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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: Saru "slasher" Kizo Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:48 pm | |
| Name: Saru "slasher" Kizo Age: 19
Bounty: 10,000,000 belli
Species: Human
Occupation:
Allegiance: Pirate
Home Village/Ocean: Grandline
Appearance: red hair, red eyes, tan skin, leather vest, clamore on back, flame pants, black scarf over mouth, red sandles, tattoo of a wolf on his left arm
History: born in the grandline never trusted anyone. obtain his devil fruit when he was 6 and was shunned by everyone. decided to become a pirate after he reached 14 years old and sailed solo for 4 years. after fighting a band of crazed pirates he realized that he needed more people for his crew or he needed to join a stong crew. devil fruit is the yaiba yaiba fruit.became friends with connor koro at the age of 13
Personality:very hot headed and quick to act smart and stratigic but if insulted will kill the person
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Devil Fruit: yaiba yaiba fruit type: paramecia effect: make weapons such as swords needles or any weapon come out of his body the weapons can come basicly anywhere out of his body but mostly his hand fingers back and sholders can only summon two weapons at a time (expext needles) some weapons include swords needles chain balls and the most powerful two side arm blades. he cant turn into metal and the weapons are extention of the body can only create weapon not any metal objects. the weapons come out from inside the body and it takes alot of energy to use his powers in other words he get tired easily. Special Abilities: super human stamina, keen instincts( reacets faster to attacks than normal characters but not very much
Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): air slasher( a slash that can cut even airbasicly like the 60 pound cannon), yaiba yaiba finger needles(shoots needles from the fingertips), yaiba yaiba double blade( two cresant blades come out of the side of the arms attached to the arms), yaiba yaiba chain ball( chain ball comes out of palm and attaches to chain in arm surrounding the hand not turning into the chain ball), yaiba yaiba grappler(shoots two grapleing hooks from the wrists to grab the enemy and pull them towards the user), yaiba yaiba twin blades( two swords come out of the palms of his hands and uses them to fight the blades are extentions of the hands),
Weapons/Items: saruketzu claymore(if the user of this weapon has the yaib yaiba fruit this sword can fuse into the users body)
Goals: destory all pirates to become pirate king
Last edited by vexthewolf on Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:25 pm; edited 8 times in total | |
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Dustfinger
Posts : 659 Join date : 2008-09-10 Age : 30 Location : I don't know, I was hoping you could tell me
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:50 pm | |
| I can't approve this obviously, but I would like to know what your abilities do, like a description. | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:52 pm | |
| what sanji ur not an admin | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:53 pm | |
| dude, did you even read the setting!?!?! this RP takes place 15 years before Luffy was even BORN! thats 22 years before one pice meaning Gold D roger died only onew year ago! (stop playing admin sanjikrazy) | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:56 pm | |
| its that better i edited the post | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:57 pm | |
| next step, explain all your techniques in detail | |
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Dustfinger
Posts : 659 Join date : 2008-09-10 Age : 30 Location : I don't know, I was hoping you could tell me
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Thu Sep 18, 2008 8:58 pm | |
| I wasn't playing admin, I was just curious about his techniques. That's why I said I can't approve it. I can't even ask a question without being told off. | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 11:46 am | |
| the moves r in detail now hope its approved | |
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Dustfinger
Posts : 659 Join date : 2008-09-10 Age : 30 Location : I don't know, I was hoping you could tell me
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:01 pm | |
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Iggy Admin
Posts : 3583 Join date : 2008-07-02 Age : 31 Location : The hearts and songs of all the worlds children.
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:44 pm | |
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Dustfinger
Posts : 659 Join date : 2008-09-10 Age : 30 Location : I don't know, I was hoping you could tell me
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:51 pm | |
| I was asking vexthewolf becuase were really close friends and he's supposed to be at school although he posted about an hour ago. | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 6:54 pm | |
| Here are your techniques with my coments, please respond to ALL of them if ou want approval
air slasher( a slash that can cut even air) so basicaly the 60 pound cannon right? final 100 slash( slashes 100 times not in vital spots then sends the foe fling), explain a whole lot more! fatal power cut( the claymore turns red and then the cut can extend 100 meters), how dose that even hapan? yaiba yaiba double blade( two cresant blades come out of the side of the arms), these are attached? or what? yaiba yaiba chain ball( hand turns into a chian ball), your power is to MAKE weapons not become metal, fix it! yaiba yaiba ultimate weapons( tons of weapons come out all over the body creating armor), that would KO you from fateayge! yaiba yaiba blade tornado( must have used yaiba yaiba ultimate weapons turns into a tornado sucking in anything), that many weapons would KO you, I said BE REALISTIC ABOUT WEAPONS MAKING YOU TIRED, you are not yaiba yaiba twin blades( two swords come out of the palms of his hands), they cant be attached, that isnt in your DF abilitys yaiba yaiba cross wires( sharp metal wires come out of the finger tips and are sharp enough to cut sound itself takes alot of energy) Unreasnable! | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 6:59 pm | |
| The DF says that they are extensions of his body and are supposed to be attached(excluding needles). | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 7:00 pm | |
| ((oh, then it is absolutly NOT diffrent than the tetsu tetsu no mi at all! ANSWER THE REST)) | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 7:08 pm | |
| i changed what u want anything else | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 7:09 pm | |
| you dint answer any of my questions..... | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: edited again Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:11 pm | |
| i edited to the best of what i could do if anything else is wrong pleaze give feed back | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:12 pm | |
| ... the 100 slash move breaks the calling a hit rule about 99 times.... dosnt it? | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: alright Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:15 pm | |
| i removed the 100 slash move sorry i didnt know k | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:18 pm | |
| thats alright, just make sure to read all the rules before role playing, also the Special Abilities section is for passive qualitys, not active attacks. Thats why they are seprate from eachother. a good Special Ability for this char might be super human stamina.... | |
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vexthewolf
Posts : 341 Join date : 2008-09-18 Age : 32 Location : anywhere for short periods of time
| Subject: speacial abilityies Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:21 pm | |
| i added super human stamina to my speacial ablities is it good now | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Saru "slasher" Kizo Fri Sep 19, 2008 10:23 pm | |
| you totaly missed my point but whatever
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