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PostSubject: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSat Mar 17, 2012 11:18 am

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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun Mar 18, 2012 9:21 am

Personality: Yui is a very determined man. He seems to be very brave in fighting, and strongly putting thought into his attacks. Yui would never get cocky. He would think that a foe has a element of 'surprise' waiting. Yui sometimes gets mad in a comical way, but things like that get by him easily. Yui would remember a lot of serious things, but fade out on the pathetic things. Yui is a practical swordsmen, that has no fear in death. But when Yui has a goal he won't let it down so easily. He would carry it on and trying to not die. Even if he bleed badly, he would carry himself and move on. Yui doesn't stay in the past, he moves on forward. With his own two feet, he carry's on.


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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun Mar 18, 2012 10:35 am

Wow this is a very interesting character. :O I like em! He belongs to me <_< *Steals*
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun Mar 18, 2012 5:27 pm

:O Then get a mod to approve it and he joins your crew
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun Mar 18, 2012 6:01 pm

The history is screwed up. No six-year old can lift 1000 pounds, I don't care what you say. His bounty increase is too small for fighting and killing a marine force likely in the realm of forty to fifty people. One million at the least.

How is he both hotheaded, while not being cocky? They invite each other to the dining table that is the human psyche. You can't be hotheaded while not being cocky, and vice versa.

I'll chew out the moves separately.
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun Mar 18, 2012 6:21 pm

He's right. Lower the body significantly man..maybe like 350,000 would be good...

I've worked on the moves with him and he's gutting the techniques completely. We made him some new ones. So he should be good..
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun Mar 18, 2012 6:50 pm

k done
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun Mar 18, 2012 7:00 pm

the bounty...
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 7:17 am

done
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 4:05 pm

TBL, while your intentions are noble... again, why are you posting in other peoples apps? No one other than a mod or admin or the person who created the app can post here.
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeTue Mar 20, 2012 8:16 pm

since your a mod YOU check it
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeWed Mar 28, 2012 7:55 am

nikz......
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeWed Mar 28, 2012 9:47 am

APPROVED
but your special abilities part leaves a bit to be concerned. Endurance is not a talent, and exactly how many hits can he take? What about a fatal blow? Will he live after that?
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PostSubject: Re: Yui   Yui Icon_minitimeSun May 06, 2012 5:46 pm

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