Iren Krab for the Leon Lexus crew

Name: Iren Krab (also known as the crab man.)

Age: 19

Bounty: 60,000,000 (That better?)

Species: Fishman

Occupation: Leon Lexus' Shipwright

Allegiance: pirate

Home village/Ocean: Fishman island

Appearance: Iren is a crab fishman with and open white and black jacket. His skin is red and he has short black hair.
his eyes are black and he always smiles

History: he lived on fishman island ever sense he was a boy. Then one day a ship came it was the marines! His parents were killed along with a small village being destroyed because the mayor of the village was a former pirate he escaped but all his bones were crushed in the fight he was saved by a doctor who replaced his bones with springs he then became a pirate.

Personality: Relaxed, layed back, stupid

Learned techniques: 4

-Claw chop: Chop his claws together to create a piercing blow.
-Snip Snipe: Launches claws from hands to attack enemies.
-Jaw crush: Snaps jaw as an attack.
-Claw crush: Claws become huge crushes enemies.

1. This character has to be approved in the Character Creation area..

2. Make his bounty lower...around 40,000,000...

3. Make his description longer

Also...

How do his claws become, Huge?

How can he shoot them off?

and how can he snap his jaw and send off a powerful blast?

That seems physically Impossible..
I'm not being picky..I'm just getting you ready to be approved so the admins won't have to worry about it..and since your joining my crew...

well what i mean my blast is there strong
and claws shoot off ill tell you his history
sorry i was just really tired and it was late so here its is:
he lived on fishman island ever sense he was a boy. Then one day a ship came it was the marines! His parents were killed along with a small village being destroyed because the mayor of the village was a former pirate he escaped but all his bones were crushed in the fight he was saved by a doctor who replaced his bones with springs he then became a pirate. there

oh and how do i get approved by the admins lol?

You have to make an ACTUAL character sheet.

Just take his moves and such and copy and paste them..

You'll have to make the story a bit longer..

And your probably going to have to find a picture to discribe him...
Plus you have to make a written discription..

Just go to the Character Creation Thread..


Explains things a lot easier..

When its approved I'll make a crew and I'll make you my 2nd mate..

Since my 1st mate is an NCP

I have two tiny things to point out.........

It sais everyone needs a "goal", and you have no goal outlined.
Stupid isnt a personality trait....