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PostSubject: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 06, 2011 11:23 pm

Name: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee

Age:17

Bounty:3,000,000 Beris

Species:human

Occupation: swordsmen/shipwright Steel village Pirates

Allegiance: Steel Village Pirates

Home:Born in East Blue (He travels through Grand Line and East Blue)

Appearance: Long Grey Hair with blue eyes,wears exactly Cloud's most rescent clothes except white with gold vine patterns on the shoulder plate,he is muscular but not tall. His physique is like Zolo's and he has his arms crossed or fists clenched a lot of the time. He weighs 225 lbs. and can lift 350lbs.his clothes get teared, but seem to go back to the way they are all the time.

History: He grew up wealthy, but then his parents were killed by a pissed-off pirate in a bar. That is when he started killing some people he gets mad at. He worked as a shipwright to get money for five years. He became very strong because of that. He used that money to buy a sword and a devil fruit (Shine Shine fruit.) He found the man locked up in Impel Down. He killed him and escaped the prison. He earned a 250,000 beris bounty from that. He earned the rest of his bounty for every live he has taken. He has gotten bored with life and travels around. He will do anything or join anyone for anyhting if they have a good reason. He had his ship made by a man named James "Old Rusty" Hardlock. He joined the steel village pirates, and hopes to be a division leader.

Sosutei recently joined Steel Village on breaking Kenjiro Nakamura free from a prison camp. He fought a powerful devil fruit user. He goes by Ben (teehee.) The navy man ate the paw paw fruit. He was a commodore. Sosutei defeated him and hurried to find Ken. He found Ken and got him medial help. Iken the captain of steel village let Sosutei start his own 6th division. He got a chore boy named Annachie Dawn to join. They are in Water 7 on a vacation. They are setting sail to Scarp island hoping to recruit new people.

Personality: He is short tempered. He is also very stubborn and hates losing. He will accept he is wrong if it is obvious. He finds himself often bored with anyhting. He won't make any friends only "allies" unless he really cares for them. He kills people he is mad at, but doesn't regret or like it. His part-time job of a shipwright made him mad at whoever wastes or destroys ships. He is compassionate for his captain. Kills at want. He recently created a hate for The Navy. His crewmate Dawn is a chore boy. He chose to be it. That made Sosutei sad to see a child voluntarily do labor.

Ship:Bright Sunny (donated to the steel village)

Flag:A skull with a samurai helmet and two katanas crossed below it.

Devil Fruit:Shine Shine Fruit
Abilities:look at fruit bio
Type:Paramecia

Special Abilities:Really good with a sword and very strong

Techniques: Shine: Uses his devil Fruit power on an something

Sun Saber:Uses shine on his sword

Burst of Light: Puts his body to blindness level to blind an enemy for awhile

Light Ray: Throws some object at someone while using shine on it

"I never lose": a 20-hit combo with a finishing slash on the chest (that will leave a mark forever)

Shave: Moves at a really fast speed almost teleporting

Burning Dawn: Stabs the ground with his blade at full shine level and a light burst comes out from under the enemy

Weapons: a sword with a flat sharp rectangle shape

Goals:To find something he will desire and love for the rest of his life
Use to be to kill his parents' killer (DONE)



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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 06, 2011 11:32 pm

Appearance needs to be longer. Personality needs to be longer. What does very strong mean??
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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 06, 2011 11:33 pm

he is muscular did you read the shipwright part
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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 06, 2011 11:40 pm

his physique is like Zoro doesnt cut it, make descriptions about his clothes and his hair color or height or weight?

the personality is fine
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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 06, 2011 11:46 pm

hmmmmm...... while your appearance is weird, i suppose i get what you are saying, your history is usually too short, but ill allow it.... all in all very borderline, and in the future improvement is needed, but for now, and btw Very strong means that im going to assume you can only break through wood, nothing thicker.

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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 06, 2011 11:49 pm

wood at most definitely


and I will prob spend a couple hours on my characters from now on thank you 4 advice
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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 27, 2011 10:33 am

needs reapproval
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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 27, 2011 10:34 am

what changes have you made?
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PostSubject: Re: Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee   Sosutei "Sunshine" Dee Icon_minitimeFri May 27, 2011 10:35 am

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