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PostSubject: The Dedicated Detective   The Dedicated Detective Icon_minitimeSun Dec 16, 2012 4:42 am

Name: Crona Seeker

Age: 17

Bounty: N/A

Species: Human

Occupation: Detective / Informant

Allegiance: Not a Pirate or a Marine

Home Village/Ocean: West Blue

Appearance: The Dedicated Detective Img-thing? Standing at a height of 5''4, Crona brings her pet dog Noir everywhere she goes. He is a large black canine with vague red stripes on his tail, and his coat is as tough as iron (but as soft as a pillow)

History: Crona was just another unwanted orphan in her village. She often wandered around with her pet dog, Noir, in an attempt to find a job or food. At times when she couldn’t find food for herself or her pet she would steal food from the market or from people’s gardens. Because of this she was usually chased out of the village by residents and into the woods, where Crona and Noir fought for survival against other animals. It didn't take long for Crona to hate her life, she wondered why she was born an orphan. She was told by the elders that her dad went missing after going on an exploration, and her mother had died after birth. However, this all changed when she received a letter from an anonymous source informing her that she had an older brother.

Its been 4 years now since Crona and Noir found that letter. Over the years they've gathered information from newspapers in the garbage, gossip from the villagers, and stories from passing by pirates. After desperatly searching for clues and hints about her brother's whereabouts, Crona finds an old picture of a young boy playing with a puppy. This puppy had red stripes on it's tail, it was Noir. Crona immediately realized it was her older brother, and now that she knows how he looks like she decides to set out to sea with an abandoned pirate ship she found on the shore north of the village. She hopes that by finding her brother she can finally fill in the lonely void in her heart and live happily with her sibling.

Personality: Although she can have a crude sense of humor, Crona is very optimistic and encouraging to people with big ambitions. When she really wants something she may bribe the person into getting it or waits for the perfect time to snatch it. Since she grew up alone and hated by most people in her village, it's hard for her to trust or make friends with anyone. Her biggest pet peeve is when people litter or spit in front of her, when angered she orders her dog, Noir, to chase after them. She hates it when people underestimate her and becomes very serious when called a 'kid'.

Ship: A fairly large and old broken down ship.

Ship Flag: She sails with a white flag to show she's not a threat.

Learned Techniques:

*Has an excellent memory and persuasive skills.

*Never forgets a person’s face, voice, or name.

*Noir usually fights her battles, tearing at her enemies and picking up any loose loot he finds.

Weapons/Items:

*She keeps a picture of her brother with her at all times for encouragement.

*Carries around a small metal dagger.

Goals: To reunite with her long-lost older brother.

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Last edited by Health Candy on Tue Dec 18, 2012 1:32 am; edited 9 times in total (Reason for editing : longer history and personality)
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PostSubject: Re: The Dedicated Detective   The Dedicated Detective Icon_minitimeSun Dec 16, 2012 5:16 am

The length of history and personality need to be longer- personality should be at least 4 lines long, and history would preferably be two paragraphs or more
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PostSubject: Re: The Dedicated Detective   The Dedicated Detective Icon_minitimeSun Dec 16, 2012 4:27 pm

added more personality and history
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PostSubject: Re: The Dedicated Detective   The Dedicated Detective Icon_minitimeMon Dec 17, 2012 8:53 pm

When I said 4 lines of personality, I meant four solid lines
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PostSubject: Re: The Dedicated Detective   The Dedicated Detective Icon_minitimeTue Dec 18, 2012 1:30 am

WHEW! I extended the personality - With A DON! ~~
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PostSubject: Re: The Dedicated Detective   The Dedicated Detective Icon_minitimeSat Dec 22, 2012 7:59 pm

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PostSubject: Re: The Dedicated Detective   The Dedicated Detective Icon_minitimeMon Dec 24, 2012 4:06 am

Jimmy-Rustler wrote:
approved

Woot! *jumps with joy* cheers
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