Captain One-eye
Posts : 970 Join date : 2011-03-06 Age : 27 Location : 'S-hertogenbosch, Netherlands
| Subject: raymond ''iron'' mountain Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:30 pm | |
| Name: raymond ''bronze'' mountainAge: 39 Bounty: none Species: human(1/6th cyborg) Occupation: vice admiral,captain. Allegiance: marines. Home Village/Ocean: east blue Appearance: History: raymond always expected much from his sons.he always tought they would become good marines,but 2 of them left the house,leaving cast.he intensly trained cast and cast began working under him.but some time ago cast also left for a life of piracy.lately he assembled a small crew to hunt down every pirate they meet or see.thanks to his sons taking a life of piracy he shows no mercy for them.many of his crew mates knew he had some emotion issues as he would get easily mad and crush the ship.years of training in the marine HQ contineud.he already had super human strenght,but he knew his sons had devil fruits so he would not stand a chance like that.he began learning rokoshiki and all kind of destructive moves.he also readed many books concerning devil fruits.he also learned rokoshiki(or however you call that)..now he looks not only for his sons,but also for every pirate with a high name. Personality: he has very little control over his emotions(and with that i mean he can get mad very quickly).he also is somehow laid back most of the time.Known for getting annoyed if there isn't something to do.likes to have a good fight.he also hates smartasses and people who think they are better then the avarage people..he also get very quickly mad,he could just shoot someone for walking against him. he likes it the most if he is in a quite serounding,and he hates big crowds.he also like cold seroundings,and cant stand hot seroundings. Ship: marine battleship Ship Flag: Devil Fruit: hito hito no mi,model:Talon Type: mythical zoan Effect: it can transform the user into a bronze giant of 25 feet tall. Special Abilities: super human strenght. Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): The Soru (剃, Soru?, literally meaning "Shave") allows the users to move at extremely high speeds in order to avoid attacksRankyaku "Sen" (嵐脚「線」, Rankyaku "Sen"?, literally meaning "Storm Leg: 'Line'"): Used in a stomping action. The air is blasted straight ahead in a line towards the opponent like a bullet, instead of in a curve as witnessed in the normal version.thanks to raymonds super human strenght it is 15 times as big giving it a very destructive power.The Tekkai (鉄塊, Tekkai?, literally meaning "Iron Mass") hardens the users' muscles to the level of iron, in order to nullify damage taken from attacks.The Geppo (月歩, Geppō?, literally meaning "Moon Step") allows the users to actually jump off the air itself, allowing them to stay in the air for much longer than usual.giant rankyaku ''sen'':the user performs a rankyaku ''sen'' in his giant state. (he got his rokushiki by training at the HQ.) Weapons/Items: metal glovesGoals: bringing pirates to justice. ((sorry if my spelling is bad..i am stuck with internet explorer instead of google chroom))
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| Subject: Re: raymond ''iron'' mountain Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:32 pm | |
| Could you make his history and personality longer? |
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| Subject: Re: raymond ''iron'' mountain Tue Jul 19, 2011 5:22 pm | |
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Captain One-eye
Posts : 970 Join date : 2011-03-06 Age : 27 Location : 'S-hertogenbosch, Netherlands
| Subject: Re: raymond ''iron'' mountain Sat Jul 23, 2011 9:43 am | |
| i have added a devil fruit. | |
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nikz200
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| Subject: Re: raymond ''iron'' mountain Sat Jul 23, 2011 9:47 am | |
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