*this is the beggining of my entry for the annual fanfic competition,
*WARNING another thing wrong with computer i cant save wordpads or word documents
*crossover NARUTO and keel loki
*due to school and due date might not be finished in time
*not a major naruto fan so feel free to correct anything I mess up (im all up for helpful critizem
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PROLOUGE
keel sat down inside the cave that was specified in the wanted paper. his luck just earnd him a 50,000,000 belli on a childs head. the best deal keel had in a long time. the cave was small with two chairs and a table in the center. sitting down in a chair that was already layed out keel polished the blade of his scyth.
around 10 minutes later three shadowy figures walked in followed by a pale figure. the man had white skin with purple markings under them, snake like eyes looked at keel while their owner sat down across from him. he gesturing to the closest figure who came into view. he was younger than expected with silver hair and round glasses. in his hands was a large briefcase that looked filled to the brim.
laying it down on the table the pale man said in an eerie voice
"kabuto, I would like to give the cliant some introductions..... and some motivation" the boy who was obiviously kabuto nodded and slided the case across the table too keel. eager to speed things up while the boy chattered away ".....is oruchimaru and if youve guessed i am kabuto. the other one is s......" keel zoned out after that becuase he had opened the briefcase to exactly if not more than 50 million. coming back he heard kabuto ask "and what is your name?"
"Keel Loki. Death's disciple"
chapter 1
two ninja stood guard the north gate to konoha. the first was tall with short black hair and a scar on his neck, the other was shorter with mid blond hair. both looked thier best with no intent on letting any enemy ninja pass. the tall one looked over the road to see a cloaked man carrying a scyth. just to be safe he placed his hands near his kunai as the figure came closer. the smaller one noticed the figure and shared a glance with the other one.
as the cloaked figure came close enough the tall ninja called out "who are you and what buisness do you have here?" instead of the answer he was expecting the figure tilted its hesd an said in a playful but unnearving tone "names keel. buisness..." the smile on his face grew sadistic "kill".
the smaller ninja sarcasticly added "at least your straight and to the point." with that both ninja pulled out a kunai knife and keel gripped his scythe.
naruto was walking down the street with sakura, theyve both been asked by the hokage, tsunade, to come to her office. neither knew about what, both a feeling of uneasiness. trying to lighten the mood naruto asked "how have you been?"
sakura only answered with a sigh and increased her pace. the building in sight she was trying to forget sasuke. the remaining walk was a quiet one as they hurried to the hogake.
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iruka thought it was a normal guard duty as he walked to the north gate. the sun was shining, off in the distance their was a singing bird, and an child ran past him. arriving at the gate all his joy and hope faded when he saw the two bodys laying sprawled near the outer wall. one was bloodied and had sevrely deep cuts in his chest. the other one was nerve racking, his left arm was chopped off while the other had evidence of being ripped off. in his chest thier was a hole about the width of a finger straight through his heart..... right next to a small face cut into his flesh. immeaditly iruka ran as fast as he could back to the hokage's mansion.
chapter 2
from a roof top keel looked around the crowds of people for the child he was hunting. there were many people in this town but eventually he find the target. just then someone cuaght his eye, a man dressed similar to the two he killed coming in. his face grim and in a hurry to the center of town. "i hate witnesses" keel said to himself as he used soru to follow the man.... and dispatch him if necessary.
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naruto knocked on the door to the hokages office and was answered by "come in." inside were three people, one was a man with silved hair spiking upwards, he was also wearing a mask that covered all but his left eye. the second was a woman with blond hair pigtailed to reveal her forhead. on wich there was a pink daimond smack dab in the center. she sat at a rather large desk that somehow increased the importance of her presence. the third was another woman with short black hair. in her hands was a small pig that looked worried. upon the entire room there was a great sence of despair. "so granny tsunade whats up?" asked naruto directing the question at the woman at the desk. when she didn't answer naruto looked at the man. "whats wrong kakashi sensai?" this time tsunade held up a paper that looked normal enough at first glance. but when naruto and sakura looked closer they noticed it was a wanted poster on naruto's head. it also gave a very detailed discription of naruto along with a bounty of 50,000,000. sakura gasped but naruto remained unphased simply saying "so? we've faced lots of badguys before, what diffrence does this make? sighing tsunade answered "normaly youd be correct, but based on the bounty and what are spies have reported its incredibly important." before naruto could say anything she continued "infact someone's all ready after your head.... a man named keel loki. he also nicknamed himself death's disciple." at that moment iruka bursed into the room reporting what he found. before was finished keel walked into the room, knocking on the door he told everybody in the room "knock knock. is this a private party or can anyone join?"
Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:16 pm
