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Captain One-eye

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PostSubject: ex d. corrupt   ex d. corrupt Icon_minitimeFri Mar 18, 2011 6:39 pm

Name:ex d. corrupt

Age:19

Bounty:none

Species: Human

Occupation:bouny hunter.

Allegiance:none(a bounty hunter whitout an allience)

Home Village/Ocean:north blue

Appearance:stands 5,11.
ex is of average height around 5'11" with an average thin/semi muscular build. His hair is brown and worn to his shoulders so not very long. Was raised by pirates so he shows signs of a hard life. Wears a mofia style black and white suit with shiny black shoes.ex has cobalt blue eyes,and has an white(whit an Browne tint from the sun)skin

History:since his villige was raided by pirates youri tried to improve its skill to be an bounty hunter.
after defeaating his 10th pirate whit an bounty he came acros a very strong pirate.
after a long battle ex losed.ex was surprised when the pirate let him live.
"get stronger and face me again''he said
after that youri trained day and night.
while training on the beach he found 2 weird katanas,finding out they where special and they would make him stronger he kept them.
whule training a weird glow came from the red katana.
''whats this''reacted ex.
it seemed like he triggered something.
after doing that fire came out of the katana burning a tree that was standing near him.
he tried the same whit the other one but out of the other one came water.
shocked by the weapons ability he also found out that he trigged some kind of flash when he draws his katanas.
knowing the ability's from the weapons ex made a technique whit the two katanas.
after he mastered the two katanas he was thinking of fighting an pirate.
after he found one it seemed the pirate has an bounty of 10.000.
youri was disappointed while he crushed the low bounty pirate whit his two swords.
''if there is an pirate there must be an bout''was sx thinking.
after searching the beach h e found a ship.
right after finding the ship ex got supplies and left the island.(things about family are unknown,for now)
after his training was done ex had set sale to train around the world,find an companion,and capture the most famous pirates.
now ex is training around the sea searching for pirates,companions,and high bounty pirates.

Personality:most of the time he is policht agaisnt poeple but when he gets mad it almost looks like hes an compleet different person.
ex is mostly an straght forward guy,likes to get right to the point.
likes to joke around even in serius moments.ex does not like to be standing in a crowd in a small room.(thats why he avoids them)
ex hates it when hes being rude(when he thinks hes rude he gets nervous from a silence)

Ship:sleeping bout

Ship Flag:none

Devil Fruit:none
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Special Abilities:weapon specialist(ex knows much about weapons,he could even make weapons)

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):dubble elements slash(ex can make an slash whit both fire and whater)

Weapons/Items:red katana and bleu katana,spirit compas

Goals:to catch an pirate whit an bounty from over 100.000.000 belli
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PostSubject: Re: ex d. corrupt   ex d. corrupt Icon_minitimeSat Mar 19, 2011 6:59 am

way to short to much typos'define weapon how can he make a slash with fire and water? get the weapons approved
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Captain One-eye

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PostSubject: Re: ex d. corrupt   ex d. corrupt Icon_minitimeSat Mar 19, 2011 11:28 am

this weapon is already approved https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/t3604-skypeain-red-and-blue-katanas-and-posion-chain-hook?highlight=red+++%2Bblue

ex makes a slash whit fire and water because he uses the and blue katana the red katana at the same time,and can you be more specific witch part needs to be longer
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PostSubject: Re: ex d. corrupt   ex d. corrupt Icon_minitimeSun Mar 20, 2011 6:04 pm

He means appearance, personality, and history should be spell-checked, lengthened, and overall prettied up.
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