Dome Dome no Mi

Name: Dome Dome no Mi (From Hadome meaning Brake so Brake Brake Fruit)
Type: Paramecia
Abilities: Dome Dome no Mi is a Paramecia type Devil Fruit that turns the user into a brake man. The user upon activating his fruit power may stop anything he is in contact with from moving, like a brake stops a vehicle. For example, the user may use the ability on ships he is standing on to prevent them from moving away no matter what. The ability may also be used on people to prevent them from moving. The user can also use his brake ability from a distance. The way to do so is very simple. The user has to establish brakes and the way is none other than leaving something from his body on anything. For example, a droplet from the user's blood is enough to be treated as if the user is in contact with the person he wishes to use his ability on and stop them. The ability also seems to have the ability to be used offensively. Just like when a brake is pushed in a car which is running in high speeds and causes those who are inside it to be dropped with great force, if the user uses the ability on somebody who is running with superhuman speed, their body will freeze but their muscles will still want to move forward, resulting into using the kinetic energy of the superhuman speed technique against the user to perform a pressure attack on their bodies as the muscles will still keep moving, even if they actually can't. This makes the ability useful enough against people who are fighting based on their speed, their superhuman speed. The ability can be used on multiple people at once as long as the proper conditions are fulfilled.
Disadvantages: The main disadvantage of the fruit is that those who are affected by the ability do not freeze completely. They just cannot move. In the case of logia users or a few paramecia users, they can still activate their powers to generate their elements although the control would be less for techniques that require the movement of hands. Also, techniques like Tekkai which do not require movement can still be used.

Maxulus wrote:

They just cannot move.

I would like some more explanation and detail about that one.~

Those affected by the powers of Dome Dome no Mi are forced by the Brakeman to not move at all, just like a vehicle stops moving because of the brakes.

So, they can't move hands or anythin else, they are completely stopped from makin a move? That does seem a bit dangerous to use, considerin that a single drop of blood allows the user to activate the brake effect.

YEap, they can't move. But as I said in the disadvantages, in the case of a logia, they can still create fire from their bodies. And a Tekkai user may still use Tekkai.

Well, the thing is that, non-fruit users or rokushiki ones are rendered helpless. (Although, you can easily just remind me that EVERYONE in this site have rokushiki/an element, for some reason~)
I mean, I know you, how you roleplay and so on, I know that you are not the type of person that overpowers a thing, you are always balanced and capable of bein fair and skilled, it's just .. this fruit seems hard to be used without bein overpowered to at least some extent. You understand how I mean it, right? Maybe if it would only affect the lower body parts, for example, waist down? It's still powerful and wrecks speed users, but also allows the afflicted not to be completely crippled if lackin the above skills.

1)lol for the line

2)I don't want to change that part cause that is the main power of the fruit combat-wise. Do you have something else in your mind that could work as a substitute for the main power? Also, this effect is applied by Noro Noro no Mi and I think it is in a much worse scale than the Brake Brake Fruit as the target is clearly defenseless. And from the Time Time Fruit the site has.

Shadow, I hope you don't mind if I step in this one just to help out.

The site will not allow a character with the noro noro beam to exist with its full potential, you and me both know that. We know that whoever is even trusted with this fruit will have to make some very drastic changes to accept the character with this, because it's very easy to hit someone that is holding still, or moving slowly, if it's even for one post. As for the time time fruit, it's outdated, you know this so I don't know why you brought it up (assuming we are talking about the one from Kaiser yonku, the most godmodding player this site has ever seen).

Back to your fruit. You want us to allow someone to physically make someone else stop moving, with zero limitations other then physical contact. No arms moving, no legs moving nada.. so basically, any physical character that takes pride in his strength, no matter how strong or how focused he is on his strength, will basically hold still from this fruit? Even with decent limitations, a fruit that is focused on making someone an easy target to hit (because the majority of people here aren't tanks that are used to holding still and taking a beating) will probably own most people. I mean, alright, we have some logia users and paramecia users (myself included). But not every zoan can shoot a lazer beam from his mouth, and not everyone can create lazers without moving a single muscle. Not to mention there are the obvious ways to make this fruit even more overpowered just by the sheer lack of limitations.

I'm not saying this fruit isn't acceptable as an idea, but it needs to be less capable of killing every character that depends on movement as a means of fighting. Whatever you think you should add should make it more.. capable of being used in the site.

What about making it impossible for the user to move while using the power on the whole body of the enemy and be capable of moving while using the fruit only when he is using the power partially (as Shad0w suggested)

Explain this in better details. Like, say, what partial would mean and the limitations that using the powers partially will have on the opponent. It might need a duration and a cool-down, depending on these explanations.

I mean. The user may stop the hand body parts from moving or the leg body parts but the rest may move unaffected.

It's still hard to approve a fruit that basically means the user can auto stop any movement the opponent can do with his will because the user touched the opponent ONCE. Any way you look at it, it's a shady area. He can either stop him completely, or stop him partially while the user moves freely. If the technique needed a connection for the technique, like say.. a chain or something, or a link that's similar to a string that can somewhat be seen, then I'd approve this.

That would ruin the offensive part of the fruit. It would require to be fast with the user in order to catch the enemies, then use it. The main point of the brake fruit is to instantly stop the superhuman speed enemies and the faster they are, they more they are damaged by the fruit's effects.

Also, you got the effect wrong. It's not a person that has been touched. If a droplet of blood of the user is on the enemy, then the brake ability can be activated. Anything that comes from the user's body.

What about making it impossible for the fruit user to run as well? (meaning that he may run with regular human speeds). That way, a superhuman speed user would have to fight the user by avoiding him and performing ranged attacks.

the only thing left from the fruit then, is the potential for anyone to come and kill whoever is frozen by this devil fruit. Exp:

Karasu has the devil fruit and paralyzes someone with this devil fruit, that someone was very tough to get because he is fast. Now we are both frozen. Now Maximillion shows up and kills the paralyzed enemy for Karasu, Karasu can apparently insta kill anyone he wants after the opponent gets hit once by his saliva/blood.