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Anfernee001

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PostSubject: WGUG-Petals   WGUG-Petals Icon_minitimeMon Dec 16, 2013 6:57 pm

Ship Name: WGUG-Petals

Crew name/Owner: Sea Admiral Rafu

Side:Marine

Ship type: Marine Battleship but standard pink ship with pink petal across the boat itself.

Outer description: Standard Battleship with pink petals ,and pink outlines. It have about 60 cannons if not more ,and very large one of the biggest vessels you every laid eyes on. It have a sea stone bottom to prevent Sea's King from attacking it is very fast ,and powerful ,and can be used in a buster call to destroyed a island.

Iron side: Since the ship post to be hard to sink it sides of made of iron ,and steel so when a cannon ball hit it they bounce off like a bounce ball.
They place wood over them to make it look average but in fact it not those.(30hits)

4Mast Sails: This ship used it mast a lot it needed them to dodge ,and evade most attacks. That why it have three times the mast to dodge most attack so if the attack no close range this ship would mostly like dodge or evade ,along with counter the attack.

Weapons: 20 cannons since this a battle ship the cannon balls are 3 times the size of a average cannon ball.
It also can split in many pieces to hit multiplies targets at once with a great explosive power too.



Inner description: Standard numbers of rooms with pink doors those. Along with a training room ,and supplies room too.

History: WGUG-Petals was made for Sea Admiral Rafu who assign this mass craft to be made as his very on. It large as well as powerful, and hard to sink. This vessel is not well known but it said it was constructed at G-6 under strict orders to make it great in every way.
It took this vessel a while to be made but it said it was modified to suit the Sea Admiral wants, and needs as a vessel. This vessel suit it leader perfectly which make it awesome in every way.


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Maxulus

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PostSubject: Re: WGUG-Petals   WGUG-Petals Icon_minitimeMon Dec 16, 2013 7:01 pm

Define how it is great in every way. I mean, this is a battleship. Explain the weapons it has inside it and stuff like that. Also, explain why it is hard to sink.
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PostSubject: Re: WGUG-Petals   WGUG-Petals Icon_minitimeMon Dec 16, 2013 7:19 pm

I see you edited, so I am posting again.

Starting, this might be a powerful battleship of a Sea Admiral but 60 cannons are way too many. I'll say that they should be 20 maximum and I even think that they are way too many so if there are problems with this, I am asking other moderators and administrators to correct my decision about them.

Secondly, I can't accept the ship as long as there is not a limit on how many hits the ships may take from the cannonballs and I want to see a normal amount of hits and not around 100.

Thirdly, while the idea of a steam engine sounds great, so far in One Piece I think we haven't seen ships like these. We have seen ships and vehicles that move based on the user's power (Mr. 3's boat, Ace's boat and Smoker's bike). So I would like you to change that.
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PostSubject: Re: WGUG-Petals   WGUG-Petals Icon_minitimeMon Dec 16, 2013 7:44 pm

I want a standard number of hits the ship may take, so make this 30.
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PostSubject: Re: WGUG-Petals   WGUG-Petals Icon_minitimeMon Dec 16, 2013 7:50 pm

Done
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PostSubject: Re: WGUG-Petals   WGUG-Petals Icon_minitimeMon Dec 16, 2013 7:55 pm

APPROVED. Any other mods/admins may take another look at the template if they want.
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