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Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Seth diablo "the devil kid" Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:43 am | |
| Name: Seth diablos “the demon child”
Age: 16
Bounty: 5000 (running away from, [framed]:stealing important experimental device.)
Species: human
Occupation: none, but has been trained by scholars on a multitude of skills and trades.
Allegiance: he trusts neither side, but is more lenient of pirates
Home Village/Ocean: grand line
Appearance: Seth stands about 5'8, is very wears a large blue jacket wth a hood and pocket. usually wearing it in crowded spaces so he isnt cuaght by the marines or mercenarys his father has hunting for him. underneath it he has a red shirt with a black design on it. with his shirt he wears a chain across his chest. his pants are brown with a black belt. he always wears his guantlets and boots wherever he hison his forehead he years orange goggles that he adjust over his eyes during fights. his eyes are light blue on the right and green on the left. his hair is blond and is spiking back, and down his head. he has a pouch of berri on his belt that he always carries around.
History: Seth was born into a rich family, a fat, drunken father, a mother who barel cared for him, three older brothers, and later a younger sister. the rest of his family were rich, snobby, and extremly greedy. his uncle though worked as a scientest and was one of the only people Seth could talk to, accasionly visted. he often was forced to work by his mother and tortured by his brothers, who tuanted him while they chewed on the feasts they had servants carrie around. he was mainly hated becuase of: 1, he was the youngest 2, he showed no signs of becoming a man like his father, 3, he was so generous and kind. and this was true, despite his hardships Seth was always a kind boy, giving beli to the poor townsfolk, giving some of his food to the needy, and doing his own chores, his parents were sickened and saw this as wasteful. despite there despise for him seths parents still gave him tutoring and figthing classes,he was pretty good at them in fact. he continually improved in every one, especially fighting. later this fighting class would become one of the most important learnings in life. his life was mostly this until the day his sister was born. the day had been long, almost endless. while his parents were at the hospital he had an exstensive list of chores to do, and his eldest brother had to make sure every one was done right. his oldest brother was turning into a copy of his father, fat, already drinking, and a slave driver when he can. and he could then, Seth was working the days end, one after the other a job had been completed. at das end the list was complete. the next day seemed a repeat, struggling to get each job done, for days this went on, even when his parents came home he was working to keep in line.up until his 12 birthday his life was a living hell. for his birthday his uncle came to visit, but unlike all his other visit, his time he looked pail, and had a look in his eye seth had never seen before. his father undertood it well though, and laughing he said you found them... didnt you?" without another word they walked upstairs and into the master bedroom. the conversation the had though quickly became an argue that could be heard across the mansion. most of the household tried ther best to ignore it, but Seth listened to it from behind the door. the main thing he heard was "dials" and "combined it with" but the rest was muffled by the door. eventually he began to walk away, but not 10 steps out the door behind him flew open, the door handel in the wall, and his uncle walking out. his father was close behind, yelling "you take another step an ill put a contract out so big every hunter on the line will have there gun pointed at you!" not impeded whatsoever his brother seths uncle walked out of the building and to the docks. that night seth couldnt sleep, and he didnt need to for a knock on his door was opened to his uncle. without explanation of himself he ordered seth to be as silent as possible and to pack what he needed. in a few minutes seth was ready, and they were off. creeping down the stairs and out the door seth looked back and asked im never going to see them again am i?" and without an answer he said "good." the boat they left in was quick and in no time at all they arrived at a foresty island. the massive trees loomed over them and blocked most of the sky. eventually they started theough these looming giants, only stopping for drinks and meals, and after hours of hiking they made it to there destination. "what is it?" Seth asked, looking up at an iron wall sprawling across a cliffside blocking there way. with a chuckle his uncle answered you know how you always wanted to see my lab? well here you go." walking up to it the he reached for a nearby openening, and pushed a whole sectiob of the iron into an opening, like a sliding door. the inside of the cliff was larger than it semed possible. the ceiling couldnt be seen, and the wall were made of metal. sevral robots were working on crafting metals into difrent shapes. computer parts lay on the floor scattered and in the center of it all a was a large workbench with several two silver guantlets and two iron boots. "you see seth, your father was paying me to find a few dials for him, the amount he would have payed would have at least doubled the size of this place, but when i finnally found them, i grew curious. i tinkered with it all day and night, until finnally i figured it out." walking over to the workbench seths uncle picked up a guantlet and tossed it to him. "that guantlet is combined with a flame dial, and so are the others... try it on." slow and unsure seth slowly put the guanltet on. it felt like he like it was nothing at all, the design was excellent and even when he moved his fingers it felt like he wasnt wearing the silver guantlet. "its amazing" he cried out, still mezmerized by the fact his uncle made all of this. luaghing the man picked up the guantlet and the biits and tossed them to him calling "catch." Seth was only able to catch the first two, but the thid in hit him in the gut.quickly standing back up he out fitted himself with the armor. "you think thats amazing? try baling your hand into a fist,make sure you squeeze your palm tightly." after a few minutes of posing Seth's hand burst into a brilliant ball flames. "heh, your a real devil, kid." his uncle joked, but seth thought about those words for a bit, and said "yeah, and im no longer taking my fathers name. from now on ill be Seth Diablo" grinning from ear to ear he repeated the name over and over but not before they could celebrate any more a gun shot ran through the hall way, and seth's uncle went down. turning around to see who just killed the only family who ever loved him, he saw a man in a black claok and skelleton mask. ignoring the boy and the frenzying robots he walked over to the body and picked it up. "c y'all later heh, soru" and with that he was gone. diablo was thinking a thousand quiestions and thoughts right now, but all he could do was cry, pounding the ground he sobbed for a day straight, 24 hours he kneeled on the ground. eventually seth got up and had a glare in his eye, he was going to find this man and avenge his fathers death. turning around he walked out of the labratory and headed to make a raft "gotta get off this island first," for the next four years seth slowly became cheery again, his makeshift raft landed him on a harbor island, from there he jumped from boat to boat searching for work from time to time, and earning enough to feed himself. not only this but he was traning heavily with his guantlet every so often.
Personality: seth is usually a happy person. he's a little carefree, but he'll jump into action when he needs to or someone is in danger. he thinks of his friends as his family, since his old one treated him horribly. he tends to be giving to the poor, and he absolutly loathes the people who purpously hurt or steal from others. instead of having others call him Seth, he likes to be called diablos, for he hates his father and everything about him. if he heres anything about his parents or insults to his uncle or friends, he will usually end the conversation if its his freinds, restraining himself. continual provoking about his family will enventually make him fly into a rage, especially if its an enemy. his incounter with the cloaked man has also set him in a search, trying to find him and make him pay for his deed.
Ship Flag: a skull and crossbones chewing on a marine flag.
devil fruit: none
Special Abilities: complete control over the mera gauntlets and mera boots, increased strength, and speed beyond a normal human’s.
Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): 1: flare! (Throws a punch, and uses the gauntlet to light it on fire.) 2: blaze (a kick lit on fire by devil boots) 3: spiral (virtually a flare! But the attack fire is set to spin, acting like a drill.) 4: wildfire (a flurry of punches and kicks lit on fire by the gauntlet) 5: eruption (a powerful uppercut enhanced by the gauntlet to send an opponent flying 6: dancing sparks (Seth uses the gauntlet to set his feet on fire, increasing his speed and agility) 7: enflame (a punch with the gauntlet that sets anything it touched into a burst of flames) Anything beyond this point is unlearned 8: solar flare (a massively powered up version of flare) 9: solar storm (a massively powered up version of blaze) 10: nova blast(a massive blast of fire sent out from the gauntlet)
Weapons/Items: devil guantlets and boots
Goals: 1 To meet a group he can trust 2 To avenge his uncle’s death 3 to make his father pay for all the torture hes been through.
Last edited by redex556 on Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:56 pm; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : ill fix the history later) | |
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Frog Dragon
Posts : 1274 Join date : 2010-03-26 Age : 29 Location : Blarg
| Subject: Re: Seth diablo "the devil kid" Sun Feb 05, 2012 11:48 am | |
| Personality and appearance are both too short, and the glove thing requires approval.
The background kinda... doesn't make sense. Marines aren't mercenaries, and the father's actions don't really make sense either... if I read it correctly anyway, it'd pretty disconnected.
Stuff like "increased strength" needs definition.
I can't say much on the techs because they rely on an item that has not yet been approved. | |
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: Seth diablo "the devil kid" Sun Feb 05, 2012 11:51 am | |
| well, there goes that.... ill fix it blarg
the tech though, lasers, robots, robot replicating, but yeah if it needs fixing, ill get to it. this is why we need approval, to fix mistakes | |
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: Seth diablo "the devil kid" Sun Feb 05, 2012 6:17 pm | |
| fixed! anything else i need to do?
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Redex 1000
Posts : 419 Join date : 2011-01-20 Age : 27 Location : At a place not far from here... Here being right behind you.
| Subject: Re: Seth diablo "the devil kid" Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:56 pm | |
| re-reedited, approved weapon, changed history, edited to fit new info, ready and waiting | |
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Gael Admin
Posts : 3372 Join date : 2009-11-12 Age : 30 Location : I am at a place... doing stuff... with things.
| Subject: Re: Seth diablo "the devil kid" Sat Feb 18, 2012 11:36 pm | |
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