Frozen
Posts : 744
Join date : 2012-06-20
Age : 25
Location : England
 | Subject: Amnesia  Sat Sep 01, 2012 4:00 pm | |
| I was writing a story yesterday and felt like sharing it with you guys so far I have only one chapter but It will soon expand, enjoy. ^^ AMNESIA Chapter 1: Morning! - Spoiler:
Rain tapped against Jake's glass window, a dark cloud blanket began to cover the town of Mind Ville. Jake was just lying on his bed listening to his pop music like normally, however instead of paying attention to the music which was blasting into his ears he was more interested in the weather outside. The weather channel said that it was going to be a sunny day but meh you can't really trust those dumb weather reporters, Jake turned off the music and got off his bed he began to stretch and yawn. He then exited his room and made his way down the stairs, he entered the kitchen and began to make himself some toast. It was really dull since his parents left him with his lazy grandpa who spent his days sleeping on the couch. "Be a lad and pour me some coffee will ya!" his grandpa yelled from the living room, Jake got out a cup an began to pour some coffee he had heated earlier. "Yes, grandpa!" Jake replied as he began to add 4 sugars into the coffee. His grandpa was quite a sweet tooth and preferred his coffee sweet, Jake entered the living room and carefully placed the coffee onto the table in-front of the couch. He then he went back in the kitchen and began to spread some butter over his bread, once he was finished he began to placed the toast into his mouth and picked up an apple from the fruit basket.
He entered the living room and sat on the chair nearest to the window, he began to slowly eat at his toast while he stared out the window. Another morning in the town of Mind Ville.
Chapter 2: The Amnesia Man - Spoiler:
Once Jake finished his toast he picked up his apple and exited the room, he then approached the front door and slipped on his rain coat. He reached for his umbrella and picked it up, "Im gonna go get the groceries!" he yelled as opened the door. He then closed the door and pulled up his hood, he slipped his apple into his mouth and opened his umbrella once he finished opening his umbrella he began to eat his apple.
As Jake walked on the wet roads he began think about his dear parents, why did he leave him?, why his grandpa why not his uncle? Many thoughts rushed through Jake's mind but only one question mattered to him the most "Who were they?" He had only seen his parent's in pictures but he had never seen how they act.
Jake suddenly dropped his apple onto the ground, "Ugh..." he muttered as he continued his journey to the store. The store was just around the bend but Jake caught sight of a drunken man who happened to suddenly drop onto the road, Jake quickly ran towards the man on the street and quickly began to call for help. Jake then began to take a closer look at the man.... his heart suddenly skipped a beat and sweat started to come down his forehead....it was his.......father.
Chapter 3:The Mysterious Man - Spoiler:
Jake began to chuckle a little, he was thinking waay to much how can his father be here when he left him a few years ago. People began to crowd around the two men. "Stand back please I am a doctor..." one man said as he pushed through the crowd and examine the man. "Hmm, this man needs to rest, I will be taking him to Mind Hospital for further treatment..." the man said as he slowly lifted the man putting his left arm over his neck. Jake stared at the doctor as he took the man away, who was this man and why does he look like his father
Jake then remembered that he needed to visit the shop so he got up and began to sprint towards the store. The rain began to get heavier and the store was just in sight, once he arrived it happened to be closed. "Baka,Baka,Baka you wasted too much time on that stupid man..." Jake thought as he began to walk back to his house still wondering about the mysterious man he had encountered before.
Chapter 4: Parents - Spoiler:
Jake soon arrived at the front door of his house, he closed his umbrella and opened the door. He then closed it behind him and began to take off his coat, he chucked his umbrella next to the door and began to make his way to his room. Once he was inside his room he jumped onto his bed and began to think about his so called "parents", he thought back to the time where they left him.....
"Mummy, Daddy where are you going?" the 6 year old Jake said, "Somewhere special darling" his mum said with a smile on his face. His dad
began to chuckle as he slipped on his coat and put on his hat, "We will be back real soon son" his dad said.
"Ok but you better be back soon cause I wanna play!" as soon as Jake said those exact words his parents suddenly left him.
"Eh, where is the food you little dog!?" his grandpa yelled from downstairs, Jake then suddenly remembered that he didn't bring any food. He began to sigh and then said "The store was closed so I couldn't make it!" with this Jake got off his bed and began to make his way downstairs he was off to see his so called father...
Chapter 5: Renuion | |
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