Ishuzoo "Grey Monster" Utoshudin

Name: Ishuzoo "Grey Monster" Utoshudin

Age: 18

Bounty: 2,000,000 Belli

Species: Fishman/Great White Shark

Occupation: Fighter/Hunter

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Grandline/Water 7

Appearance: He is 6'0 tall, and muscular. He doesn't have much body fat, due to his intense training. His skin is smooth, and a very light grey color, that slightly shines when the sun beams down on him, on his breasts, front of neck, under the chin, and stomach area the skin is white. His head is kind of pointed forward at the snout, where the two holes for his nose are. His teeth are super sharp, and are very white. The insides of his mouth are a bright red that you can see when he talks. His eyes are a black color, and they are kind of like an oval. He has a dorsal fin on his back, that helps him swim better. He also has slightly webbed feet and hands. He has 1 inch claws on his fingertips. He wears black shorts that end at his knees. On his left leg there are white bandages that go down to his foot and stops 2 inches from his toes. He sometimes wears a red button up shirt, with short sleeves, that has pink and yellow flowers on it, he wears this unbuttoned. He has his sword in it's holster at his waist, on the left side.

History: Ishuzoo was born in winter time at Water 7, into a group of thieves. Nothing important happened in his life untill he was 10. At this age he started stealing from local shops, and other places. He would rob food, money, clothes, anything he needed. He was good at it too. When he was 12 years old he was at home with his mom, and father and then marines broke down his doors, lead by Captain Pomer, and arrested his parents, and sentenced thim for death, for their crimes. He wasn't arrested because his parents lied to the marines and said he didn't do anything wrong. He was put into a dirty orphanage that had no money, and very little children. A year later he was adopted by a hunter, because the man believed he had potential for hunting. He was given a katana by his adopted father, as a present. Ishuzoo used this as his hunting tool. Ishuzoo would hunt treasure, sea kings, and other stuff that could gain him money. By the age of 17, Captain Pomer would once again break down his door. Apparently his adopted father hunted down 2 marines, for a couple, who owed them money. The marine captain smiled and looked at Ishuzoo with an evil look, "Wow, look how much you grown since our last time meeting. Looks like you're always in a bad family. You don't belong here in this world. Do you?" Captain Pomer laughed as he licked his lips, with a very long tongue. he then took his adopted father, leaving Ishuzoo alone. A year later from the incident with his adopted father, Ishuzoo was at a bar. He was really depressed, because it had been a whole year without a family, and he needed to relax. After some drinks he was drunk and irritated. Three men walked up to him, and started messing with him for being a fishman. He didn't think and smashed 2 of their heads in the ground, killing them. He left dents in the ground and then looked in shock at the mess he made. All the other people in the bar called him a Grey Monster and ran out of the bar, other than the bartender. The bartender, a friend of his, told him to leave the island, because the marines would be their soon. The bartender gave him some food, and Ishuzoo took it and ran off towards the dock. He jumped on a row boat and left water 7. He was given a 2,000,000 Belli bounty for killing 2 men.

Personality: Ishuzoo is loud when he talks, that's if he does talk at all. He only really talks to people he respects or if he haves to talk. He can get angry very easily, and doesn't take things likely. He believes that he is always right in an argument, and if he is wrong, he won't admit it. As stubborn and hot headed as he could be, he is a great friend once you earn his respect. He treats his friends well usually, and will protect them at all costs. He is very competitive and won't give up on a challenge. He doesn't like killing innocent people, but if he has to, he will. He likes making fun of people in a playful way, and laughs when he does do this. He can be very sarcastic, and he usually is so sarcastic people believe him. He only really goes out of his way to help his friends, but not strangers. In a fight he can get out of control and sometimes go on a rampage.

Ship: row boat

Ship Flag: N/A

Devil Fruit: N/A
Type: N/A
Effect: N/A

Special Abilities: 1 Sword Style- Ocean's Dance, can cut through stone, Inhuman Strength/Endurance

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):

1. Simple wave- A normal slash attack
2. Dividing waters- Jumps in air and comes down with the sword, in front.
3. Splash- A stab attack

Weapons/Items: weapon name: Hunting Blade
description: An all black katana, with a blue hilt, and a silver handle
history: Given to Ishuzoo from his adopted father.

Goals: Kill Captain Pomer from the marines, Become the best swordsman in the world.

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Considering that he's a fishman, there are a few minor details I'd like you to give us, and we are good to go, as I don't see anythin bein out of order.
What kind of fish species does he represent? I didn't saw that anywhere, if you have written it down and I didn't saw, please let me know.
Also, please give us more detail in his abilities section. I like that you kept the named attacks simple, but you should explain more of his one sword style proficiency. Like, capability to cut throught steel/iron, air slashes, physical strength higher than normal fishman (if so) and as such. Other than that he's fine and good to go.

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