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PostSubject: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 11:52 am

Name:James "Old Rusty" Hardlock

Age:21

Bounty:500,000

Species:human

Occupation:Engineer

Allegiance: Flaming Sword Pirates

Home: a town in Jaya

Appearance: https://media.photobucket.com/image/recent/Zezomar/Steampunk_Engineer_by_byecanabiXxX-1.png (he is older and is caked with dust and steam)

History: He grew up somewhere in Jaya. He made weapons and armor for pirates. He also fixed and modified boats and ships. He says there is nothing he can't fix. He left on his own little motorboat and met up with the Demon Eye Pirates. He was so amazed by them he decided to join their crew. The reason he wants to accomplish his goal is because he has grown very poor and couldn't travel that much. James dad is a pirate. His mom was not employed. He made most of the money for his mom and him.

Personality: Nice and calm, he is always curious and is never negative. They call him Old Rusty because hes always in pain from his work. He is addicted to smoking. He is very confident in his work and loves to do it. When, he uses drill savage. He goes crazy and his personality changes from nice guy to you die now!!!!! He likes the crew, but dislikes the fact that they're taking down the government. He'll do it anyway.

Ship: Morning Dawn

Jolly Roger: A skull with flaming swords for crossbones

Devil Fruit:N/A

Abilities:Fix anything

Techniques: Drill savage (heheheheh......bwahahahaha):He goes crazy and stabs the person hes mad at or fighting with his drill many times.
Perfect shot:Pulls ot Gold Zero and shoots right where he aims.
Whiplash:Pulls out noodle rope and whiips peopple

Weapons:basic hand drill and Gold Zero and noodle rope

Goal: To make a worldwide teleporting system


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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 11:53 am

the image is way too young for 42
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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 11:57 am

changed
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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 12:08 pm

hello? retro? you are not a mod.. if you have something to tell him, you tell him by pm, otherwise, this is for the mods or admins
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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 12:08 pm

kk
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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 12:28 pm

all of thease descriptons are far to short, please lengthen all of them before your character can be considered

for example the abilities an technoques are named but have no explanations, the history, and personality are not even full paragraphs and need to explain more about the character
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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 1:34 pm

ready

the reason the history is short is because his life isn't near over he has more history to be written
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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 4:28 pm

Personality could be expanded a bit more.
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PostSubject: Re: James "Old Rusty" Hardlock   James "Old Rusty" Hardlock Icon_minitimeSun May 01, 2011 5:27 pm

Personality is still... less than spectacular... but whatever.

Approved.
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