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Noxan

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PostSubject: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeThu Apr 08, 2010 6:49 pm

Name: Straught "Rusty" Armstrong

Age: 35

Bounty: 15,000 Belli

Species: Human

Occupation: Uh, well he's just a wall o' muscle so probably 1st mate, 2nd mate XD up to them what title they wanna put on him.

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Grand Line

Appearance: I took a great deal of time looking for this picture because I always want everyone to know exactly what my character is gonna look like,
but I have a few problems with this picture, first off it doesn't give you his hight, which is 7'3" and the other thing it does not show is his hair, he has a mowhawk and no hat. Other than those two small issues this picture is EXACT so thank you XD.
Rusty FINICO!!! Rusty

History:
-Rusty was a very fit young man so he was a carpendar in his earlier years
-Pirates destroyed the village he worked hard to fix and maintain
-Rusty took revenge by stealing the pirates prized fruit and ate it too get back at them
-Rusty could no longer work as a carpendar because whatever he touched became rusty and feeble
-Rusty vowed vengance against all pirates and enlisted as a bounty hunter in the navy
-After killing countless pirates for many years Rusty came accrossed a young ship builder who reminded him of himself at that age
-Rusty refused to kill the kid, so the Marines put a bounty upon his head
-After a few weeks in refuge Rusty had learned the crew the kid took refuge in had been destroyed.
-Rusty changed sides and is now hunting down marines.

Personality: He is very sturn and all business, he shows no fear or emotion, he uses this to hide his intelligence, Rusty uses his superior intellect to out think his opponents in a fight to give him an advantage. He stays very level headed and does not let his emotions get the best of him. The one thing that he will tell countlessly time after time is that, He does not back down from a fight.

Ship: name of ship

Ship Flag: describe

Devil Fruit: Sabi Sabi no Mi
type: Paramecia
effect: Allows the user to instantly rust any object. In the anime the user can also rust someone's body.

Special Abilities: Soru, Superhuman Strength

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Vulcan Fist: A powerful punch capable of denting even the strongest metal. Clean Chop: Rusty's manly physique makes his chops so lethal he can chop though 5ft. Diameter boulders. Double Vulcan: Rusty gathers all his strength and stands in a horse stance (Knees bent kinda like sitting w/o a chair) the forces all his strength into his thrust, he is unsure how strong this is he has only used it once on an old navy ship...there was not enough wreckage to salvage for him to gauge his power.

Weapons/Items: Brass Knuckles and Leather gloves with the palms torn out. (To keep him from rusting the Knucks if they got rusted that would be counter perductive now wouldn't it Very Happy)

Goals: To rid the world of all marines


Last edited by Noxan on Fri Apr 09, 2010 11:08 pm; edited 5 times in total (Reason for editing : Just finishing)
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Noxan

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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 09, 2010 6:24 am

Bump, why did everyone elses get looked at :*( Lol...

pirat Back to serious face....no seriously
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Kaname




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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 09, 2010 3:33 pm

Uhh, yeah I think that history needs some "MAJOR" work... along with personality.

Umm for ship and shipflag maybe put N/A...

(Sorry if this bother you but I guess theres no rule about non mods posting in topics cause im seeing everyone do it)

Also Appearance can use alot of work, like more detail... weight...etc.

And 1st mate and second mate isnt an occupation. its a position.
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Noxan

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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 09, 2010 5:18 pm

Uh your not a mod gtfo with your face
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Gael
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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 09, 2010 8:00 pm

Oh, there is a bit of a rule, Kaname, so, please don't do it anymore. InTents just doesn't seem to care, really.

Your personality COULD do with some work.

History is... okay. I just like it in paragraph format.

The appearance is perfectly fine.

And occupations/positions are the same.
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Noxan

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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 09, 2010 11:10 pm

updated and thanks for the input, not you Kaname, your face is still not welcome here
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Kaname




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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 09, 2010 11:22 pm

Umm, organize the techs. better.
History..its very un discriptive...and should be in paragraph form..

And umm, you might as well make his bounty 0..why 15,000?..thats awfully low
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Irrational
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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeSat Apr 10, 2010 1:27 am

((Kaname, you have been warned once. You will not be warned again.))

But the fool is right about your character history. It should be in paragraph form.
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Noxan

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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeSat Apr 10, 2010 1:39 pm

In paragraph form it will be very difficult to follow, I tend to trail off after about 100 words and it becomes undescriptive and full of rambling.
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Kaname




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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeSat Apr 10, 2010 2:16 pm

Sorry


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Gael
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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeSat Apr 10, 2010 2:30 pm

Kaname, if you plan to advertise all the time, get out.
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InTents

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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeSat Apr 10, 2010 2:36 pm

Honestly, I don't want to but in, but I think this might be someone trying to hack Kaname's account.
As annoying as Kaname is, I don't think anyone would be dumb enugh to make a character, try to be a decent member, and then suddenly start advertising for a site in every place possible.


Then again, he could have gotten frustrated here and decided that he could make a better forum, and changed to spamming this place up.
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PostSubject: Re: Rusty FINICO!!!   Rusty FINICO!!! Icon_minitimeSun Apr 11, 2010 3:22 pm

Okay, you seem fine now. If you don't want to write in paragraph format, I guess you're

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