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Captain One-eye
Posts : 970 Join date : 2011-03-06 Age : 27 Location : 'S-hertogenbosch, Netherlands
| Subject: meimu meimu fruit(new) Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:34 am | |
| Devil Fruit:meimu meimu fruit type:Paramecia the effect let's the user make illusions.
the user can make himself invisible whit an illusion the user has to touch the target to let him see the illusions(one touch is 7 illusions max) the max of illusions per person is 7(the max/illusions is not multipliable by touching someone twice,7 is the max the user can make illusions of anything(anything he/she has seen)) someone whit experience(min 10 threads using this power)can also(instead of touching)simply let someone see illusions when they make eye contact the illusions resets after 5 posts(so the user can use 7 illusions again) illusions are destroyed by cutting/shooting on it the user can cast illusions on multiple targets(but the user has to make 2 illusions,1 for each) the target is the only one who sees this illusions(together whit the user) illusions cant harm you physical/mental illusions can resemble anything as long as the user has seen it(also lifeless objects) when you cut/shoot an illusion the sword/bullet will pass threw the illusion(after that the illusion will disappear) the user can make illusions talk/make sound. when used much(i think 9 illusions but can be made bigger whit experience/power)it will take stamina illusions do not talk themselves,they do not have consciousness(so its like cryptic said they are the users puppets) the user has to touch everyone individual to effect them. the illusions can be as big as the use wants(since they cant harm someone,and when they are hit they disappear so it would only be a disadvantage)
*note illusions cant harm someone(otherwise they wouldn't be illusions lol)
types:
lifeless illusions:lifeless illusions based on lifeless objects.lifeless illusions cant talk/move.(nothing spacial about this type)
alive illusions:these are illusions that resemble alive animal/humans.these illusions can talk and move.special about the type is that the illusions that resemble quick animals can move quick,humans have normal speed(the user cannot choose that)
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GoreFish
Posts : 2909 Join date : 2010-05-01 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Sun Mar 06, 2011 2:37 pm | |
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Captain One-eye
Posts : 970 Join date : 2011-03-06 Age : 27 Location : 'S-hertogenbosch, Netherlands
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Sun Mar 06, 2011 7:23 pm | |
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keymaster
Posts : 4636 Join date : 2008-09-10 Age : 31 Location : Oh, out and about. Hither and Thither.
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:17 pm | |
| It seems okay, but illusions in an rp is a little tricky. You've made some okay drawbacks but perhaps a sort of [in dnd terms] 'Will Save' to prevent being caught in it would help. It's so-so as it is but it's not drawbacks/conditions we need right now, it's a little more of an in-depth description of the actual ability. Can the illusions harm the opponent? What is the extent of the things they see? Does it include sounds? How long (in posts) does it last? You're pretty close, just answer those questions. | |
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Captain One-eye
Posts : 970 Join date : 2011-03-06 Age : 27 Location : 'S-hertogenbosch, Netherlands
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Mon Mar 07, 2011 6:38 pm | |
| i made it a little bit more harder to use(prevents god-mod) | |
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Cryptic Terror
Posts : 1070 Join date : 2010-05-09
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:21 pm | |
| I think you need to select a category of illusions. This is entirely too broad. Does the source of the illusions derive from the victim's life experiences or are they entirely arbitrary? if they can be gathered from the experiences of the victim, that implies a sort of telepathy which is not allowed.
If the illusions can speak, do they do so with a consciousness or are they merely puppets given dialogue from the user only?What is the database for these illusions? Are they taken from places the user has been and things the user has seen or are they a construct of the user's imagination?
Can everyone be effected or does the user have to touch each person so they enter a sort of dream sequence that no one around them can detect unless they are also touched? How are the illusions destroyed?
Environmental illusions seem as though would be substantially more powerful than just making animate objects superimposed onto one's current environment, since you can use the landscapes to make people take long walks off of short cliffs if you play with the landscape cleverly. There should be some sort of limitations on landscapes vs animate objects as separate sorts of illusions. It should be particularly limiting or even draining to the user in some way to use them in tandem.
To make this workable, you need to separate the kinds of illusions and give them all effects and limitations individually. What you have is too broad and unbound. You need to organize it, elaborate, and put a leash on it. This fruit has the potential to be very unfair very quickly. It needs a lot more work. | |
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Captain One-eye
Posts : 970 Join date : 2011-03-06 Age : 27 Location : 'S-hertogenbosch, Netherlands
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:06 am | |
| this should be ok
it took me 2 days i hope its good. and cryptic thx for the patients and im sorry for making so much mistakes. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:48 pm | |
| One quick question, do the illusions effect all the senses until they are broken? |
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Captain One-eye
Posts : 970 Join date : 2011-03-06 Age : 27 Location : 'S-hertogenbosch, Netherlands
| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:50 pm | |
| no only it only controls the senses see/hear | |
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| Subject: Re: meimu meimu fruit(new) Wed Mar 09, 2011 9:50 pm | |
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