Kuromaru Hitsayuga

Name: Kuromaru "Kuro" Hitsayuga

Age:19

Bounty: N/A

Species: Skypeian

Occupation: first mate/shipwright

Allegiance:Steel village pirates 6th division

Home Village/Ocean: north blue

Appearance:

History: He was homeless as a child until taken care of by Galley-La. Parents were killed by the navy. They were killed because they were pirates. They stole beris from the navy. The man who killed his parents was a Navy Vice Admiral. While he was looking for food, he found a fruit. At the time, he was so hungry, he would eat almost anything. It turns out the fruit was the paint paint fruit. He found the Galley-La and they took him in along with another boy.. A couple of years later, he joined the Steel village pirates 6th division. He met them at Water 7 because he worked for Galley-La, and joined them with Lion D. Namikaze. When, he ate the fruit. He kept it secret and mastered it's abilities. He always looking for tracks that lead to the Navy Vice Admiral's location.

Personality: He is funny. He is smart. He is very cautious. He also likes pandas. He can get very surprised. He also can't get mad very easily. He can hold a grudge for a long time. He hates to have debts to people, but if he does he repays it immediately. He is calm and collective in battle. He takes in pride of his race. He is a master at building and forging weapons and fixing ships. He loves his crewmates. He hates the navy ,but refuses to kill anyone. He is also very shaken by his parents death but trys to hide it from his crewmates. Whenever he finds information about the Navy Vice Admiral, he jumps to conclusions and gets exited and impatient.

Ship: steam build

Ship Flag: a skull with a samurai helmet with two katanas crossed below it.


Devil Fruit: paint paint fruit
type: parmesia
effect: The user can draw things in mid-air and make them come to life. They control the drawing with hand motions.

Special Abilities: 1 Swords Style, expert at flying, and expertise at building and repairing things.

Learned Techniques: Sketch ____: Draws something and it comes to life
Tri Slash: He flaps really quickly with his wings and slashes with his sword quickly making blades of air attack the enemy
Diving Blade: He flies really high then swoops down and smashes and stabs the enemy
Sketch Jet:He draw a catapult/jet thing launching him with a fast speed in any direction.

Weapons/Items: Tsuki Hayabusa and his wings

Goals: To find the navy vice admiral who killed his parents and kill him.

Consider a more detailed history.
You have a list of statements documenting events but there is not really any reaction from your character regarding all of these things that are happening to him. You have written a timeline, rather than a history. Imagine your character experiencing all of these events and see what these events do to him ... see how they change him and leave their footprints on his identity. No one can experience such trauma and walk away unchanged. CHARACTERIZE, please.

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