Grendil D. Blackthorn \

Name: Grendil D. Blackthorn "The Nightmare Demon"

Age: Late 20s

Bounty: 23,000,000 Belli

Species: Human

Occupation: (none)

Allegiance: Pirate

Home/Village: East Blue a nomad (no village)

Appearance:Large Height Medium Muscle size dark blue eyes wears a black coat like the captains of marine cloaks just black and with no markings on them wears a white shirt and grayish black paints with a brown belt has 12 scars on his back from the slavers beating him and whipping him has 1 under both his left and right eye from the fight with the giant.

History: In his younger age Grendil had much more spirit in his birth Grendil was abandon after his mother gave birth to him his father not knowing he had a son went on as a marine Grendil was raised by a small nomadic tribe travailing from east, west, and south blue he had a nice childhood up till the age of 11 when his nomadic parents had died of a plague that had sweeps the east blue and killing most of the tribe witch made him bitter for the world to do it that him he was 1 of the 9 survives only 5 survives were children rest were adults who have seeing the death of the tribe and to go into isolation then instanty then suicide the 5 children had then decide to start the tribe over and rebuild they had it good for 4 years till pirates came and took all of them into slavery Grendil was sold into gladiators were he learned to fight and kill making him even more bitter than his younger age on his 19 birthday they arena master said if he won this fight he would be set free but his opponent was the great giant Redix who had the score of 100 kills and 0 loses so his fight came he was nervous but ready to die 1 swing of Redix club he dodged feeling weird emotion charged the giant pulled up his sword and slashed his way to his heart taking blows from the giants mighty club refusing to die and the giant saw him right about to plunge the sword into him screaming "no the nightmare make it over the demon is going to kill me STOP THE NIGHTMARE DEMON" the giant died and so from there on the "Nightmare Demon" lived in the hearts of all who watched that the moment in time he gained his freedom after that fight he had killed 1 of the worlds greatest giants and now was a enemy of giants after that he had went to Alabasta and planned his next move but he met a Sea king on the way there and Fought the seeking awhile nether would surrender till Grendil forced it in unconscious using Nightmare and had helped it heal its wounds from there battle and then left it but it woke up and saw the help it got from him and wouldn’t let him leave and they stayed friends Grendil named the Sea king Gorr for the gruesome way he fought that day they met but 1 year later a storm broke them up and then he lost all happiness he truly had but he still wouldn’t rest till he found his old friends then he headed to Alabasta training and searching for the friends he missed but before he got to Alabasta he had met up with a captain of the marines who was the great old friend of Redix and long time fan wanting to kill him shot a cannon ball at his raft barley missing Grendil head Grendil saw that he was a giant got enraged and went into Nightmare and had charged the boat breaking a hole in the middle sinking it he saw the captain and had tossed him into the water were he had drowned and finally made it to the great country Alabasta but was a marine killer and had bin awarded a bounty for it hiding in Alabasta he quietly watched the civilians and wished he could be like them happy and no nightmares to haunt him and he stayed there in the dark places of Alabasta till now

Personality: Grendil is a vary Gloomy person from the parents and friends he lost at younger age he doesn’t ever laugh no 1 has ever seen him laugh even in his child years he has smiled but rarely and only in a case were he’s about to die or feels lonely he is usually sad or lonely but he is never nervous or guilty he is so serious it seems like when he’s saying a serious thing it sounds like a joke he hates marines and slavers marines for not saving his friends and slavers for selling his friends and him he admires pirates for living on the edge of life he dose also live on the edge of life but more than usually pirates do he doesn’t care if he dies since people die all the time when he’s mad usually goes into blind rage but rarely gets mad since nothing matters to him.

Ship: old raft

Ship Flag: (none)

Devil Fruit: (none)
Type: (none)
Effect: (none)

Special Abilities:
(Nightmare) goes into a dream like state while he still controls his body but feels no pain and his sense are enlightened more for the short period of time grows claws muscles grow out veins start to bulge his breath gives off a toxin that indecencies nightmares used in the fight between Redix and Grendil also gains great agility not as much as The Blackened Heart

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
(Claw of the King Beast) He gets calm and focus on a body part (muscles, organ, or joint)
And then aims for that spot while his fist grow larger and his fingers look like claws and then attacks
(Call of the Den Horror) Strikes fear into the hearts of who ever hears the roar it makes Grendil unaware of the things around him till the roar had ended
(The Lonely Ghost)Made when his friends were taken he becomes almost invisible as a ghost and cant be in the light or effect loses can only use ability when he was as sad as when his friends left or when he is feeling lonely like the only person on earth
(The Blackened Heart) Sad for all his close friends and family leaving him he he goes into a dark mind of his place were he becomes a Half Nightmare and will not care what he dose he will even kill children he goes into this state usually at night when he cannot sleep or is in a dark place like caves he has great agility and speed in this state were he can barely even be seen if he’s In the dark if in the light he looks like just a blur like the wind had just passed

Weapons/Items:
Knuckle Claws "Demon Claws"(waiting to be approved)

Goals: To find the 4 friends he had lost a child from the slave traders and to find the old Sea king Gorr his old friend and to suppress the evil inside his heart or to let it die with him

The ability's you have described him to be capable of would not be possible without a Devil Fruit, If you could make a fruit for this character that explain his powers, Then I might be able to approve this.

just a suggestion for the future. USE PERIODS! it is very difficult to read a paragraph with no periods. Dont worry about it for this char since Iggy has already read over him. but in the future, periods would make it easier for the admins to read.

HOLY CRAP MY EYES! THE LINES! THEY MEL;D TOGETHER INTO WHAT CAN ONLY BE DESCRIBED AS INSANITY! QUICK CALL HE WHO WILL SURPASS GOD TO DEFEAT IT!

((someone better freakin get this...))

crap i did post this i forgot to add some things but i guess that's cool ill try to add this into the devil fruit reason i didn't want to post it was i wanted to add description/picture of him in his transformation and in normal form

you know it seems needless to have poison DF for both your weapons AND you dose it not? why not give yourself the DF and just spred your poison on to the weapons?

i guess that work i just like the idea of the sword is all but besides that ill just delete post with sword if i can delete it also with the periods thing im bad at grammar so i have no idea when to add them or not

I have that problem to (dyslexia)

i don't have that problem admin-sama just i saw at anything involving writing and grammar

read it back to yourself, and anywhere you take a breath, add a period, or at least a comma.

and admin-sama, dyslexia is not grammar, it is when people rearrange letters and sometimes words. making it very difficult to learn to read. However, it can be overcome with practice. usually dyslexia will not mess with grammar unless it's a really bad case.

what doyou think I spent 2 years doing?

well if your problem was bad grammar then you obviously didn't have dyslexia. I'm assuming you meant your problems were related, but if so you should have said they were related, not that they were the same problem, which they aren't.