Karasu(Ammo) WIP

REAPPROVED

REAPPROVED

Added theme song, titles, history, and occupation. His personality was also added/changed.

Edit- Also added new goal, and changed old ship since its the one in the crew ship.. and the old one got sunk down *looks at cob*

APPROVED

added to history, I was getting sick and tired of seeing NOTHING on there but the distant past.

APPROVED , unless stated otherwise by a senior mod or admin.

added last three special abilities, I'll start posting again soon (don't want to loose my title).

I dont see any problems with these abilities.

Hereby, I declare this RE-APPROVED.

those abilities arrant permissible, not if your going to insist karasu is anonymous with his status because it implies he is immune to that same special ability which is otherwise game-braking-ly overpowered in terms of in character knowlage

hmm I see your point, would you like me to give permission for everyone to know Karasus name then? By this point I wouldn't even mind, really, to stop being the 'face-less' warlord. If i give permission for others to know Karasu, would the ability be approved? Or would you rather me remove the ability all together and continue with being anonymous?

Also, forgot to mention I edited some of the other special abilities, please re-check them as well.

Took out Shichibukai title, since i forfeit it. Added bounty of 250,000,000 for several reasons. From greatest achievement to lowest.

- Ex-Shichibukai
- Fought two Unknown Pirates (before being interrupted, one died trying to kill the other but it was fired at Karasu.. long story, they were both under 20 in their rankings.)
- Liberated the island of Gold Valley on his own (proves he is dangerous)
- Defeated entire rookie crew on his own, and sent them to jail (PC's)(Also proves he is dangerous)
- Killed Ice DF user
- Defeated Roko Cloud (in rookie years)
- Defeated Light DF user

Re-approved

Edited his personality, goals and weakness, AND his theme song.. cuz he is not a justice man anymore.

Approved

Changed personality, and his goals. I only edited out some things.

RE-APPROVED. tho little details in such sections usually aren't not that critical for you to even worry about. But anyway, done~

Edited personality, and added Soru Image (technically). Long story short, Karasu has a technique that was approved in the past but that technique technically needed THIS technique for it to work. So it wouldn't make sense for me to have a technique that uses Soru Image without me actually having the technique officially. So yeah, sorry for the brain faq. I need this re-approved do to technicality issues revolving around having a new technique.

RE-APPROVED, everything seems fine.

Took out Solid Shot, Gas Shot, Mirage Bullet, Bullet Brigade, and Bullet Twister. I added four techniques, the four rokushiki under Soru Image are the new ones, which means I have one technique left to replace one of my earlier techniques. I also went into further detail with Acrobatics in the special abilities so people don't get confused with the things it can and can't do.

Need re-approval.