telothlion skyrain "the angel of death"

Name: telothlion skyrain "the angel of death"

Age:16

Bounty:2,000 (he has killed many marines)

Species:birdman

Occupation:N/A

Allegiance: Neutral

Home Village/Ocean: north blue

Appearance:http: http://www.animeph.com/wallpaper-angel-of-death.jpg

History:telothlion was always the hated one out of his family. telothlions tale starts when he was 12 this is when telothlion started to train day and night with his bow quickly becoming the youngest marksman in the village. but at the age of 13 telothlion's village was visitered by a traveling merchant he saw and got a sythe which was encrusted with multiple gemstones.so for the that year telothlion trained with a bow and sythe .in the first half of the next year telothlion was the best fighter under 18 but during that time a group of bandits attacked his village many died but the bandits were driven of so telothlion went home to find his perants were good and find. during the second half of the year his perants went missing to find a note on his table come to the mountain summit if you want your perants so telothlion did what the note told him to do . when he got there he saw a birdman with bat wings he told him that he would not kill them if he became his personal worker so telothlion agreed to this to see that the stranger throw his parents of the cliff for them to glide down then the stranger told telothlion "they wont be flying up they can only glide". the stranger escorted telothlion to his ship when they got there he told telothlion to eat a fruit when he ate it he could taste to worst taste he could ever tasted before but when he ran he when like lighting then the stranger caught up telling telothlion " you shall call me master from now on and i will call the angel of death for you will be killing anyone i need dead " telothlion agreed so for the next year he killed marine and pirate alike but by the start of the 2nd year the master told telothlion to kill his parents he fell with dread when those word fell from his lips.when he got home telothlion told his perants what he had to do they said we will hold him of for as long as possible jst run he will not know were you got to now go. so for the next couple of years telothlion kept running making sure he never got caught by the man that enslaved him.

Personality:telothlion is very paranoid and is always edgy. he never drinks alchohol because this would give the evil one time to get to him. telothlion is very shy and bearly talks he is bearly ever happy there are only a few things that will cause him to be happy. telothlion hate to kill to or to see killing because thats all he has seen for 2 years straight.

Ship:N/A

Ship Flag:N/A

Devil Fruit:Jin Jin No Mi (Swift Swift Fruit)
Capabilities: The user can accelarate any part of his body from any limb to falling speed. He can not decrease his speed beyond normal though, only accelarate. The eater of the fruit would gain a master level of speed acceleration to his feet when he eats it but to accelerate other parts of the body the user must go through training.
Type: Paramecia.

Special Abilities:
deaths toll :slashes every weak point but it is easily noticeable and it can be blocked easily
explosive arrow: fires an explosive arrow
blade rain: dives at the opponent firing arrows then slashes them with his sythe

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
speed slashes : slashes the opponent at every angle with his devil fruit power
arrow rain:fires arrows at lightning speed
revenge : tried to dodge opponent if succedes he slashes there weak point

Weapons/Items:sythe , bow

Goals:To Stop his master from following him

2,000 belli for killing alot of marines seems actually really good. If it was like a battalion then that makes sense, but if it was 2 then there's problems.

Oh yeah, the "every point on the enemy's body" is the one thing I've got problems with. So fix that and you're clear for approval. (you can say it strikes at 2 or 3 points on the body, or at least explain how it can be dodgable)

Edits have been made I see. Remember to also tell us when you edit in a post.

Approved.

ok