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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:47 pm | |
| name: iron claw pirates captain: vitan batsukaiba flag: a jolly roger with claws on the ends of both bones. on its right cheek is a triangular mark that matches vitan's. ship: the batsu-tsume (a large ship with a tiger carving going up the mast. the wheel has many scratchs along it compliments of vitan's steering throughout its course. the ship itself can be a split into three levels connected by a staircase. on the top level is the deck with the mast and the wheel. along its left and right sides are three cannons all of which are locked into place. the level below that is the living quarters. it contains a kitchen, dining hall, a and several rooms for the crew. below on the final level is the lower decks with 4 cannons on each side. along with these cannons are portholes to aim and fire through, cannballs, and barrels of gun powder filled to the brim.) side: pirates members: vitan batsukaiba-devil fruit user-captain(deer556) history: none yet goals: crew goal: bring down the world goverment, and any goals of the crew members. expecting new members...... YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please.
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GoreFish
Posts : 2909 Join date : 2010-05-01 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:50 pm | |
| Maybe a bit more description could help? Like for the ship... | |
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Sun Apr 03, 2011 4:09 pm | |
| there, hope thats good enough. | |
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GoreFish
Posts : 2909 Join date : 2010-05-01 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:48 am | |
| Doesn't it have any canons? I know they're barely used on this site, but I just want to make sure. | |
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Mon Apr 04, 2011 3:01 pm | |
| well..... originally it was supposed to be a normal ship that I just so happened to name. yes it would have cannons. | |
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GoreFish
Posts : 2909 Join date : 2010-05-01 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Tue Apr 05, 2011 1:24 am | |
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Tue Apr 05, 2011 3:27 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:13 pm | |
| Deer, you do have a good point. Those two questions are arbitrary. While in the whole of One Piece a ship can be like a character, on this site a ship is just a means to get from point A to point B. However, Deer, do not mouth off to a mod. It is disrespectful. |
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:22 pm | |
| I was just wonderin, didnt mean any disrespect. | |
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Redmerv Admin
Posts : 1982 Join date : 2009-02-07 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Wed Apr 06, 2011 12:12 pm | |
| if gore asks you anything just describe it its much easier that way, you may got a point but don't make fuss when it's not needed | |
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: iron claw pirates (ready for recheck) Thu Apr 07, 2011 6:29 pm | |
| fine. I just went all out on the ship design and features. it is ready for hopeful-approval. | |
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