Wrath
Posts : 267 Join date : 2011-09-03
| Subject: Wrath Synn Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:01 pm | |
| Name: Wrath Synn Age: 24 Bounty: 16,000,000 (For scratching a World Noble, terrorizing a village, and escaping extermination by the marines) Species: IQ Modified Human Occupation: Scout/Deck Hand Allegiance: Pirate Home Village/Ocean: A Dark Island on the Grand Line Appearance: *Note* His half-cape serves to hide his right arm front public view. His right arm is demonic in appearance. It is black and has black spikes that point toward his elbow along the length of his arm. There is a final spike on the tip of his elbow. His right hand is a razor sharp claw with five fingers, each 4 inches in length. History: - Spoiler:
Wrath is the second of seven children born to a mysterious nobleman who lived in a dark castle on a dark island. The names of the children, in order of birth, are Pride, Wrath, Sloth, Lust, Envy, Gluttony, and Greed. Their father was a dark figure whom no one on the island knew well. It was rumored that the children were born of women he brought from far-away lands to his castle. No one knows if the story is true but no woman has ever walked through the castle's front gate. The villagers who live in the town below the castle always thought that the mysterious man was the devil himself. Others have though that he was a vampire; they are not far from the truth but that is a mystery for another time.
The children grew up without an intimate relationship with their father. In fact, they rarely saw him except for during dinner time. The only adult contact they had for the most part was the family's faithful butler. He was an old man yet he never ran out of energy to take care of the children. The children seemed to be born of curses as each was a manifestation of their names. Only Wrath did not show the sinfulness characteristic of his siblings. In fact, Wrath grew up to be a gentle and kind boy. He spent most of his days (if you could call the constantly gloomy weather days) helping the butler with errands and clean the castle. Wrath became very proficient at cleaning.
Every night before they went to bed, the children were given a pill to swallow as ordered by their father. Little did they know that these pills were a certain drug made directly from extracts from IQ plants. The children each began to gain a demonic body part as a result of their specific natures. Wrath developed a demonic right arm. While Wrath helped around in the castle, his siblings often went and caused havoc in the village. As such, the villagers grew a strong dislike toward the children. This hatred was strengthened by their fear of the strange appendages the children possessed. Wrath, being the second oldest of his siblings, was also the second strongest when it came to sibling rivalries. Wrath's potential is always rediscovered whenever he fights because the angrier he got, the stronger he became. He only ever lost to Pride whose power was something similar to Haoshoku Haki.
Often isolated by his siblings, Wrath took to sparring with the butler who specialized in using a hidden cane sword. Wrath was taught to use knives with his left hand because he couldn't hold them with his right. At a young age, Wrath became the only child who could fight using something other than their powers.
One day, the people of the village decided that they had enough of the tyranny of the castle-dwellers. A mob formed and they stormed the front gate. However, a dark figure with a long sword stood behind the gate. Wanting to proceed, the mob ignored the figure and rushed toward the castle. None of them ever made it to the front door. The death of so many villagers was blamed on the children who by now were old enough to individually cause harm to the village. The marines were called in to dispose of them. One marine battleship held on it a Celestial Dragon who had heard of the grand castle on the island and wanted it for himself. The marines rushed in and stormed the castle but the children were there to hold them off. Infuriated by the pestilence, the Celestial Dragon ordered the island to be completely destroyed. The scene was similar to a Buster Call except it was not made by means of a golden den-den mushi and no vice admirals were called in. Wrath, who was in the garden with the butler, was working when suddenly a barrage of cannon balls flew into the castle and destroyed most of it. Running inside, Wrath tried to find his siblings but could only find the bodies of the five youngest children. He found Pride on the roof, defending the castle my means of his power. However, it was evident that pride was caught in an earlier explosion as the right side of his body had been seriously blown apart. It was, however, the proud nature of Pride that kept him standing on the roof defending the castle. Wrath understood that Pride only had a few minutes left so he ran down toward the front gate.
At the front gate, Wrath saw his father and the butler standing side by side. They just stood there and didn't say a word. Wrath wanted to say something to his father but suddenly, a large explosion happened on the castle's roof. Wrath looked toward the castle at the very spot where he last saw Pride. When Wrath turned back to speak to his father, he discovered that the two of them had just vanished.
Now completely furious and in an enraged state, Wrath ran full speed toward the marine battleships. He saw the ship with the Celestial Dragon and climbed onto the deck. Seeking revenge on the noble, Wrath prepared to kill him with his demonic right arm but was suddenly hit by a cannonball. Strangely enough, the cannonball did not seem to have come from a cannon from any ship. The Celestial Dragon, suffering only a minor cut across his chest, ordered the immediate and painful death of Wrath. Unfortunately for him, Wrath was thrown into the water by the cannonball and was nowhere to be seen.
Wrath woke up on a different island a few days later. He found himself lying in an abandoned cottage on a beach island. He was surprised to find himself fully clothed in his noble gear as if he had never left the castle. Understanding what had happened, Wrath left the cottage and decided to begin a new life with one goal in mind; to kill any World Noble he could find. To do so he would need to join a crew that the power to compete with the world government. He set out for Sabaody Archipelago where powerful crews were all destined to meet...
Personality: Wrath, despite his name, is very caring for others. Same with the way he grew up, Wrath has a natural inclination to clean anything to the point of pure brilliance. When fighting, Wrath tends to show mercy to his opponents if their threats lack "will". He has a normal happy personality when it comes to everyday interactions but it is a completely different story when he is strongly provoked. When he or someone he cares about is threatened, Wrath enters a state of rage in which anyone he sees as an enemy is targeted. In rage state, Wrath shows no remorse for those he attacks and will kill his targets without hesitation. He may laugh maniacally while doing so. As a side note, Wrath does not merely sit down on a seat. Wrath perches on it like a bird. This applies to anywhere Wrath would normally be found sitting down. Ship: A dingy ATM Devil Fruit: None Special Abilities: Expert Knife user : Self explanatory Enhanced Night Vision: Growing up in a dark castle gave Wrath a stronger sense of sight in darkness. It is only slightly better than what any normal person can achieve. He can discern objects perfectly but cannot detect details. Enhanced speed: You would need it too when you were chased by angry villagers your whole life. Wrath's maximum speed without "rage" is about a fifth of the speed of a good soru. Demonic right arm: This arm came as a result of consuming IQs. It is a black color and covered in spikes. His hand is a razor sharp claw and can easily cut flesh. Along the length of his arm he has spikes that point toward his elbow and there is a final spike on the tip of his elbow. There are a total of seven spikes on his arm including the one on his elbow. The arm is about as hard as a rock. Wrath can use any part of his arm to block a normal sword strike from an average swordsman and can completely deflect low caliber bullets. When scratched or cut, his arm will slowly but surely regenerate. His arm is also rather light, despite it's hardness. Wrath can move this arm around as if he was born with it.Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Mainly just special techniques. "Rage" : Wrath enters "rage mode" and loses self consciousness. An order is put into his mind to eliminate anything or anyone he deems as an enemy. In this state, Wrath's strength and movements enhanced to 250%. However, Wrath will overexert himself in this form and will ignore any damage taken. Pain and massive fatigue will immediately affect Wrath once the effect wears off. Lasts 7 Posts. Can only be activated once a thread. "Regeneration" : Wrath's Demonic right arm can slowly heal when it is hurt. Minor cuts and scratches only take 2 posts. A deep cut or a missing finger requires 8 posts. A severed hand takes 30 posts. Anything past his wrist will not regenerate until the thread ends. Wrath must not overexert himself for regeneration to occur. Cannot be in an enraged state when regenerating. "Fury" : Wrath strikes his target repeatedly with a very fast barrage of hits with both arms. He switches between his stiletto, his claws, and the spikes on his arm. With his speed, Wrath will follow his target when they move away and continue the barrage. Only used in extreme close range. Lasts 2 posts. "Outburst" : Wrath takes his right arm and sends a concentrated strike at his target. With its hardness and sharpness, this powerful strike can break simple steel swords and light armor. If it hits the blade of the sword, Wrath's hand will be cut but the blade will still break. The depth of the cut depends on the sharpness of the sword. Higher grade swords and customized weapons will not break (because I am nice). "Asperity" : Wrath's only mid-ranged attack. While swinging his arm backwards at a high speed, Wrath can deliberately release the spikes on his arm and send them flying forward. The spikes are about three inches in length and are as sharp as an arrowhead. As such, they fly at the speed of an arrow. Up to six spikes can be fired at once. NOTE: Wrath does not have an unlimited number of spikes on his arm. He can only shoot 6 of the 7 spikes on his arm. Each spike, after fired, takes 10 posts to regenerate on his arm.Weapons/Items: A 6 inch stiletto hidden under his cape. Goals: Avenge his dead siblings by killing any and all World Nobles he can find.
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| Subject: Re: Wrath Synn Thu Oct 27, 2011 11:52 pm | |
| First, I think that the "Intimidate" technique needs to leave. It's basically haki but lowered, and it's not allowed in the site. Second, the "Rage" technique, you need to lower the posts it lasts, 13 is too much, if it would actually take all the pain, fatigue, and everything that happened in 13 posts, he would probably die or something. How about lowering it to.. 8? Like seriously, try to keep it realistic, please change those things I stated above and I'll check it again to see if it's ready for approval. |
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Wrath
Posts : 267 Join date : 2011-09-03
| Subject: Re: Wrath Synn Fri Oct 28, 2011 6:31 am | |
| Thank you for taking your time to check him over.
The edits I made are in red. | |
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| Subject: Re: Wrath Synn Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:27 pm | |
| approved unless stated otherwise by a senior mod or admin. |
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Wrath
Posts : 267 Join date : 2011-09-03
| Subject: Re: Wrath Synn Fri Oct 28, 2011 11:28 pm | |
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Wrath
Posts : 267 Join date : 2011-09-03
| Subject: Re: Wrath Synn Tue Nov 01, 2011 10:28 pm | |
| Added several techniques to the Learned Techniques section.
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Karasu(the crow)
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| Subject: Re: Wrath Synn Tue Nov 01, 2011 11:08 pm | |
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Wrath
Posts : 267 Join date : 2011-09-03
| Subject: Re: Wrath Synn Wed Nov 02, 2011 9:01 am | |
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