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PostSubject: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeFri Nov 11, 2011 11:15 am

Name: Trake "Springmonkey" Ruggo

Age: 16

Bounty: 2765 Belli (for multiple crimes against the marines)

Species: Human

Occupation: None

Allegiance: Pirate [The Clockwork Pirates]

Ocean: East Blue

Appearance: A tall,wiry boy-not fat nor extremely thin. He almost permanently wears a stupid grin. He has a mat of shaggy brown hair on his head and green eyes beneath. His exact height is 193 centimeters and he ways approximately 85kg. He usually wears a grey shirt with the words "I are the orb of of confusions" printed on its center in red. Black shorts that end 2 or 3 centimeters above the knees are worn on his legs. Lastly, dirty green shoes with white laces, that were made for skating, sit on his feet. A necklace of string wound around a tiny musket replica hangs around his neck

History: Life for Trake was boring and monotonous. His mother was beautiful and kind, his father caring and playful. He spent his life in good schools, with only a friend or two, but it was a good life. His last memories of his parents were the minutes before they were captured. The parents had taken Trake, the family dog and a day's worth of food out for a picnic. Within an hour of arriving at the beautiful spot in the woods, local police walked into the situation and dragged his mother and father away. He later learnt that they were the thieves reeking havoc in the town and that they had escaped jail.Twice.
The orphanage Trake was sent to was a place where Trake was constantly tormented as he did not want to live in a 5x5 room with another sweaty teenager for a great part of his childhood. He was only 15 when he managed to break out of the orphanage with no more than the clothes on his back...And he almost lost those as well.
Trake had already mourned for his parents over the two years he had been in the orphanage, but even being on the island brought back memories he wanted not to remember, so for this reason(and the fact that angry caretakers were running around crazy looking for a 15 year old) he stowed away on a merchant barge. On the barge, his hunger grew-but stowaways can't just go ask the ship's cook for food-so he quietly searched the smuggler's hold(which he was in)and found a fruit. His conscious surprisingly suggested he not eat it, but his mouth drooled at the sight of it. Soon he was sitting with an full stomach and snoring away. He was shortly found by the merchants when they made port. He was forced to work for a year without pay for stowing away, but when they were unloading goods, the package the fruit should have been in was very light. The boy was almost skinned alive, if it had not been for the newly found "spring" in his step that helped him jump from ship to shore-he would have died. He kept bouncing away from the merchant brig and the ensuing merchants with no control over his bounce. Soon the merchants ran out of steam- though they did not go to the marines as illegal merchandise merchants aren't to friendly with the fuzz. The boy lived on the island for a year, scratching a living by doing odd jobs and begging until he screwed things up by trying to steal a meal from a local restaurant, getting beaten up and breaking the door(but still managing to grab a pot and bounce away). When he was captured, he was turned over to the marines for a beating. He managed to flee, but was from then on branded a pirate.

Personality: A fun loving, food loving teenager. He loves cracking stupid jokes and laughing at them. He, like any typical teenage boy-is a total pervert. He is very lazy, forgetful and tends to procrastinate a lot. He has good morals but has done some things that would have made his mother cry.(Seeing as his mother was a thief, that must be some pretty bad stuff)He doesn't like to let people see him lose, but is not a sore loser.

Ship: None

Ship Flag:

Devil Fruit: Bane bane no mi Spring Spring Fruit
Type: Paramecia
Effect: Can turn the lower half of the legs and possibly the arm into springs that have the power to break objects and can propel the user at high speeds in a straight direction.

Special Abilities:
Stupid Joke Taunt: This is more of a weakness that he uses to put people off when they fight-by making stupid jokes that distract their thoughts and give him a bit more confidence, even when they don't laugh(which happens most of the time).

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
Slammer If good schools taught him anything, it was to punch really hard and run. This is what slammer is.
Spring Punch A punch that deals a great amount of damage as he launches himself straight at the opponent, only the downside is having to go in a direct line with no obstacles.
Spring Board A kick with his spring legs that deals massive damage to the object it hits.
Spring Sprung A jump that can throw the user hundreds of meters into the air in a straight line.

Weapons/Items:
A stolen flintlock pistol
A tanto
A tiny silver flintlock
A tiny silver sword

Character Flaws: Forgetfulness, hunger overcomes him easily, laziness, procrastination

Goals: To find out about the Charms of David Jon

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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeFri Nov 11, 2011 1:00 pm

Apart from a few nitpicks I have, this is really quite good.

Nevertheless, "Slammer" doesn't constitute a "Special ability". It should just be a technique.

Also, a few other nitpicks that don't affect the approval process. You'd think the bounty came from resisting arrest rather than petty theft. Also, 193cm and 75kg is really thin.
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeFri Nov 11, 2011 1:34 pm

Hehe, sorry about that-is 90kg the healthy weight?I'm putting up the bounty to 150
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeFri Nov 11, 2011 5:22 pm

If you want "wiry, but not super-thin" (and apparently not super-weak either), it'd probably be around 80kg or so. It's not really a big deal though. This is one piece, where F=ma is a loose guideline at best.
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeWed Nov 16, 2011 10:09 am

sorry about the late edit, had some PC probs...Hope it's okay now Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeWed Nov 16, 2011 10:56 am

APPROVED
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeWed Dec 21, 2011 8:51 pm

Bounty approval,2500 added for breaking from prison and causing quite a bit of damage
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeFri Jan 06, 2012 3:21 pm

Er..needs approval still
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeSun Jan 08, 2012 2:43 pm

approved
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PostSubject: Re: Trake   Trake Icon_minitimeSun Jan 08, 2012 3:05 pm

Thanks man
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