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joeyjoey61297

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Join date : 2012-11-12
Age : 34
Location : The Windwalker.

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PostSubject: Joe Kidd Character Sheet   Joe Kidd Character Sheet Icon_minitimeMon Nov 12, 2012 9:35 pm

Name:Joe Kidd "Blade"
Gender: Female
Age: 24
Bounty:none
Funds:50,000,000
Species: Human
Occupation: Swordsman and Smith(can make weapons and parts. Also as a smith she can repair most things that are metal.)
Specialization: Santoryu and Nitoryu sword styles.
Allegiance:Blizzard Pirates
Home Ocean: East Blue

Body:5'10" weighing in at 176 pounds. She has a very smooth and light tanned skin tone. She is an athlete so she has a naturally built body strong and sturdy. Joe has a very curvy body that would be appealing to most men.
Face:She has a small head that has beautiful cheek bones and cute dimples as she smiles. Her lips are soft to the touch and a bright red color. Her eyes are hazel, with a light green on the outside of the pupil.
Hair: Joe has wavy dark brown hair of silk that is soft as snow. It is straightened at the top it slowly curls as it reaches around her mid back.
Non visual info: Her voice is soft and flirty. She can sing with wide varieties of range in her voice from high to low.
Tattoos:She has a spiral design on her right thigh. She also plans to get a tattoo of her crew when she finds ones Jolly Roger.

Clothing: She wears skinny jeans cut off high above her knees. She always wears flip flops that rap around her ankles. For shirts she wears a long sleeved white shirt with a different colored bikini tight to her chest that exposes her abs and covers her breasts perfectly. On her wrists she wears metal guards that have a flowered design that she made herself. No matter what though she always carries her weapons no matter what 3 on her waist and one long sword on her back. The only other clothes that she has which is completely different is a long purple dress that goes down to her ankles and as a finish she puts a bright yellow daisy in her hair.

History: Joe's past is something that she rarely talks about and will only share with her captain and the one she loves. Here it is Joe was born in east blue. Her mother died 2 years after she was born so Joe never really knew her. But she lived with her father till the age of 14 by then Joe had become a amazing blacksmith thanks to her dad, but her father had become ill and on his death bed gave to his daughter the sword they had made together. But a year later Joe had found out that her father hadn't become ill but was poisoned by a assassin hired by a corrupt man. Joe knows that the only reason her father was murdered was because he was planning on going to the grand line,but the only problem was that he owed a lot of money to some people and trying to flee to the grand line was his last resort. The man that killed Joe's dad was a loan shark but Joe doesn't know who this man is or where he is. Joe missses him to this day but she will stay strong for the day she meets his killer.
After several years had passed Joe met a swordsman that knew her father, after talking to the man for a while, he said that he would take her in and teach her to use swords so she can protect herself. So this man trained day in and day out to help her. Joe started thinking this man was like her father. He closed the wounds that Joe's father had made when he died, her master had made her feel much better since her fathers passing. After many years had passed and Joe turned 24 her master told her that she was ready to leave the island and go explore and do something fun with her life. Now she is a skilled swords man ready for the open sea, just looking for a crew that will take her.

Personality:Calm and collective. Doesn't do things without thinking them through very smart and brave, will do anything for her friends. Flirty and kind when it comes to everyone especially people in need she has a want to help them the best she can. She doesn't believe in killing unless it's necessary. Joe is an optimist she believes everything will work out as long as you have the will and determination to go on and reach your goals. Though she gets scared when it comes to thinking of poisons so she takes caution when excepting things from other people.

Ship:The Windwalker

Devil Fruit: Kaze Kaze no Mi(Wind)
type: Logia
effect:Create, and manipulate wind
Special Abilities: Joe is very Agile and strong she can cut through almost anything except for diamond. Her best feature though is she is like an acrobat she can do flips and things during combat.

Learned Techniques she is very good with swords she uses her powers to make the swords even more deadly.
Pressure Blast: Throws a small ball of compressed air. Causes similar effects to Pressure Bullet, but more powerful and less accurate.
Pressure Bullet: Joe fires a condensed burst of air that travels at high speed, can cause internal damage if hit repeatedly.
Air Slash: Joe uses a strong current of wind in a cutting action, strong enough to slice and attack many foes as if using a sword, this move has large range, but is much more effective with a sword in hand.
Kamikaze (Divine Wind): A full powered attack that summons a powerful blast of air with tornado force winds and can clear a small battle field of medium strength opponents. Requires concentration and preparation time.

Weapons/Items: 3 Katana's and 1 broad sword.

Goals: Being in the pirate kings crew


Last edited by joeyjoey61297 on Thu Dec 20, 2012 3:59 pm; edited 14 times in total (Reason for editing : Minor imperfections)
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Join date : 2011-05-24
Age : 27
Location : Peru

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PostSubject: Re: Joe Kidd Character Sheet   Joe Kidd Character Sheet Icon_minitimeMon Nov 12, 2012 11:52 pm

You have mixed the advanced and core sections of the site to make a different character sheet. We dont use post counts or stats in the main section so, it is rendered useless.

Apart from that, please make it two paragraphs for your history. Also.. her story is extremely tragical. Try to make it a little more realistic Wink Also, explain why she has a 100 belli bounty.

Another aspect in the history would be: Why would anyone want to assasin her father. You havent explained any reasons why someone would even consider it.

Also, for your items. You do not explain how you got them and those items belong to other people. If you want to use an item someone else has created you need to find a way their character's gave it to you or that if it's, for example, a legendary sword, that you found it. But you need their permission.

Please edit =)
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PostSubject: Re: Joe Kidd Character Sheet   Joe Kidd Character Sheet Icon_minitimeTue Nov 13, 2012 7:27 am

I redid it tell me what u think
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PostSubject: Re: Joe Kidd Character Sheet   Joe Kidd Character Sheet Icon_minitimeWed Nov 14, 2012 10:07 am

You understand you can't become an element here yes? Other then that it seems fine to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Joe Kidd Character Sheet   Joe Kidd Character Sheet Icon_minitimeWed Nov 14, 2012 6:51 pm

Approved?
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PostSubject: Re: Joe Kidd Character Sheet   Joe Kidd Character Sheet Icon_minitimeWed Nov 14, 2012 8:58 pm

So long as you understand you can't become your element, yes approved.
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