Subject: Joey Salong "chompz" Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:42 am
Name: Joey Salong "chompz" Age: 17 Bounty: 1 beli Species: Fishman, (piranha) Occupation: Shipwright Allegiance: Pirate Home Village/Ocean: Fishman Island, Grandline Appearance: Very large jaw filled with sharp teeth. Blue backside with a red belly, no ears hair or external nose. Personality: Very short temper and will bite anyone who pisses him off. But he is very loyal and will die for his nakama. Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Fishman karate Weapons/Items: none Goals: Join a crew.
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Subject: Re: Joey Salong "chompz" Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:44 am
First of all... use the site sheet. That means history is necessary. Secondly. personality is at least three lines, appearance needs to be longer etc.
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Subject: Re: Joey Salong "chompz" Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:47 am
gimme a break itz my first gai
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Subject: Re: Joey Salong "chompz" Thu Feb 10, 2011 12:55 am
There are standards on this site. Inexperience does not excuse standards, therefore, I will not give you a break.
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