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Unholy
Posts : 1402
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 37
Location : Pionneer California
| Subject: (Delted)  Sat May 21, 2011 11:02 pm | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605
Join date : 2010-02-19
Age : 34
Location : Malaysia
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Sat May 21, 2011 11:47 pm | |
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Unholy
Posts : 1402
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 37
Location : Pionneer California
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Sat May 21, 2011 11:49 pm | |
| No Its A Dark Devil Fruit sword with a curse that steal the users life force. Each post they make the sword steal 10% of there life So after 10 posts they die. The Devil fruit cancelling comes from the Dark fruits abilites. I can edit it out if nessisary.
The Sword is basically a final resort for a character. | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605
Join date : 2010-02-19
Age : 34
Location : Malaysia
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Sun May 22, 2011 12:09 am | |
| but its not a one piece ability? it seems like magic..... change it, make it seastone if you want or something | |
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Unholy
Posts : 1402
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 37
Location : Pionneer California
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Sun May 22, 2011 12:17 am | |
| Removed the part about killing its user and took out the Negating Devil fruit powers.
Cant add seastone for this is a devil fruit sword.
Anything else it need? | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605
Join date : 2010-02-19
Age : 34
Location : Malaysia
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Sun May 22, 2011 12:23 am | |
| ohhh its a df sword? you didnt say so, mention the df it has | |
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Unholy
Posts : 1402
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 37
Location : Pionneer California
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Sat May 28, 2011 2:29 am | |
| Done everything you asked need anything else? | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605
Join date : 2010-02-19
Age : 34
Location : Malaysia
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Sat May 28, 2011 4:11 am | |
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Unholy
Posts : 1402
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 37
Location : Pionneer California
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:43 pm | |
| Revamped looking for reapproval. | |
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Gael
Admin
Posts : 3372
Join date : 2009-11-12
Age : 30
Location : I am at a place... doing stuff... with things.
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:54 pm | |
| Denied because of previous statements of mine, the devil fruit is too much. The dials are fine, but the Devil Fruit needs to be removed to make it balanced. | |
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Unholy
Posts : 1402
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 37
Location : Pionneer California
| | Subject: Re: (Delted) Thu Mar 01, 2012 10:57 pm | |
| Well He already had the Sword before he learned his devil fruit and he has the posion Sword already so he just simply took the dials off one and put it on the other. what if i remove the black hole ability and the gravity one?
.......Ug fine....... I'll just toss this sword as well i guess...... | |
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