Xaldin Tralane Herron

Name: Xaldin Tralane Herron
Also known as:
Age: 21
Species: Human
Gender: Male

Loyalty: Pirate
Affiliation: Captain of his soon to be crew
Occupation: Bandit/Pirate/Swordsmen
Bounty: 0 Beli (at the moment. He hasn't done anything)

Specialty: One Arm Sword Fighting
Goals: To become the strongest Swordsmen to sail the gallows. To Become a famous and feared Pirate.
Funds: 2,499

Level: 0
Posts till next level: 13/15

-Appearance information-
Physical appearance:

Body: He's a athletic body shape, arms normal size, not skinny, but just right. No tight muscles, but you can clearly see them when he flexes. He's 6 foot 4 inches tall and weighs approximately 150 pounds. His Skin complexion would be a average Caucasian, with a slight tan that seems to be permanent. He has a thick muscular neck to match is Brod spacious chest. His legs are pretty long do to his height, and his calf muscles.
Though he has an athletic body, When Xaldin in hales deeply, you can see his rib cage out like very well. As if he had no flesh at all. (Thats possible, I'm that skinny). Though when he hardens his stomach, you can see a fully developed six pack. Xaldin's hands are a normal size with a few cuts near the back of his hand and on his wrist (due to sword training). His fingers are long and slender, fingers that some would call good piano fingers. Xaldins feet are about 11'5 in shoe size, the arch on his foot is very visible due to his boney feet.

Face: He has a small peanut head that has a narrow slim chin. He has cheek bones that you can basically see the outline of them.  His eye brows are slim and narrow as if he had gotten them arched. He has a normal size mouth that 5 inches long when he's not smiling, but when he widens his smile, his mouth spreads to almost to his ear (how normal one piece characters mouths get). He has big and narrow nose, it fits perfectly on his face. His nostrils are about the size of a penny. His ears are not to big, but are slightly pointy. One of his ears has a huge hole on the ear lobe as if it was a battle wound more then a ear piecing. He has light blue eyes with a hint of lavender around the pupil it self. except for his right. His right eye is just is a brownish hazel like tint. His eyes are normally in a normal shape, but when he's mad, serious, or irritated by something, they narrow and it looks as if he put on black eye liner all around his eyes.

Hair: He has mid-long loose onyx black hair. With a splash of gray streams randomly through out his hair. The front of his hair is styled so that one side is much longer then the other and covers one eye. The other side is styled so its swooped backwards. The back of his hair is completely gray, with a hint of silver at the hair line. He has a mustache that he's never shaven and looks like peach fuzz. But on his chin and cheek bones, he has a small beard that is about 2 inches up on his face. Although its small, you can see it from a distance. His eye brows are the same onyx black color that his hair is. One eye brow is half way gone due to him having to get stitches removed after a fall.

Non visual information:Xaldin has a currently changing voice. Its not high pitch, but no were near deep. Some what in the middle. When he gets angry his voice will change from bass deep. Xaldin has a keen sense of smell. He can smell things once and know exactly what it is, whether its gun powered, or blood. He'll identify it. He normally has more of a reaction to sweet smells then anything and can pinpoint its location once he smells it.  

Clothing:

Outfit #1: Consist of a Long 3 button White shirt long sleeve cotton dress shirt. The buttons are only up near his chest. He wears short crimson read cargo pants with a matching Green Wool expandable Sash that contains his very own customized Saber in it with 1 handcanon and 2 normal pistols on the other side. He always wheres a black cape with all his outfits. so I'll just point that out. On his feet he wears thick leather steel toe boots that have wool on the inside. He also never changes his boots.

Outfit #2: This outfit consist of an All black suit with a red shirt with black stripes. A solid black tie is slightly loosened along with his top two buttons of his red shirt with black stripes unbuttoned. In this Outfit since he doesn't have his sash. He carries his sword around in his left hand. While he keeps 1 pistol hidden in his coat pants pocket and his handcanon strapped on his belt.

-Personality information-

Personality Overview: Xaldin is a very caring person, and normally gos out of his way to help people if they ask for it or not. Although he's normally seen stealing and looting, or causing a brawl in a local bar. He's also known for his amazing mericals that he's performed. Like swimming out into open water to save this little kid from drowning. Stopping a Sea King from eating these newly found crew of Pirates by putting a 30 spears in a cannon and firing them off into the Sea Kings throat and killing it luckily just before it devoured the entire ship. He doesn't tend to show his emotions at all, he'll normally conceal his anger and let it go unless he see's something utterly cruel happen or something. Another anger trigger for Xaldin is if you harm one he claims a friend. Since he doesn't enjoy people to much. If he dubs you a friend, it means your very special to him. Xaldins anger is like no other, when he's enraged, practically no one can diminish his anger. He's not berserk, he's just stubborn. Xaldin is also a very compassionate man. He will show even the utmost care for the wickedest of people if they've shown they are truly sorry for what they have done. Although he high dislikes ones who beg for mercy. He views those people as scum on the earth. In the heat of battle, He's been said to be quiet reckless. He's the type of person to sail a ship head on into an enemy fleet with only a saber and a pistol as weapons. Just so his fellow crew mates can escape unharmed. Xaldin also uses his charm to get him out of most situations, like when he gets arrested by the marines. He'll smooth talk his way into getting his handcuffs off then make a break for it.

Xaldin has a born since of justice. When he see's one being beaten on. He'll back them if he thinks the odds are beyond against them. He doesn't support violence against women or children, and has a very low tolerance for such. Xaldins known to jump the gun before thinking things through. Which leads him to getting arrested a lot. Things such as getting in fist fights at bars with marines and calling out marines is a regular thing for Xaldin. Although he is very intelligent, he deems to have the traits of an air head. At times he is gullible, he knows how to tell when one is lying or if there telling the truth. Xaldin isn't a very strategic man, but he knows how to get out of tight situations such as being hand cuffed and picking the lock. Or being swordless in a fight and still holding his own against one with a sword..at least till he can get one. Xaldin also easily gets weak knees for cute babies and adorable little girls. He'll normally get in a very high spirited mood when he sees them and normally can't restrain him self from snuggling with them or kissing there cheeks. Xaldin dislikes smart asses and people who THINK there wise, but know nothing. He normally will get extremely frustrated with said person very quickly. Xaldin normally is a man of his word, and if he said he's going to do something, he'll do it. Although he only says he'll do something if It's going to benefit him.

Likes, Dislikes, Hopes and Fears: Xaldin likes anyone who has a dream and wants to pursue it. With the proper motives that is. He likes those with courage, determination, optimism, and heart. He dislike those who love to cause pain to people for there own personal enjoyment. He also dislikes people cause suffering to those less fortunate. Xaldin Hopes one day he'll gather a crew who all have a specific dream. Xaldin also hopes to help people pursue or accomplish that dream. Xaldin fears nothing. Not even Death it self. He also has a very strong hate for carrots..no specific reason, just doesn't like them. Xaldin also dislikes Spiders, since they would always seem to find there way into his bed at night, he'd always have to squish them. He doesn't fear them, he just finds them huge pest.

-History information-**

Happy Days

Xaldin was born on a Island called Sagato Island in a town called Big Beast Town. It was called big Beast town because of the Wild Boars, Bears, Lizards, and Birds that where about the size of a full grown man that roamed the outskirts of the town. Xaldins parents were missionary who protected the town, mostly from animals who tried to break in through the protective wall that surrounded the entire town. Xaldin was to young to really see how dangerous the beast where in his adolescent years. But he was a very active infant. Always getting into mischief by causing his baby sitter who was also is aunt, heeps of trouble. Since his parents were always on duty, they were not really home to watch little Xaldin. Xaldin never intended to cause trouble, he'd just get loose from his play pin and crawl around town, knocking things over and eat sweet potato pies that he found on window seals cooling. He was a very adventurous baby, and rebellious. He refused to eat his mashed peas and carrots. He hated carrots so much one time he ran and hid in a barrel of gun powder to escape eating them.
Xaldin's infant life was quiet peaceful.

The Birth of a Dream

At the age of 5, Xaldin had finished the 3rd grade. He had learned to count by twos and tie his shoes. Xaldin had also became one hell of a mischief. He loved pulling practical jokes on people to pass the time. Things suck as hiding there shoes, putting fish in there pillow cases, or even farting on there cover sheets. Yes, Xaldin was one active young boy. Until one day a Man with a Large Silver Sword, about 5 foot 4 inches long came to town. The Swordsmen had came to visit an old friend, Xaldin's father. Xaldin asked his father about the man and said they were very very close friends. They had gone on many adventures with one another. Visiting many Island and meeting many people. Xaldin's father explained that this way many years before Xaldin was even thought of. Xaldin asked his father if he was stronger then the Swordsmen. His father chuckled and told him he was at first, but they've been rivals in swordsmanship for some time now. Xaldin begged and pleaded for his father and the man to spar. They did just so. As the battle raged on, Xaldin's eyes widened and his heart began to race. Seeing his father in heated battle for the first time was one of the best times in Xaldins natural born life. The fight ended in a draw with both Xaldin's father and the Swordsmen being interrupted by an attack of a Giant Steel toed Wild Boar. It took Xaldin's father and the Swordsmen's combined strength to kill the beast. After the battle, Xaldin asked his father to show him how to use a sword. His father agreed. After about 2 days of training, the Swordsmen left, saying he'd return in another 5 years are so.

Life of a Swordsman

At the age of 10. Xaldin had been fully trained in the art of Swordsmanship. He'd learned many different blocks, disarms, foot work, and many other techniques that Swordsmen should know. Although his father didn't teach him any extremely powerful moves that he clearly did know. He taught his son how to be witty and quick on his feet. Due to Xaldin getting constant cuts and stitches. His mother taught him how to stitch up his own wounds . Although he didn't know any advanced medical knowledge as his mother did, he knew enough to keep him self healthy. Payne then began going with his Father, and mother on Beast Hunts. Killing smaller versions of the large beast. Even if they where not full grown. They were still enough to give Xaldin a hard time due to his lack of strength. As they hunted, Xaldins own physical strength began to grow each battle. Xaldin was soon able to take down Wild Iron horned boars on his own. Not the full grown size his Father would fight, but about 10x smaller. Xaldin then began to lust for adventure! If there were beast like this on his own Island. What else could be out there? He thought. Not having many friends due to his current anti-social attitude. Xaldin made a goal that he'd one day get a crew together and sail the gallows! After he made that goal, Xaldins entire person began to change. Instead of being clammed up in his room alone, he tried playing around with the other kids. But one by one, they all started to change, turning on Xaldin because there parents didnt like Xaldin's parents due to there high respect. They fed off what there corrupted parents would say about Xaldins parents. That just lead to them learning to hate Xaldin. Xaldin then began spending most of his time back at home, training with his father.

Sudden Change in Life

When Xaldin was the age of 13. He had become a much stronger young man. He was able to wrestle with Giant Animals and tame them if he wanted to. But he only had tamed two at the time. One was a Giant Black Panda Bear who Xaldin named Bosokeet. It stood approximately 16 feet tall and weighed 560 pounds. Bosokeet was Xaldins absolute best friend. They went every where together. They even slept together. His other tamed animal was a bit different. It was a large Blue Whale  Lizard whos name was Blue. It lived off the Shore of the Islands East Beach. Xaldin would normally go swimming with Blue and catch fish. Aside from all that, Xaldin had finally graduate from 8th grade. He could multiply factions and divided large numbers. Although at this age Xaldin had grown quiet lazy when it came to school work. He'd rather be out side the Towns barrier playing with Bosokeet. Although his father frowned apon him always leaving the town. He was proud to see how strong his son was getting. On his 14th birthday, Xaldins parents both randomly got up and left town. They need not tell anyone why they left. But they told Xaldin that they had to leave on urgent business. Xaldin wasn't afraid, but more sad then anything. No one seemed to show Xaldin any compassion. No love, no pity. He was left alone and not even comfored. A month after his parents left, The Swordsmen returned. Xaldin had been staying alive by stealing food from peoples homes while they slept. The Swordsmen told Xaldin to stop, he wouldn't want his best friends son to carry on his fathers legacy as a criminal with such low priority as stealing. Xaldin then attacked the Swordsmen with his fathers own sword in sheer anger. The battle went on for less the 3 minutes. Due to Xaldins lack in strength. The Swordsmen disarmed Xaldin and told him to stop letting his emotions control his actions. Xaldin calmed down. The Swordsmen then asked Xaldin if he had any dreams. Xaldin responded. No, but he wants to leave this Island and find some friends. The Swordsmen then responded and said "To leave this Island your so accustom too..you'll need to become much stronger.." Xaldin then and asked him to help him get stronger. The Swordsmen then agreed and told him to call him, Jin. For the next 21 months. Jin trained Xaldin in the art of Swordsmanship and trick fighting. He taught him things such as tying a cloth to your gun or handle of your sword so you cannot be disarmed easily. He also taught him how to escape capture by learning his surroundings. Jin gave Xaldin most of all strength training. Although Xaldins strength was no where near super human. He was able to lift 200 pounds if he used both arms. And he could slice up a Wild Boar in meer minutes if he was focused enough. Jin and Xaldin then went there separate ways. Xaldin went on forward, ready to purse his new found dreams. To Become to Strongest Swordsmen in the world, and become famous while doing so, and to gather together a crew of people who actually liked him for who he was, not because who his parents where.

Relationships with other characters:Xaldins Father, (might make him), Xaldins Mother, Jin (will make him soon), Boosokeet The Giant Panda, Blue the Giant Blue whale Lizard.

-Stats-

• Strength: 20%
  
• Endurance: 20%
  
• Speed: 10%
  
• Agility: 30%
  
• Skill: 20%
  
• Tactical intelligence:10%
  
• Practical intelligence:10 %
  
• Knowledge: 10%
  
• Perception:10%
  
• Charisma and leadership:10%
  
• Talent:10%
  
• Devil fruit control:0%
  

-Equipment List-
A Regular Silver Saber - Free

A handcanon - 200

2 pistols - 400 (each)

-Abilities-

One Sword Style (Going to be made)

Two Sword Style (Going to be made)

Passive traits: N/A

Devil Fruit: N/A

Talents: Is good at Escaping capture and getting away in tight situations. (Pakour)

Learned skills:
Swordsmanship
Parkour (FreeRunning)

Techniques lists:^


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^ = must be updated every time your character levels up
* = must be updated every thread
** = must be updated after every story ark

all bounties must be explained in the history or start at 50, see the bounty chart for details

Edited, took out the bounty completely and put Swordsmanship and Parkour under Learned Skills

his talent is zero but he possesses a talent, basicaly he cannot use his parkour at all given what you've written, though honestly thats not so much a talent as it is a funtion of his speed and agility in the first place.

with zero knowledge he cannot read or do simple math, he is functionally mentally disabled and totally uneducated

with zero practical knowledge your character cannot use basic self preservation skills and is literally the most gullible person posible

with no tactical knolwage your character is not able to form plans of attack at all or think on their feet

with zero perception your character is just under being legally deaf and blind, he will always sucumb to suprize attacks

plot conveniently dead parents is severely frowned upon here, everyone does it and its just not original, originality is more than a goal for this section, its a standard.

otherwise your character is shaping up rather well and I would be willing to overlook the dead parents if you tried a bit more to smooth out the ex positional aspect of it

please lengthen the body section of appearance

personality must be two paragraphs

Edited:

Personality

Added 10% to all other stats.

Added more Body Description

Added more to Likes,Dislikes, and Fears.

Changed Parents from dying to parents went off on urgent business. Which leaves a reason to create the Father and maybe another goal for Xaldin later on in the Timeline.

include the prices he paid for the equipment

Edited

Also took away some of his funds. He only robs people some times for cash. He normally does it for Food.

approved!

TBL your total is 190%, pwease take away 30% . You start off with 110% plus the 50% makes it 160.