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Lamont

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PostSubject: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeTue May 17, 2011 1:59 pm

Name: Phil Akera “Toolbox”

Age: 25

Bounty: 12,000,000 Beli

Species: Human

Occupation: Pirate; Shipwright; Swordsman

Allegiance:

Home Village/Ocean: Juniper Island, Grand Line

Appearance: Phil has green hair. He wears a blue T-shirt along with brown shorts and white boots. His blue T-shirt has the his own personal Jolly Roger on it. His shorts contain blue on the bottom and has a Jolly Roger on each pocket. His white boots have black heels with a Jolly Roger on the bottom. Akera has a skark tied around his arm and a necklace with a Jolly Roger as the pendant. He also has a shipwright’s belt with a place to hold his sword. The tool belt is brown with black spots on it.

History: Not much is known about Phil. When he was a kid, his mother and father left to be pirates. He had to live alone. Phil spent his childhood being an outcast from others. One day, news of his parents arrived at the village. Phil’s parents had been killed by Marines. Phil became very sad and was so depressed that he didn’t eat. He swore that he would one day honor his parents by being a pirate.

When he was 23 yrs old, he met a man. That man gave Phil a Devil Fruit which turned out was the Birudo Birudo no mi or the Build Build Fruit. To show his thanks for the Devil Fruit, Phil made a boat for that man.

One day, a man asked Phil a question. The question was "Do you miss your parents?" Hearing a question about his parents made Phil break into tears. Phil really missed his parents and told the man that. The man revealed himself to be a former Marine. Former Sergeant Genji told Phil that his parents were imprisoned and that they could die in a couple days or weeks. Finding this out Phil was both sad and relieved. He was glad his parents were still alive, but sad that they could die any second.

Phil asked Genji why he told him this. Genji said that he was actually Phil's older brother and tried to free his parents. Phil was shocked to hear this. He had never known that he had an older brother. Genji risked his rank in the Marines to help out his and Phil's parents. He asked Genji were his parents were held and he told him at a prison on a deserted island to torture them for fun. Genji joined Phil after that to guide him to his parents which made Akera happy. When they arrived at the island, they were to late. Their parents had died from poison. They found remains of food that they had been secretly eating. Phil found out that the Marines had poisoned the food when they came to the island to check if his parents had died yet and found a hole in which they could reach fruit.

Phil was so depressed. His heart was broken once again. Phil was reliving the sadness he felt when they told him his parents had died in a battle. He vanished for a couple months, but then came back to be a pirate with his brother.

Personality: Phil is usually in a happy mood. He hates it when people criticize his work. Once he gets mad it is hard to make him calm again. Phil gets depressed when his parents are mentioned. When people sneak up behind him him would use his hammer and slam it on that person's head. Phil hates to be interrupted when he is working. When you ask him to build something, he is always happy to do so.

Ship:

Jolly Roger:

Devil Fruit: Birudo Birudo no mi (Build Build Fruit) https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/t4018-birudo-birudo-no-mi
Type: Paramecia
Effect: The Build Build Fruit gives a person the ability to conjure building supplies such a wood or iron and use it to build something. It gives the user more building skill.

Special Abilities:

•Rapiddobirudo (Rapid Build)

Learned Techniques: N/A

Weapons/Items: Katana; Carpenter’s Hammer; Tool Belt

Goals:

•To become the greatest carpenter.


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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeTue May 17, 2011 3:03 pm

Everything is too short. Way too short.
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Lamont

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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeTue May 17, 2011 3:36 pm

Ok, I lengthened it.
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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeTue May 17, 2011 4:47 pm

Still too short, especially appearance and personality. History could use some more work. Who would he have a bounty, anyway? Also, I don't think you could just march into Mariejois, it's holy. It's where the nobles live. Guarded. Not a place for a pirate crew to go. And why were his parents there, and not, say, in a prison somewhere? If they were slaves, there would really be no reason for them to be executed. Killed for fun, yes. Executed, not so much.
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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeWed May 18, 2011 5:04 pm

I lengthened it more now and I edited the part about Mariejois, well deleted.
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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeWed May 18, 2011 8:20 pm

it looks in order, there is only the devil fruit to be approved
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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeWed May 18, 2011 8:37 pm

Ok
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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeThu May 19, 2011 3:55 pm

my deviuit has been aprroved
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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeThu May 19, 2011 8:33 pm

APPROVED then
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PostSubject: Re: Phil Akera   Phil Akera Icon_minitimeThu May 19, 2011 8:53 pm

Thanks!
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