Posts : 66 Join date : 2010-12-15 Age : 26 Location : Thousand Sunny
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GoreFish
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Subject: Re: deleted Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:59 am
Little more history and personality would be much appreciated.
Santoryu
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Subject: Re: deleted Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:21 am
Added a little to each.
GoreFish
Posts : 2909 Join date : 2010-05-01 Age : 30
Subject: Re: deleted Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:58 am
Well, I guess nothing really happened in his history... I actually meant add more detail. For example: how did his mother die? Why invent a weapon? What about his father, did he like him? did he even know him? How come his father had a kid when he was a pirate, and most likely spent his days running from the marine? Well, okay. Maybe that last one wasn't really necessary, but still.... Just some suggestions.
Santoryu
Posts : 66 Join date : 2010-12-15 Age : 26 Location : Thousand Sunny
Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:55 am