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PostSubject: "kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff   "kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff Icon_minitimeTue Jan 10, 2012 4:22 pm

Name:"kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff

Age:20

Bounty:0

Species: Human

Occupation: Mechanic, Marksman

Allegiance: none of the major but the winter guard of khador on her island

Home Village/Ocean: grand line, iron kingdoms

Appearance: "kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff Imnx9v

History: Sorscha was born on an island in the grandline called the iron kingdoms the island was split into four factions , cygnar which is the crown jewel of the iron kingdoms, rich in both resources and man powe. This great nation originally developed the warjack technology (a mechanical Weaponised suit of armour used in the wars normally controlled by some sort of controller.) and is the most technologically advanced of the human factions. Cygnar prides itself on waging war for honourable reasons-though its enemies may dispute this claim. The second faction was Menoth , The devoted masses of the protectorate of menoth march forth from the gates of their cathedral fortresses to enlighten the surrounding heathn notaions for menoths greater glory. They worship the creator of man fervently and believe all others should follow suit. What they lack in technological sophistication they more than make up for with devotion and strength of numbers. Virtually the entire population of the protectorate can be called to war in times of need. The third faction is cryx, the nightmare empire of cryx is a terrifying legion of undying creature. These worshipers of the dragonlord toruk are led by horrible leaders who seek to spread the blight of malevolence and life devouring savagery over the land. The forces of cryx specialize in speed and exploiting weaknesses, however small. they have no problem sacrificing their soldiers to set up the perfect assassination. The faction that sorscha is in is khador which is home to a proud tradition of strength and edurance. Building on this, its empress seeks to expand her empire to reclaim ancient flories and spread the influence of her winter-hardened people. Though cygnar may have invented the warjack, khador invented the first steam engine, and its engineers pride themselves on the rugged reliability of their battle tested machines, This nation has modernized its military in the last few decades to create a chushing effective and varies fource. Khador live in the north which is a wintery zone, cygnar in the middle which is very mountainous, protectorate in the south which is very flat and cryx is a swamp area. Sorscha lived a normal life her mother and father were in the kardorian army and she grew up like a normal girl but this only lasted for the first part of her life . but it all changed when a teary-eyed sorscha looked into her father’s face at the age of thirteen and asked to be a soldier like him, he just smiled, patted the black hair on her head , and strode out the door to join his unit. Later that month her mother received word of the massacre at boarsgate. Sorscha’s father lay among the dead, killed by orsus zoktavir, butcher of khadov. Two years later, sorscha lied about her age to join the winter guard. The basic military of the khador. She survived against all odds and excelled as a soldier, surviving the rigors and mayhem of war fuelled by the image of her father’s bloody end. As sorscha fought in the war she found the warjacks that the khardor used were to powerful and even skilled controllers coundnt keep these machines under control after they went beserk through over charging. Sorscha decided that to win the war she would have to design a suit like a warjack that she could operate manually from within. Using parts of a cygnarian warjack she found a weapon that would be easy to use in this suit which was a Lighting cannon she then worked for the next few years she worked on her creation when she wasn’t on the front line and she managed to complete it using salvaged parts, and created parts she then managed to be allowed to use it in a battle little did she know that this was the last battle she would fight for the khador. While they were in the battle sorscha powered her suit up and started her march with the warjack unit she then charged in as fast as she could which was normally running speed she then started to slaughter her way through the units the battle lasted for 3 hours until she had to change the battery but by then she had seen the cannon cause explosions destroying trenches and it had the ability to overload warjack so they would simply explode from the centre. After she changed the battery she was surprised she and the suit had survived she then noticed a rouge khadorian warjack smashing their own trenches she made it go bang and she did with another three but this caused her to win the battle since they had no traitors or rouges warjacks but she was sent out of the army and allowed to keep her suit as she was still a high ranker she was allowed to keep her weapons but she had to leave khador so she did and left the island altogether she decided she would get better tech, tech that could be built faster and work more effiently.

Personality: Sorscha is a kind hearted person but she will be ruthless on the battle field and she will kill anyone that could stop them from winning like traitors and rouge machines. Sorscha is able to comfort people because she had to when she was in the trenches at war. She is able to morale people who are at there lowest. She is bisexual She loves someone she can trust and is physcally attracted too but she wont show her love for them very straight forwardly she dosent care if someone is male or female. She is very protective of her friends and she may look like she has lots of pride but she would take her own life to stop her squad, crew or group of friends from dying instead. She isn’t the smartest person but she isn’t stupid she is average. But she is very good at engineering and mechanics. She is not able to show passion or mercy to her enemies or people who touch her suit without permission. She is used to the cold and she prefers it to hot weather. She likes hot food and a warm blanket if she can get it but she perfectly fine with ration packs and sleeping on mud because she has been in worse situations.

Ship: Small warship

Ship Flag: describe

Devil Fruit: none

Special Abilities: Soldier characristics : Due to her training in the winter guard she is able to run for longer and carry things for longer due to her increased endurance, she can aim a weapon even while tired out, she can pick up heavy weaponry and tools due to training and knowing how to do it properly and she is faster due to lap training.
Skilled suit rider : due owning the suit she designed it so she could use it perfectly she then tried it out first as a prototype and when it is properly made she trained with it before she went into the front line.
skilled user of the sythe : She trained with a sythe when she was in the army and she know the way to parry, Riposte, Swing and attack and know where the easiest and most leathal spots are to hit.
Able to use guns well: since she was in the army she had to train with guns to even be allowed to go onto the front line.
Fighting style - Works by reading the enemies moves first and then countering.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): none really at the moment.

Weapons/Items: frost fang a sythe with parts made of the blade made of ice, Rifle , pistol ,Arch tech suit- lighting rod. https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/t5622-arch-tech-suit-lighting-rod

Goals: Return to her island with better technology and win khador the war as a hero


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nikz200

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PostSubject: Re: "kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff   "kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff Icon_minitimeTue Jan 10, 2012 6:03 pm

Ill need a more descriptive effort on the special abilities part, thats the only thing that needs fixing, oh and also a explanation of the Arch tech suit?
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PostSubject: Re: "kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff   "kommander" Sorscha Kritikoff Icon_minitimeTue Jan 10, 2012 7:00 pm

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