Danielle Bordane

Name: Danielle Bordane

Age:17

Occupation: Bartender

Alligance/Side: Citizen

Appearance:  Danielle is fairly short for her age. She has very light grayish-blue hair. Her hangs freely, except for her bang which are pulled back. She has very smooth and fine skin. She is curvy in an attractive kind of way, being that she isn't to fat or skinny. She has short arms, and decent length legs. Since she works in a tavern, she is usually found wearing an apron over common casual clothing for a woman her age.(Eg. a blouse and long pants, a short sleeveless dress, etc.)

History: She grew up in Loguetown, East Blue. She grew helping her family keep up their family tavern/inn. She is childhood friends with Hokori Shingai. She now is the co-owner of her family tavern with her sister Joanne.

Personality: She is very kind and patient. Danielle loves to just talk and enjoy good times.  She will do anything to keep her tavern going. She doesn't hate pirates or the navy. She just wishes everyone could get along.

Goal: Keep her family tavern in business, and have its business booming

If this is still a WIP, please mark it as such. Otherwise, here's my critique:

1) You need to describe the appearance of your character. Use of copyrighted material, such as Mirajane Strauss, is not permitted.

2) It might be nice to give more info as to the background of your character.

3) The personality could use a bit more description.

If I am not wrong tho, Jory-san, this is the NPC section, so it is alright.

In any way, he is right about the image. Copyrighted material can't be uses for NPCs either.

Yes, I saw the image, which is from FT, after I posted that above, you are correct.

Sorry, since it was an NPC, I was just being lazy. Quickly fixed