Last edited by BLiIx on Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:51 pm; edited 6 times in total
keymaster
Posts : 4636 Join date : 2008-09-10 Age : 31 Location : Oh, out and about. Hither and Thither.
Subject: Re: DELETED Fri Apr 15, 2011 7:11 pm
Er....I forgot if we even allow Kami-e at all....I'll have to ask. Also, I'm not entirely sure but I think you have to have 2 Rokushiki or 4 or 6 I THINK since I'm not fully informed. This looks nice but the issues I've listed I'll leave to the other mods/admins.
BLiIx
Posts : 406 Join date : 2011-04-03 Age : 27
Subject: Re: DELETED Fri Apr 15, 2011 11:52 pm
Oh okay then
GoreFish
Posts : 2909 Join date : 2010-05-01 Age : 30
Subject: Re: DELETED Sat Apr 16, 2011 4:52 am
No, we don't allow Kami e, it's considered autododging... I think. Smaller issue with his name: It's different in the name section. Is his name Swanepoel or Rayleigh? Please edit it. Another small issue, you didn't say anything about the colour of his eyes, hair, skin, or any facial features. You did describe his body well, and really, I'd think it was long enough, but you should at least tell us those. It's practically one of the first thing syou get to see, sooo...
BLiIx
Posts : 406 Join date : 2011-04-03 Age : 27
Subject: Re: DELETED Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:00 am
okay i edited it and also removed Kami-e and put Rankyaku insted....
Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:44 pm
