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PostSubject: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeWed Oct 26, 2011 6:01 pm

Name: Wrath Synn

Age: 24

Bounty: 16,000,000 (For scratching a World Noble, terrorizing a village, and escaping extermination by the marines)

Species: IQ Modified Human

Occupation: Scout/Deck Hand

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: A Dark Island on the Grand Line

Appearance:
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*Note* His half-cape serves to hide his right arm front public view. His right arm is demonic in appearance. It is black and has black spikes that point toward his elbow along the length of his arm. There is a final spike on the tip of his elbow. His right hand is a razor sharp claw with five fingers, each 4 inches in length.

History:
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Personality: Wrath, despite his name, is very caring for others. Same with the way he grew up, Wrath has a natural inclination to clean anything to the point of pure brilliance. When fighting, Wrath tends to show mercy to his opponents if their threats lack "will". He has a normal happy personality when it comes to everyday interactions but it is a completely different story when he is strongly provoked. When he or someone he cares about is threatened, Wrath enters a state of rage in which anyone he sees as an enemy is targeted. In rage state, Wrath shows no remorse for those he attacks and will kill his targets without hesitation. He may laugh maniacally while doing so. As a side note, Wrath does not merely sit down on a seat. Wrath perches on it like a bird. This applies to anywhere Wrath would normally be found sitting down.

Ship: A dingy ATM

Devil Fruit: None

Special Abilities:
Expert Knife user : Self explanatory
Enhanced Night Vision: Growing up in a dark castle gave Wrath a stronger sense of sight in darkness. It is only slightly better than what any normal person can achieve. He can discern objects perfectly but cannot detect details.
Enhanced speed: You would need it too when you were chased by angry villagers your whole life. Wrath's maximum speed without "rage" is about a fifth of the speed of a good soru.
Demonic right arm: This arm came as a result of consuming IQs. It is a black color and covered in spikes. His hand is a razor sharp claw and can easily cut flesh. Along the length of his arm he has spikes that point toward his elbow and there is a final spike on the tip of his elbow. There are a total of seven spikes on his arm including the one on his elbow. The arm is about as hard as a rock. Wrath can use any part of his arm to block a normal sword strike from an average swordsman and can completely deflect low caliber bullets. When scratched or cut, his arm will slowly but surely regenerate. His arm is also rather light, despite it's hardness. Wrath can move this arm around as if he was born with it.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Mainly just special techniques.
"Rage" : Wrath enters "rage mode" and loses self consciousness. An order is put into his mind to eliminate anything or anyone he deems as an enemy. In this state, Wrath's strength and movements enhanced to 250%. However, Wrath will overexert himself in this form and will ignore any damage taken. Pain and massive fatigue will immediately affect Wrath once the effect wears off. Lasts 7 Posts. Can only be activated once a thread.
"Regeneration" : Wrath's Demonic right arm can slowly heal when it is hurt. Minor cuts and scratches only take 2 posts. A deep cut or a missing finger requires 8 posts. A severed hand takes 30 posts. Anything past his wrist will not regenerate until the thread ends. Wrath must not overexert himself for regeneration to occur. Cannot be in an enraged state when regenerating.
"Fury" : Wrath strikes his target repeatedly with a very fast barrage of hits with both arms. He switches between his stiletto, his claws, and the spikes on his arm. With his speed, Wrath will follow his target when they move away and continue the barrage. Only used in extreme close range. Lasts 2 posts.
"Outburst" : Wrath takes his right arm and sends a concentrated strike at his target. With its hardness and sharpness, this powerful strike can break simple steel swords and light armor. If it hits the blade of the sword, Wrath's hand will be cut but the blade will still break. The depth of the cut depends on the sharpness of the sword. Higher grade swords and customized weapons will not break (because I am nice).
"Asperity" : Wrath's only mid-ranged attack. While swinging his arm backwards at a high speed, Wrath can deliberately release the spikes on his arm and send them flying forward. The spikes are about three inches in length and are as sharp as an arrowhead. As such, they fly at the speed of an arrow. Up to six spikes can be fired at once. NOTE: Wrath does not have an unlimited number of spikes on his arm. He can only shoot 6 of the 7 spikes on his arm. Each spike, after fired, takes 10 posts to regenerate on his arm.


Weapons/Items: A 6 inch stiletto hidden under his cape.

Goals: Avenge his dead siblings by killing any and all World Nobles he can find.


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PostSubject: Re: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeThu Oct 27, 2011 11:52 pm

First, I think that the "Intimidate" technique needs to leave. It's basically haki but lowered, and it's not allowed in the site. Second, the "Rage" technique, you need to lower the posts it lasts, 13 is too much, if it would actually take all the pain, fatigue, and everything that happened in 13 posts, he would probably die or something. How about lowering it to.. 8? Like seriously, try to keep it realistic, please change those things I stated above and I'll check it again to see if it's ready for approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeFri Oct 28, 2011 6:31 am

Thank you for taking your time to check him over.

The edits I made are in red.
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PostSubject: Re: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeFri Oct 28, 2011 11:27 pm

approved unless stated otherwise by a senior mod or admin.
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PostSubject: Re: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeFri Oct 28, 2011 11:28 pm

Thank You~
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PostSubject: Re: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeTue Nov 01, 2011 10:28 pm

Added several techniques to the Learned Techniques section.

The edits I made are in red.
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PostSubject: Re: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeTue Nov 01, 2011 11:08 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Wrath Synn   Wrath Synn Icon_minitimeWed Nov 02, 2011 9:01 am

Thank You
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