Subject: Allen "The Lightning Savior" Helling Sun Jan 02, 2011 1:07 pm
I WOULD LIKE TO DELETE THIS CHARACTHER
Last edited by Devil2day on Sun May 01, 2011 1:31 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Starting from scratch :D)
nikz200
Posts : 7605 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 34 Location : Malaysia
Subject: Re: Allen "The Lightning Savior" Helling Sun Jan 02, 2011 1:24 pm
The lightning Devil fruit is called Goro- Goro No mi, just reminding you, also, i need you to give up one of your rokushiki elements, as to avoid this character from being too overpowered, that is all
Guest Guest
Subject: Done :D Sun Jan 02, 2011 5:35 pm
nikz200 wrote:
The lightning Devil fruit is called Goro- Goro No mi, just reminding you, also, i need you to give up one of your rokushiki elements, as to avoid this character from being too overpowered, that is all
I did fear for it to be overpowered so I did actually remove 2 rokushiki and changed the name of the devilfruit is it good now
GoreFish
Posts : 2909 Join date : 2010-05-01 Age : 30
Subject: Re: Allen "The Lightning Savior" Helling Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:42 pm
Hey dude, how about adding a little to appearance and personality? Or... forming full sentences, in the case of the latter. It's a bit lacking this way.
Guest Guest
Subject: thx <3 Sun Jan 02, 2011 6:49 pm
GoreFish wrote:
Hey dude, how about adding a little to appearance and personality? Or... forming full sentences, in the case of the latter. It's a bit lacking this way.
First, not dude, lass or girlie, second thanks so much for the feedback I will fix all of the required and also a little on history since iforgot to tell how he got hte devilfruit, I'm actually drawing a picture for the apperance part and the personality was very weak I know, but it's really late in my country almost midnight and I finished some hours ago, so I will fix it as soon as possible
Sun Jan 02, 2011 1:07 pm
so I did actually remove 2 rokushiki and changed the name of the devilfruit 
