so they're each 4+ lines. A few things to think about might be skin appearance and hue, along with eye color and any other notable traits. In personality you might want to consider adding Jun's view on humans/the world.

Also, why did Jun suddenly wake up one day and want to travel the world? He seemed pretty content living in Ryugu for so long, and was pretty successful doing it. Why was he willing to leave all that, just explore other places? Add a bit more about that in the history, please.
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PostSubject: Re: Jun Fishman   Jun Fishman Icon_minitimeSun Sep 04, 2011 4:56 pm

Ok will do
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PostSubject: Re: Jun Fishman   Jun Fishman Icon_minitimeSun Sep 04, 2011 5:03 pm

I fixed it and thanks for the input it really helps
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PostSubject: Re: Jun Fishman   Jun Fishman Icon_minitimeSun Sep 04, 2011 5:06 pm

Not a problem, that's what we're here for. Thanks for making those changes

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