A Song By Unholy

I wrote this song after my last break up. It's suppose to be a rock song I think its pretty good but would like more opinion's.

Memorizing Lies
Memorize me with your lips pressing against mine...
Hearing your soft Whispering Lies I close my eyes and I'm Blind...

When I catch you in those stupid Lies the Hate in your eyes Make your Face Blush!
A Vibrant Red Glowing With Rage, As You Turn Away Your Cheating And Lieeees! Twisting my Miiiinnnnd!!!!
I'd Tear out my eyes, but I hide in the dark corners of my mind.

I Hate How they always hurt me... I twist and turn! Never again Never again I Screeam!!!'

Bloody sweat dripping down my trembling chest.. Thrusting a blade into my skin into my flesh and out the otherside!
My Putrid sin's make me feel alive!
Tears Remain Frozen inside...

Toss me aside and Never look back. You used me and now I'm Trash.
All you did was treat me like shit
Even if you where pretty and had big tit's fuck you!!!.... fuck you....

Memorize me with your lips pressing against mine...
Hearing your soft Whispering Lies I close my eyes and I'm Blind...

(Info)
That basically the song repeat for another verse. Um it's kinda hard to get across the actual way you sing the song with mere words. So use you imagination lol
PS Dont steal cuz that's lame =(

awesome song o:

I like it a lot XD

"Even if you where pretty and had big tit's fuck you!!!.... fuck you...."
best sentence, ever.

Imagining Chester Bennington singing those lyrics...Epic XD