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Unholy

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Name: Darnell Malice

Age:19

Bounty: None

Species: Human

Occupation:Beast Tamer/shipwright

Allegiance:Pirate (Spotted Pirates)

Home Village/Ocean:Bleaz Clan Village

Appearance:Has Dark Skin and Short black hair. Doesn't wear a shirt and has Blue jean pants. has A Huge Bleaz tattoo on his chest. and has scars all over his body, from Terror bear training.

History: Born in Raised in Bleaz Village.He was best friends with Nizel Bleaz they spent five hours a day working, five at school, two training, and the rest of the day for themselves. A Bleaz child starts this process at age ten.Darnell Loved animals sence he was a little kid.Growing up he raised two baby terror bears. Roger He was a strong kind bear while Winnie She was a cleaver cunning bear.They are black bear with white stripes on its body and long arms .strong very long arms there cute round eyes are quite deceiving of there creature's violent nature. Darnell became best friends with his two Bears as he sparred with them. He would ned his training with scars and gashes over his body. Over the years his strength increased abnormally as he trained with roddy and winnie the bears grew stronger and stronger untill there adult hood. Darnell also loved ships as well. he would create designs and would work in the local harbor when he finished his training. Once finishing Many trails in the Bleaz Clan. Darnell graduated and recieved Bleaz Fire Gloves and the bleaz clan tatoo on his chest. Darnell studyied animals learning new technics from differant aspects of every animals unique way of life.Later joining up with The Spotted Pirates Darnell and Winnie and Roger had become loyal members of there crew.

Personality:Very Charming and Brave.he Loyal and Loves to ruff people up.plays with his animals and occasionally works on ship schematics.He Loves to pretend to be serious to joke around with people.

Ship: Speckled Sailer

Ship Flag: A basic skull and crossbones with medium sized brown dots covering the flag.

Devil Fruit:None

Special Abilities:
Terror Bear Style: Super strength from training with two terror bears
Eyes Of The Beast:Able to observe Aniaml Movement and learn new technics
Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
Bob and weave - Bobbing moves the head laterally and beneath an incoming punch. As the opponent's punch arrives, the boxer bends the legs quickly and simultaneously shifts the body either slightly right or left
Arm Block! Crosses both arms to block an attack
Double Knuckle Punch.Punching with the Bottom figer joints first and then rapidly snapping your hand forward to use your fist knuckles. Creates a powerful impact
Burning Furry:Unleashes a Flurry Of Fire Punches towards an enemy
Fire Uppercut: Useing one of his fire gloves to uppercut an enemy
Triple Fire Punch: Punches with one of his fire gloves rapidly
Hell Punch:Focuses all his energy into a devistating punch.
Fire Fists! Punches with his super strength with his fire golves to send 2 fist shaped fire balls towards the enemy

Weapons/Items:Bleaz Fire Gloves

Goals: To Take down Unholy Kingdom and to be the best Shipwright and the best aniamal tamer there is


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keymaster

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PostSubject: Re: Deleted*   Deleted* Icon_minitimeWed Mar 09, 2011 7:29 pm

Approved.
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GoreFish

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PostSubject: Re: Deleted*   Deleted* Icon_minitimeThu Mar 10, 2011 3:24 am

But he didn't even write whole sentences. And are those bears approved weapons? If not, please create them first. If they are, link to them please.
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Unholy

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PostSubject: Re: Deleted*   Deleted* Icon_minitimeThu Mar 10, 2011 3:28 am

When did you need to Approve animals for an animal tamer?
I Dont even have my Aniamals in my attack?

Here the link to the Fire gloves https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/t3622-bleaz-weapons
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Unholy

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PostSubject: Re: Deleted*   Deleted* Icon_minitimeThu Mar 10, 2011 3:39 am

Senced you asked i did it anyway I posted my Cannon Bear pets from one piece in the weapons thing sence apparently Animals have become weapons

https://theonepiecerp.rpg-board.net/t3638-animals-terror-bear#67292
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PostSubject: Re: Deleted*   Deleted* Icon_minitimeFri Mar 11, 2011 2:36 am

I'd still appreciate it if you wrote in full sentences (personality and appearance).
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PostSubject: Re: Deleted*   Deleted* Icon_minitimeFri Mar 11, 2011 2:54 am

I made full sentences =( sorry if i hurt your eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: Deleted*   Deleted* Icon_minitimeFri Mar 11, 2011 3:15 am

This might seem picky, but those aren't really... full sentences. They lack pronoms like "he, they...". It's just one more word each, so...
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