History:Tianna was always a likable person. She was born with pirates so she saw a lot of people die before. But for some reason she never had emotion for none of them. Once she turned ten her father thought she could handle a gun and a sword. But he was wrong. On one of the battles she was killing pirates like a machine. She even challenged the captain but he was too strong. He ended up capturing her. Once her dad knew about this he was furious. He declared the final battle to the pirates who took her away. Meanwhile some idiotic pirates gave her some food. The captain told them too give her a fruit that was in a box. Well there was to boxes and they picked the wrong box. Once the got to the cell the threw the box at her. And a fruti came out. "Hope you have a good time eating!" said one of the pirates. then the walked away. Tianna got the fruit and ate it. It had some kind of design on it. And it tasted nasty. But at least it was food. then she got up and grabbed the bars. Then she closed her eyes and pulled. She ended touching the wall. She stretched. She then waited for her next food. Once they came back the opend the door and hit them both in the face. And they got knocked out. She then got out. But once she did she saw something horrible. Her parents got killed by the fight they did. Tianna fought the pirates and escaped. She was going to carry o her dads wish. She was going to be the pirate queen.
Personality: Always happy and will fight for her cremates if they are injured badly.
Ship: Strech Ship
Ship Flag: A jolly roger with all the bones streching
Devil Fruit: Gum Gum fruit type: Parmicea effect: cant get hurt by regular punches or bullets.
Special Abilities: n/a
Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): nothing. Just regular punches and kicks
Weapons/Items: hands
Goals:Pirate queen
Cryptic Terror
Posts : 1070 Join date : 2010-05-09
Subject: Re: Tianna williams (Waiting for approval) Wed Mar 30, 2011 11:49 am
Please consider writing a longer history that includes correct punctuation, grammar, and spelling. Put more depth behind your character; it's difficult to have any insight into who she is right now. She's more like an inert object, tossed about in a sea of random verbs. WHY did they give her a devil fruit? It seems to be yet another random action with no catalyst.
Sun Mar 27, 2011 7:24 pm