One Piece RP - Race to the Grand Line
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

One Piece RP - Race to the Grand Line

Providing the Original One Piece RP Experience Since 2007
 
HomeGalleryLatest imagesSearchRegisterLog in

 

 Aaron Shell

Go down 
+4
Thatoneguy
Iggy
Layman Iconoclast
Stormcrow
8 posters
Go to page : 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6  Next
AuthorMessage
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 8:06 pm

Name: Aaron Shell

Age:23

Bounty: None..yet

Species: Human

Occupation: Navigator, Cartographer, Artist

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Unknown

Bounty: 16,000

Appearance:
Male- https://s494.photobucket.com/albums/rr304/Stormcrow71/?action=view&current=Kai_Rene_by_IchimyauGin.jpg
Female- https://s494.photobucket.com/albums/rr304/Stormcrow71/?action=view&current=Kaze_by_Reidash.jpg
Hair: Jet black, hangs down to the back of his/her knees. Is almost always braided. Woven into the braid is silver threaded ribbon with tiny bells tied to the end of it. Also scattered are tiny silver and gold charms. (a Compass, a Feather, a paint brush)
Physical:
Male-A slender man with almond shaped grey eyes. He is clean-shaven with a faded scar running from his left ear down his neck to disappear underneath his coat. his skin is tanned a dark brown from his constant exposure to the sun.
Female- Identical to above, except the skin is pale.
Clothing- he/she is commonly seen dressed in a dark green coat that is loose on the top and narrows down to the waist before flaring out again, it goes down to the tops of his/her boots. on the left shoulder is a patch In the shape of a seashell with a compass rose imposed over it. Underneath the coat is a loose white t-shirt and grey trousers that are tucked into large black boots. the boots are about mid calf high.

History:

(Just using him for purposes of this backstory)
Aaron was born on the ocean, it was all he knew for the first 4 years of his life. His father was the Navigator on the pirate ship "Trader's Price" and he learned his fathers trade from birth almost. His mother was an artist that his father had met in a small town, and they had instantly fallen in love. She ran away with him and made her way designing tatoos and flags for Pirates, or the odd painting for those inclined towards it. The crew that manned the "Traders Price" was almost totally of Martial Artist who felt that the only way to master their arts was to test them in every facet of life, from the high seas to the Dojo. Believing in the balance of life and actions, they were Pirates but they also did rarely keep the treasure and booty they aquired from such endeavours, rather giving it to those that needed it more then them.

When he was 6 years old, the "Trader's Price" was attacked in the middle of a storm. noone was prepared because everything was battened down for the storm. Noone could see who the attackers were, the crew just started dying. His mother shoved him into a trunk and locked it. Not being able to get out no matter how hard he tried he eventually fell into a fitful sleep.

When he woke up he was in a bed, in a room he didnt recognise. The ship had washed up on shore and the curious townsfolk from the nearby town had went over to investigate, he was found in the trunk and taken back. There were no survivors, or even bodies to be found on the ship. The ship itself was pretty much ruined, the villagers took most of everything they could use off of it, Aaron took his dads Navigation tools and his mothers artists supplies as the only things that he wanted.

It was during this period that he discovered his curse, whenever he Sneezed turned into a girl, vice versa. So he kept careful watch over himself from that day onwards to make sure he never got sick, or anything that might make him sneeze., there were slip ups all the time so he eventually got used to living as either sex while still keeping clear the lines between the two. he never figured out why he was cursed like this, his only assumption is that something happened that night of the attack.

He spent the next ten years of his life he was taken care of by the towns people, though he never truly felt like he belonged, he yearned to be back on the sea. So while he waited for the right time he worked on his art, drawing was the best way he could find to pretend that he was out on the ocean he loved so much. his budding skill at navigation blossomed and soon he was known throughout the whole island for the detail and accuracy of his maps. During this time he also enrolled in a Dojo on the island and continued to train his skills, though because of the curious melding of his abilities he never really fit in there either. At the age of 16 he finally felt himself ready to leave, and signed on with a Marine ship leaving port and never looked back, he has since bounced from ship to ship, wether it were Marine or Pirate or Merchant working as a navigator/cartographer. Currently on *insert* Island drawing maps for a wealthy merchant. Nolonger can work for the Marines due to his bounty (tiny as it is).

Personality: Very restrained, due to the curse he/she is reluctant to get very close to someone..afraid of how the other person will take it when they find out.



Ship:


Special Abilities:
Devil's Curse:
Obtained: From a person using the Akuba Akuba Fruit (Curse Curse Fruit)
Effects: Turns the user into the oppisite sex whenever they do a certain thing, this can happen over and over again
Postives: The curse itself greatly effects the person. All the psyical limits are destroyed and tripled from what they were before.
Flaws: He/she cannot really live a normal life....



Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
(He she can use any of these attacks in either form, but these are the ones that have been found to fit the forms better)
Male-
Wind kick- Almost faster then the eye can see, Aaron kicks his enemy three times. He aims for the knees and the stomach
Avalanche Rush- Aaron charges at the enemy, grappling with them and driving them into the ground.
Eagle Slam- Fighting his way in close to the enemy, he gets near enough to grab them by the arm and the leg. He shifts his positioning around to flip them around over his shoulder, slamming them into the ground.
Springtime Thrust- he rushes the enemy and thrusts out his arms, grabbing his right wrist with his hand to steady the blow he puts the full force of his charge into the attack, sending the enemy flying backwards.
Female-
Shower of Petals- She strikes the enemy many times, though not very hard. this attack is more for knocking them off balance then actually hurting them
Counter-whip- She throws herself away from an enemies attack, almost nulling its force while she uses the momentum to swing her fist around and strike the enemy. (has to see the attack coming)
Nerve Strike- She picks a nerve center on the body and attempts to strike it with unerring accuracy, disableing that part of the body (limited to an extremety aka legs or arms only one)
Flowing Strike- holding the thought of water flowing around an obstacle in mind, she moves around an enemy, taking no offensive action but is able to dodge almost any attack.

Drunken Fist-
(he is going to have some drunken fist technniques too, only accesable when he/she is truly drunk)



Weapons/Items: No weapons, he/she does not like to fight at all. but when he/she does it is hand to hand. he/she knows a mixture of Jujutso, Wing Chun, and Taekwondo fighting styles. Whenever he/she is drunk the Drunken Fist style that he/she picked up comes out..he/she does not know any one style exclusivly, but instead has taken the smattering of each that has been picked up during childhood and beyond and refined it into his/her own unique fighting style
An old brown compas case that hangs on a piece of leather around his./her neck. inside is an old compass that does not work, but opens up to reveal pictures of his/her mother and father.
Compass
Sextant
Map tools
paper, pens
Wallet- 1500 Belli


Last edited by Stormcrow on Sat Feb 28, 2009 8:21 pm; edited 7 times in total
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 8:11 pm

A. wrong sheet we have a character sheet and we expect you to use it unless given permition to use another

B. DF, weapons ect are not submited

C. why waste one of your few DF slots on something that dose not help you in any way? also I hate rama more than anything else in the world and dont try and tell me this isnt pleagureisum

D. techniques are nowhere near explanable/reasnable

E. this character is way past cheap

F. it shows no signs of being in one piece this is the most out of context char I have seen in a long while it looks to me that you just reused a character from another RP and put it in OP terms
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 8:46 pm

I can fix the sheet, I melded two different ones because I was under the assumption that more details were never a bad thing. I submitted the weapon, I didnt think I had to because of its simplicity, and Im sorry for that. The curse is not a Devil Fruit, it is the effects of a Devils fruit used on this character. it pretty much just make him/her strong enough to carry the hammer around..thats..about..it.

Rama? Care to explain?

the techniques not reasonable..maybe not, but then again this is a process, I stated before its been awhile since I did this. So what can I do to make them more reasonable.
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:15 pm

there are not such curses in one piece have you even seen it?

dont play dumb with me

maybe later when I can figure out where to start with THIS ((ssjgohan007???))
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:30 pm

No I have never seen this Curse in One Piece, I was hoping for a lil openess in the character creation process, seeing as it is essentually a "Fantasy" world, I thought it would be a neat Idea...but seriously if your that adamant against it I will cut it down to Male -or- female and cut out the whole fruit effect idea. I just wanted this character to be normal with a twist.

Play dumb...clearly you are mistaken.

ssjgohan007....o.o
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:35 pm

tweaks are one thing, bringing in a new element all together is quite another and why cant a girl have physical streighth she dose not need to be male to use a hammer you sexist

your not doing yourself any favors here

yeah ssjgohan007 his unreasonable/stolen/out of context character ruined this place for everyone once upon a time, you are very very similar to him in most ways
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Iggy
Admin
Iggy


Posts : 3583
Join date : 2008-07-02
Age : 31
Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:36 pm

Admin-sama, your getting out of line! Calm down.
Back to top Go down
Thatoneguy

Thatoneguy


Posts : 2691
Join date : 2008-12-14
Location : My happy place now don't ruin it

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:38 pm

I'm not a mod, but I can say this is very gohan like and very sexist as well. Girls being smarter then guys is a negative sterotype and I know girls who scare my buds (they are same age) as well as boys much smarter then girls. This character seems to be based on stereotypes created by media. This isn't supposed to be an attack, I'm just saying that it's pretty flawed.
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:44 pm

okay Alister has shown me how counter productive this is *sigh* but we have SO MUCH rivison to do here! the thought of all that work makes me tired already, but Im not going to take the easy way out and just "Trust" you to be reasonable because no one is ever quite 100% reasnable, I will help but its going to be SO much work to help alone but dont give up crow!
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:48 pm

Thats all I ask is a little bit of help on making this character bearable for everyone, I dont want a strong character I just want someone normal with a bit of a twist..XD

Where do we start
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:51 pm

I swear we wont get through this if you rely on me compleatly
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 9:58 pm

Edited again, awaiting your perusal
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeThu Feb 19, 2009 10:00 pm

your allowed to HAVE techniques Suspect
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 12:38 am

Aaannddd...edited.
Back to top Go down
Redmerv
Admin
Redmerv


Posts : 1982
Join date : 2009-02-07
Age : 32

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 10:39 am

he/she?? just pick a sex already
Back to top Go down
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 5:15 pm

redmerv wrote:
he/she?? just pick a sex already

Kinda the point of the character is to not pick...
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 6:06 pm

right part of the "curse" that just plain can not be explained in terms of one piece
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Redmerv
Admin
Redmerv


Posts : 1982
Join date : 2009-02-07
Age : 32

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 8:16 pm

Stormcrow wrote:
redmerv wrote:
he/she?? just pick a sex already

Kinda the point of the character is to not pick...

lol so ure char got 2 apearences at the same time
Back to top Go down
Mimiu

Mimiu


Posts : 523
Join date : 2009-02-15
Age : 36
Location : Pflugerville

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 8:46 pm

Quote :
lol so ure char got 2 apearences at the same time

Its like the Ranma from 1/2, don't be a smartass
Back to top Go down
Layman Iconoclast
Admin
Layman Iconoclast


Posts : 10667
Join date : 2008-07-01
Age : 32
Location : I am everywhere I see everything

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 8:53 pm

yeah I actualy pointed that out
Back to top Go down
https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 10:08 pm

Admin-sama wrote:
right part of the "curse" that just plain can not be explained in terms of one piece


You know..there are alot of things out there that are rather hard to explain, both IRL and in the terms of this Fantasy genre Anime..that has Mermen (wich dont look like any Mermen in any portrayel I have ever seen) Giants, people that eat fruit and become crazy awesome..who is to say that what I put down is not out there somewhere...?

Now, what else do I have to make this character ok?

Oh..and what in the name of all that is Holy is this Ranma you speak of, I am not being a smartass Admin, or playing dumb, or retarded..It really is not worth my time to do so.
Back to top Go down
Thatoneguy

Thatoneguy


Posts : 2691
Join date : 2008-12-14
Location : My happy place now don't ruin it

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 10:09 pm

He means the curse fruit is just hard to explain. IT could have unlimited powers. I curse you to die! I curse you to eat potato chips! I curse you to kill a puppy!
Back to top Go down
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 10:12 pm

True, but on the same note you dont have to make the fruit itself, I have just been effected by it. Its not like you ae going around handing it to PC's..that is something that I would limit..this "Curse" actually makes it harder for me to play this character then anything.
Back to top Go down
Thatoneguy

Thatoneguy


Posts : 2691
Join date : 2008-12-14
Location : My happy place now don't ruin it

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 10:16 pm

You could say that but it also makes it easier. How do you fight someone you don't understand? If you turned into a girl when I was clashing with the dude you'd just beat the crude out of me by speeding up. Or you could abuse switching by use girl form for fast punch and turn into big guy for stronger punch. Also how can you have stronger but slower form? Muscles also define speed. A strong punch is a fast punch.
Back to top Go down
Stormcrow

Stormcrow


Posts : 159
Join date : 2009-02-19
Age : 38
Location : Pittsburgh

Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitimeFri Feb 20, 2009 10:18 pm

I cant do it at will...thats the point of it being a curse..I dont control it...and there is no real difference in ability from male to female, that was changed....It happens whenever he/she sneezes..XD
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





Aaron Shell Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aaron Shell   Aaron Shell Icon_minitime

Back to top Go down
 
Aaron Shell
Back to top 
Page 1 of 6Go to page : 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6  Next
 Similar topics
-
» fishman turtle shell
» Vice admiral Charles B Shell
» Sheru Daiaru no Mei (Shell Dial Fruit)
» Aaron Q. Black
» Aaron Yates

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
One Piece RP - Race to the Grand Line :: Main Area :: Character Creation-
Jump to: