Major Payne

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Name: Major Payne
Nickname: Pain, The Marines Hades, The Marines 1 Man Army, The Blue Marine, Marine Fire
Age:45
Gender:Male
Race: Human
Height: 6'5
Weight: 250
Affiliation: Marine
Rank: Ex-Admiral
Profession:Martial Artist
Position: Ex-Leader of the Marines 1st division
Theme Song:Burning Justice
Vessel: The Great White
Hometown: Unknown
Hair: Gray
Eyes: Black
Physique: Muscular, Fit, normal size.
Clothing: Wears a Long black coat with a white marine sign on the back of it. He keeps it half way unzipped at all times.

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Personality Payne is not one to be ready to fight instantly. Even if some opens fire on him. He is still very very very calm. Although he seems like a mild mannered man. Payne has a temper problem. When Payne is angry, people say its like he's a completely different person. This alternate personality is what people call "Pain"! Pain is a very ruthless, and violent person. He even uses his devil fruit power on his own comrades if they don't move out the way. Pain will have control over Payne until he has fulfilled his objective.

History Payne as a child always wanted to become a Marine. Ever since a group of Pirates killed his Older brother, who was a Royal Shichibukai. Payne never forgave Pirates after they ruthlessly murdered his Brother when he was sick. Payne then vowed that he would rid the entire Earth of Pirates! By any means necessary, on that day...Pain was born. At the age of 10, Payne knew he wouldn't be able to fulfill his dream if he stayed the way he was. So he sought out power. Payne heard stories about the power of a Devil Fruit. And he over heard some pirates talking about what a big steal they got on getting there hands on a very Rare Devil fruit. Payne dashed towards the Pirates Ship and made him self a stow away on the Ship. He brought along a Snail Dial so that he could contact the Marines so they could apprehend the pirates after he was done with them. Payne searched high and low for were the Devil Fruit could have been hidden. And to be to his surprise it was right in the normal storage area. Payne opened the box that contained the Devil fruit and began to eat the Devil fruit quickly. After Eating it whole. Payne felt a hot sensation go right through his body. Panicking, Payne through his arms to the side and created a small, but powerful pillar of Fire. That burned right through the upper floor of the ship. The Pirates quickly rushed down too see what had happened in the cellular of the Ship. The Captain was the first to see the Kid had eaten the Devil fruit. The Captain then ordered all his crew mates to abandon ship, But Pain wasn't going to allow that. Pain Then clapped his hands together and began to form a giant ball of fire. He then sent off a giant ball of fire in the direction of the Pirates, burning them all to ashes. At that time, Pain had taken over Payne completely. He called in to the Marines so they could come clean up the mess, and then waited for them to make it the Ship. When the Marines made it to the Ship, Vice Admiral Kage was the first to see Payne. He looked at the young boy emerged in flames. With a wicked stare in his eyes. Kage turned around and began walking towards the ship they came on after the captured the remaining pirates. "If you want to become truly strong..then come..." With that, Payne followed Kage onto the ship, and sailed back to Marine HQ. Twenty years had passed and Payne had learned how to control Pain to an extent. Which now made him even stronger! His Devil Fruit powers had increased by 100 times since he first ate the fruit, due to Kages vigorous training. His physical ability to run, and jump had also increased due to Vice Admiral Neol's hard training. Payne had finally reached his peak. He mastered his Devil fruit, and his body had reached extreme limits!

Current Events:

The Attack On Water 7

Payne had been sailing with the 1st Marines Division for the past ten weeks on these tides. Patrolling, watching Water 7 closely. Although he was assigned this. He actually wished to do it. Major Payne, Vice-Admiral and hopefully Admiral. With the Promotion he was hoping to get soon, had been watching these waters for the time being just for fun. He knew that since the attack and escape from Imperial down had accorded. More exciting things were likely to happen. So he chose to stay here. From a distance, Payne felt the presence of a strong pirate. It was burning with rage. Payne then set a course in the direction he felt the pirate. He'd deal with this in a heart beat.

After arriving on the Island. Payne came in counter with Manta, a very skilled Pirate. They had a quiet tight end battle, until Payne had to continue with his previous goal. To bring the peace in the area. Manta then took Payne to the scene of the crime, but before they made it. They encountered Gary O Daniel, a Pirate, but also a friend towards the Marines in a since. Captain Unholy, an extremely dangerous and powerful pirate, was causing a ruckus. Payne and Gary both knew how powerful Unholy was even with out his crew. So they had no choice but to work together.

After a long drawn out battle, Payne was able to once and for all kill Unholy by throwing a flaming spear straight through him. Officially killing, The great Pirate Unholy, but at the same time. Gary sacrificed his life. As Unholy fell to the ground greatly injured. Payne turned his attention to the second threat, Maximillion. Another very powerful and dangerous pirate. Payne then made the next goal was to capture Maximillion and report him captured. A HUGE heated battle between Maximillion and Payne broke out until Maximillion over used his new found Devil Fruit ability and tired him self out. Thus, Payne successfully captured Maximillion.

The Great War
After getting sent to an Island not far from Sabaody. Payne, working with Admiral Nikishi and other Marines. Were ordered to take back the Island from the Pirates and make it a base for the Marines. While in this war, Payne went toe to toe with numerous pirates such as the Rookie pirate Anbuis, The Yonkou, Leon Lexus, and a Rookie Pirate Dorian D. Herron. The battle was a success and the Island was taken over by the Marines once again.

Forming a Crew
After showing his "excellent" leadership skills. Payne was given the job of commanding the very 1st Division of the Marines. He recruited some rather power Marines.

The Battle on Alabasta
After so Long, Payne was called into duty by a distress call from Vice Admiral Gideon to help fight the Pirate threat on Alabasta. Payne now marches into Alabasta, ready to save as many lives as possible. Payne, along with 50 of his Marines headed out towards Alurbana. He sent his two Elite soldiers of his ship Steven and Spencer, along with 50 soldiers out towards the Desert in search of any Pirate reinforcements. Payne then made it to Alurbana and met up with Ashely, a fellow Marine at the Palace of Alurbana. Payne then ordered his men to barricade and protect the back of the palace. While him and Ashely guarded the front gates.

-He Captured a Powerful Pirate Maxulus
-He's taken part in numerous Wars and Battle Threads.
-He has a powerful 1st Division Crew.

Combat Payne mainly focuses On his Devil fruit powers to fight. He has completely master the fighting style Rokushiki, in every way. He mainly only uses Soru, to evade attacks at most. He really only relies on his Devil fruit powers, due to his laziness towards fighting.

Speed Payne has developed incredible speed over the years. Despite his old age. Payne has shown enough speed even with out Soru to catch up to a Soru user. Payne, when serious, can at times out speed a Soru user, but only for brief moments. Payne's speed has been said to be so intense he's been able to disappear from clear sight and reappear in another location. Payne's speed is one of his greatest traits.

StrengthPayne's physical strength is incredible. He's been said to be able to knock out a Giant with a single kick if in the right spot. Payne's physical strength is that to be recon with.

Hand to Hand Combat Payne's hand to hand combat is that of a master level. When up close, Payne preforms his best. Payne knows various ways to feint attack, out smart, and defend while using just his fist and legs. Payne's close combat fighting is enough to match people who are skilled with swords, spears and what not and still hold his ground.

Payne: Devil Fruit More, Rokushiki Less

Pain: Devil Fruit Less, Rokushiki More

Weaponry N/A

Devil Fruit Name: Mera Mera no Mi
Devil Fruit Type: Logia
Devil Fruit Ability: allows the user to create and control fire.

Abilities and Powers:

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Speed: Payne's own personal speed is incredible. He can keep up with very fast opponents even with out the use of Soru. Though he can't out run them. He can just catch them if there running, or keep up with them. Even that of people who specialize in speed.

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Physical Strength: Payne's physical strength is probably his most dangerous feature. With out his devil fruit, Payne's strength serves as a deadly weapon. Payne's physical strength is that of a Teenage Giant. Being able to knock out a Full Grown Giant in a single kick if he hits them in the right spot or hits them hard enough. Payne can easily take out a large opponent with ease. His Physical strength is one thing he's truly famous for.

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Hand to Hand Combat: Fighting Styles:Payne doesn't necessarily have a fighting Style. He knows different Twai Quan Do moves, Kung Fu, and Basic Fighting Techniques. He normally uses his legs when he's fighting, but when he's serious, he uses his arms as well. Payne's hand to hand fighting skills are probably the best in the Navy.

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Endurance and Determination: Payne has a very strong will. Meaning even after taking huge amounts of damage. He'll stand and fight depending on the reason on why he's fighting. Once Payne wants to protect something whole heatedly, he won't go down until he knows its safe. Payne can take in things such as deadly poison, and lack of water, and still fight in tip top shape. He won't show effects of it, if it actually did something that is, until he's alone.

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Encouragement: Payne is a born leader. He knows just what to say to  get some one to want to continue fighting. Even if all looks lost, Payne can strike hope into even the most broken of spirits. Payne's own spirit is one that uplifts even the driest of hearts.

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Marskmenship and Sniping: Payne seems to have one hell of an eye and steady aim. He is able to shoot a target from the opposite side of the battlefield head on, even in a moments notice. He can shoot even very small targets, such as cans, barrels, and cannon balls.

Techniques:

Flame Stream
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: Payne shoots a stream of fire from the palm of his hand

Flame Fist
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stat: Payne forms fire into his fist and launches it as a column of fire at his target

Fire Rifle
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stat: Pointing the index and middle fingers of both hands at an opponent like guns, Payne forms fire around his  fingertips and shoots bullets (made of fire) at them.

Flame Sea
Type: Supportive
Range: Close
Stat: Payne amasses a large amount of flames around his body (usually by first swinging his outstretched hand around him, summoning the flames) in preparation for an attack.

Great Flame Pillar
Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Range: Close/ Long
Stat: Used following Flame Commandment. Payne shoots the collected flames straight upward, destroying a target above him


Great Flame Needle
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stat:Payne launches two long lances made of fire at his opponent's chest. The lances have the combined effect of simultaneously burning an opponent while piercing their chest.


Great Flame Sea
Type: Offensive
Range: Close/Long
Stat: A stronger version of Flame Sea where Payne summons great spiraling flames centered on his location before amassing it at a focused point. Payne activates this move by first bending his knees slightly and then placing the outstretched palm of his hand towards the ground (with his other hand gripping the wrist for support), where the flames manifest.


Sun
Type: Mid Range
Range: Mid range
Stat: Panye creates a gigantic fireball resembling the sun. It can go to about 20 feet. Payne then  hurls it at his opponent to try to obliterate them.

Marrior Blaze
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Stat: Payne releases a firewall to block off an attack.

Flame Dome
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Close
Stat: Payne will begin to spin around with his hands on fire, while shooting fire straight into the sky, thus, he will start to create a giant dome of Fire.


Flame Storm
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stat: Payne will first protect him self by using Flame Pillar. He will then disappear with in the fire. Leaving his wear bout's unknown to his opponent. He will Then form fire around his hands , and will begin to fire off Giant Fire balls. That will break off into smaller fire balls. That break into even smaller fire balls, about the size of Marbles. He will constantly fire the Giant Fire balls off in a Gatling gun manner, causing it to feel like a horrible Rain Storm. But with Fire.

Burning Blade Spin:Payne will spin around but at the same time, extend both his arms out vertically. At that, he will shoot out a slim stream of fire. The fires is hot enough to burn straight through human flesh, but not anything highly durable like metal or steel. Unless Payne takes time to charge the attack (2 post)


Blazing Cannon:Payne will place his left arm on his right arm and send Fire from his left arm to his right fist. While charging flames also with the knuckles of his right fist. Once the attack is ready, Payne fires off a Fire ball the size of a Cannon ball at his opponents. The Attack then completely engulfs the enemies upper torso and begins to burn them alive. (This attack takes 1 post to charge)

Hell's Path:Payne will run across the ground, leaving a 2 foot wide path of fire on the ground.

Hell's PrisonPayne will use Soru to first preform Hell's Path in 3 full circles around his opponent. He will then raise his arms up and create a huge dome roofless dome of fire. Trapping his opponents. Anything that's not human will be incinerated while going through the flames. Any human will begin to melt. (The Attack last for 10 post. The it will diminish and Payne must wait 10 extra post to do the attack again.)

Satan's Sigh:Payne will inhale deeply and then exhale, sending off a huge blast of Fire. The Blast will continue for how ever long Payne inhale (1-2 post). Payne can stop the attack instantly if needed.

Satan's Grasp:Payne will extend his left or right arm out and send off a arm and hand of fire. The Fire is temporarily hot enough to burn straight through every strong material such as Bone and Steel. Payne will then grab hold of a human and cause very harmful injures to his opponent. Its not enough to tare the bone off. But enough to cause server damage.

Hell's Cyclone:Payne with extend his right leg upwards and will surround it entirely of flames, hot enough to melt steel. Payne has limited control while doing the attack. The only way to hit some one is to catch them off guard or to counter it by completely stopping, and starting the attack again.

Sun God:Payne will surround his entire body in flames. Causing any one or thing that touches him to burn them self servilely. If touched for to long, they can be easily and quickly burned to ashes. This mode can be held for (12 post, then Payne has to have a 20 post cool down).

Heat Breath:Payne will breath out extremely hot air. The air is so hot it practically dehydrates any human being with in Payne's general Area.

Hell's Full Body Search:Payne will use Soru to dash pass his opponent. As he does that, He quickly pats down his opponent with flames all around his arms and hands. Thus, Payne Snaps his fingers and the flames that are all around his opponents body expand to resemble Payne's Sun God mode. Not an inch of their body is visible.

Satan's Boomerang:Payne with set his entire arm of fire. Thus, he will spin around at a 60 degree angle and send off a arm length boomerang of Fire. The boomerang is hot enough to slice to steel if its with in 1 mile of Payne. Any father it will just do the damage of a mare sword.

Blue Flame:Payne will cross his arms across his chest and slowly set his entire body on fire. After a sort period of time. Payne will throw his arms back down to his sides and they will burst into Blue Flames. This flame is able to slice through even the hardest of substances like butter. Payne can then use 3 FLAME of his moves before he has to stop using the attack before he loses consciousness. (He can use 3 Moves total, it doesn't matter how many post are between when he used them. Once he uses the 3 moves he must wait for 5 post. After he's used this technique 3 times. He can no longer use it for the rest of the thread.)

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Marine Fire: This move is an extremely deadly move. Payne Starts by shooting a giant Blue Flaming fire ball into the sky. He then heats it up to approximately 1,000-3,000 degree's. This move takes 1 post to charge before he can launch it. After he makes the fire ball. He shapes it into the emblem that's seen on the Marine Flag. He then pushes it down towards his target. In attempt to obliterate them.

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Blazing Gorilla:Payne will create a enormous fire ball and will then jump inside it. He'll then shape the fire from inside and make it into a Flame Suit for Fire. The Fire then starts to slightly thicken into a thick substance, making it a flame Suit. Payne can then use the suit like a flaming battle armor. This such as Swords, Bullets, and Shock waves nullify in the fire before it can actually reach Payne. Payne can hold this mode for as long as he wants. The down fall is, all his flame based attacks DRAMATICALLY lessen in strength for 5 post.

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Flame Chains:Payne will shoot out think streams of fire through his fingers. He can choose to shoot them out of all of his fingers, or just one. After he fires them out to about 10 feet. He keeps shooting fire through the streams until it gets thicker, and, thus, he'll turn them into chains. Allowing him to tie them around his opponents like real chains. Except they will burn his opponent.

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Jet Blast:Payne will cross his arms and surround them in fire. He'll then shoot off a foot ball size fire ball in the shape of a paper airplane. The blast moves so fast it resembles the speed of a jet plane. (550 mph tops)

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Flame Tornado: Payne will shoot fire onto the ground from his hands and feet as he spins around. He'll then raise the Flames and let the oxygen keep the fire going as he pushes it in the direction of his opponent. The move will then pick up any human being or object that isn't heavy enough to withstand the attack.

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Fire Path:Payne will fire off a large pillar of fire out of his arm.

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Fire Path: Travel:Payne will then travel inside his Fire Path, moving at a whopping 150 mph. It's very good for sneak attacks since you can't hear his foot steps, and He can control the pillar while he's inside it to strike instantly with fire.

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Fire Pole:Payne will shoot a stream of fire out of his index finger and middle finger as there pressed together to make a thick stream of fire. He'll then shape the fire into a pole.

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Fire Scythe:Following Fire Pole, Payne will send fire to the top of the Pole he just made, heating up to a intense 1,000 degrees, allowing him to burn through heavy metal. He'll then swing the sword down to make the fire move to the back of the blade, thus turning the pole into a Scythe.

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Pirate Hunter:Payne will increase the size of his blade to about 10 feet on his Scythe and the heat of the blade by 1,000 degrees, making it a total of 2,000 degree's tops. Payne will then attempt to slice his opponent or target clean in half.

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Shichibukai Hunter A move powerful version of Pirate hunter. This time the blade is increased by 20 feet, making it a total of 26 feet long. The degree's is increased by 500 degree's, making it a total of 2,500 degree's.

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Yonkou Hunter:This is the strongest of the 3 Hunter moves. Payne will increase the blades length by 30 feet! He'll then increase its degree's to as hot as his flames can get. Which is a top 3,000 degree's!

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Satan's C4:Payne will create a fire ball the size of a chair. He'll then send it flying into the air vertically towards his opponent. Payne will then cause the Fire Ball to explode and send off smaller fire balls that are able to burn straight through human bone like butter.

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Giant C4:The same as Satan's C4, but at a MUCH larger scale. Its about the size of a city garbage dumpster. The smaller fire balls are the size of chairs.

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Burning Raptor:Payne will begin running towards his opponent. With flames shaped like Raptor claws on his index finger and big toes. He'll then attempt to claw his opponents with his index fingers, or his big toes.

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Flying Fire: Payne will shoot fire from out the souls of his feet, his palms, his hands, and occasionally out his mouth. These flames allow him to fly.


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Rokushiki Techniques:

Iron Mass: Empty Tree
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Stat: This form of Tekkai is used entirely as a counter, where the purpose isn't to absorb damage from the attack, but to transfer the shock of the attack back to the attacker, which can lead to broken bones in a normal human body.

Iron Mass: Strength
Type: Defensive
Range:Close
Stat: The move differs from the ordinary Tekkai in that the user visually tenses his body even further while standing still; the ordinary Tekkai could be activated seamlessly. It is his most powerful form of Tekkai.

Iron Mass: Smash
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid range
Stat: After using Tekkai to harden his body, the user then uses Geppou to project himself towards his opponent, attempting to smash them.

Shave: Razor
Type: Defensive
Range: Mid Range
Stat:A combination of Geppou and Soru, where the user uses Soru in a zigzag motion in midair, allowing extremely fast movement in 3 dimensions.

Shigan: Yellow Lotus
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stat: This attack is simply a rapid-fire version of the normal Shigan technique.

Shigan:Finger Gun
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stat: A is a close-quarter combat technique, in which the user pushes their finger into a certain target at very high speed, leaving a wound similar to a bullet wound, making guns unnecessary.

Storm Leg: Giant Bird
Type: Offensive
Range:Long
Stat: The User creates a large Rankyaku in the shape of a bird.

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Soru: Mach 1:Payne will use an advanced level of Soru, which is approximately 750 mph. This technique is used to cover ground, or keep up with one of great speed.

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Soru: Mach 1 Iron Halt:Payne will use Mach 1, and then use Tekkai on his fist or entire left leg and foot. This attack can be used to be offensive and attack his opponent with incredible strength, or defensive, and be used to stop something moving at great speeds.

Applying for the Shichibukai rank then? I'll let Admin-sama handle this. Was there anything in the Shichibukai thread about allowing elemental transformations with logia fruits?

I don't think so...ask him

oh hey itachi get the hell out of one piece!

Im geting sick of people doing this and Im going to make a rule against it

Well....all flame aside [I know, bad joke], Besides the obvious copywrite on picture it seems to play out nicely. A few things that need some stuff:

Add a text description of your own
Submit this character in the Shickibachi sign-up thread
And I've been here long enough to know that logia turning user into element is not allowed. Admins prove me wrong if I am, seeing as this is a Shickibachi [if that has any exemption to this rule]

Even though I am not Admin, I know that Logia transformations are not allowed period, considering it would be auto-dodging, a big no-no in Role Play.

my mods speak the truth, also the rule has been made

o.o eeer...


what if I can only dodge Bullets and Swords...

Fist fighting can harm me..

Idk >.<

The only reason why I need him to turn some of his body parts into fire is because he turns his lower body into fire so he can fly..

and his fist into fire so he can fire off attacks o.o

Well, for the fist for firing off attacks, you could shroud your fist with fire, then fire it, or project fire off of your fist in the shape of a fist.

You really won't be able to fly any other way. Avoiding anything automatically is godmodding, and you can't do that.

Only possible way you could fly is if the Mera Mera no Mii allowed you to create a platform of fire, then make it tangible to you and only you. Then you could control it for flight. But I do not think you can do that. Admin-Sama or Irrational would need to help me out.

Then how did Ace fly? D:<

Okay I'll edit the turning into fire part..

I don't think he flies... he propels a raft with his fire for transportation.

hmm..probably right..

Did I take that out?

Yes, you did. Simply submit him for a Shichibukai position in the thread in General Discussion. Then I think you're good...

Wait a sec... only pirates can be Shichibukai, right?

Admin-Sama, can I have confirmation on that?

correct, pirates or ex marenes

So sorry, you can't be a Vice Admiral AND a Shichibukai. Apologies.

Then what is Hawk Eye? O.o

Juracule Mihawk is not nor has he ever been a marene, where did such a notion even present itself

http://onepiece.wikia.com/wiki/Juracule_Mihawk

Yeah...I just read the Shichibukai guide thing on that site..

But is he okay to RP now o.o

I'll just edit more of his moves while I rp..

well itachi this character is pretty strong... and itachi

Admin-Sama, look! Itachi's gone!!! And replaced by someone else...

Well, history corresponds with rank, moves fixed, hopefully applied for position... can you switch the age he obtained the rank to the proper 25 instead of 15?

Sure...I was thinking that too..

I wanted him to be young..

but no to to young...

Thanks Gael :3

I haven't approved it yet...

If you fixed the age, great, but you still need to apply for the position of Shichibukai in the appropriate thread in General Discussion. Then I think you're ready.

I knw o.o I'm just waitin

Approved?