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Brynne Sanpeter

Brynne Sanpeter


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Join date : 2011-01-21
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PostSubject: Brynne Sanpeter   Brynne Sanpeter Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 6:33 pm

Name: Brynne Sanpeter

Age: 18

Bounty: 900,000

Species: Human

Occupation: Navigator

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Winter Rok/Grand Line

Appearance:
Brynne is roughly 4'5 with lightly sun kissed skin, which is rather calloused, especially her hands. She has bright red hair, cropped messily around her shoulders, that tends to stick out in a crowd and will sometimes have braids in odd places. Her eyes are dark green, like the deep ocean. Her nose is crooked, showing she has had it broken several times, and a thin, barely visible, scar runs across it. From just below her shoulder to a few inches above her wrist one her left arm are dark red burn scars, creating a spiderweb like design. She usually wears rather thrifty clothes, her current outfit being a red and white t-shirt, brown pants with the legs rolled up to turn them into shorts, a scrap of a yellow cloth she uses as a bandanna around her neck, a brown newsboy cap, and a black wristband with the Winter Rok Pirates symbol emblazoned onto it.

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History: Brynne grew up on a small winter island, in a village named Winter Rok (named so because the founder had terrible spelling), with her mother and younger sister, Winry. Her father became a marine when Brynne was five, leaving the family and never coming back. Brynne hates him. Growing up Brynne was always the trouble maker of her village, getting into fights and constantly challenging anyone stronger then herself. As a result, she had quickly established dominance over the other children, especially any boys. Brynne and her band of kids, a bunch of pirate fanatics, played pranks and such on the other villagers for many years, growing very close bonds. When Brynne was ten and Winry was five, she allowed Winry to become a member of their group, and together they came up with the name The Winter Rok Pirates.

Everyone embraced the new name, and the group even found an old fishing boat that they patched up. Winry designed their flag, a grinning skull with icicle crossbones, and also painted the design onto wristbands for the 'crew' to wear. One year after this the village was attacked by a rather nasty band of pirates, resulting in half the village being burned to the ground, and all children but the Winter Rok Pirates being kidnapped, either to sell on the slave market or to squeeze ransom out from the wealthier villagers. This was because Brynne and the others had been playing in a sheltered cove during the attack, and she had kept everyone hidden there during the raid. After the raid Winter Rok hired bounty hunters to track down the pirates and kill them. Unfortunately, this only angered the pirates and caused them to return a few months later, this time intent on killing everyone in the village.

Brynne had been out shopping in the village when the massacre began, and would have been killed if Winry hadn't convinced her to go home and warn their mother. They took a back road, so as not to be seen, but this also took precious time away from them, and by the time they got home it was in flames. Winry ran inside, determined to find their mother, and Brynne ran after her, determined to get Winry out. The pirate who had set fire to the place got to Winry first, though, and Brynne ended up getting caught beneath a burning beam. She struggle to break free, and ended up burning her arm with deep, angry red marks. She did get out, though, but by the time she reached the docks the pirates had already set sail, leaving behind a ruined village that smelled of death.

It took several days for Brynne to recover from the shock of losing everything. When she had finally gotten hold of herself she gathered up as many supplies as she could and, on her twelfth birthday, set sail on the small fishing ship. She traveled the Grand Line for several years, drifting from village to village, island to island, never settling in one place for very long. During her travels, when she was fifteen years old, she came across her father's marine ship and explained to him what had happened in his absence. The man didn't even care, though, and in her anger Brynne attacked, and killed, him, along with his first mate. When that was done, she set fire to the ship and set sail in her own fishing boat, leaving behind the last remnant of her past. This was how she got her bounty, since her father was quite a well known marine captain.

Now eighteen, she had to unfortunately abandon her old boat when it was split in two by a Sea King while she paddled through the Calm Belt. When this occurred she was picked up by a young man who bore a striking resemblance to one of her old friends, but he claimed to have lost his memory of his younger years and said her face didn't stir any memories. When he dropped her off at the nearest town Brynne thanked him, and they both went on their merry ways. This encounter made Brynne believe that the other Winter Rok Pirates might not be dead, as she had thought, and she decided she was going to track them down.

After spending the night on the new island's beach, Brynne began to search out a fight she had heard rumors of. When she arrived at the place the scuffle was taking place, she stood in the crowd and watched as two doctors, a man who appeared to be a pirate, and a drug overdosing boy struggled. Soon things began to get hectic when the overdosing boy, Renko, began to go on a rampage and randomly attack. Once that calmed down she found herself following the pirate man, Iken Samakage, and become the navigator for his crew, Steel Village.

Personality: Brynne has always been very competitive, challenging those she deems stronger then herself, but if she can't beat them she declares them as her rival. She doesn't have a very unforgiving nature, and truly hates only a few people. Brynne is immature, usually sulking when she doesn't get her way or loses a fight. Her immaturity also leads to her being reckless, impatient, and sometimes oblivious to things. Brynne is also optimistic, though this can lead to her being impractical in certain situations. After traveling so much Brynne has become adventurous, always searching for a new thrill, as well as ambitious. Brynne will put on a tough, sassy girl act when she is disgruntled or is challenging the authority of someone. And finally, Brynne is loyal to and protective of anyone she deems as a friend, even if they might not necessarily return to the feeling.


Ship: None

Ship Flag: None

Devil Fruit: None

Special Abilities: Unnatural running and reflex speed

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
~ Claws of the Wolf: Brynne attacks her opponent at a high speed, slicing through them several times
~ Fang of the Wolf: Brynne is behind the opponent, then pierces her enemy wherever it may be convenient
~ Talons of the Eagle: Much like Claws of the Wolf, but this time is done from above the opponent
~ Impact: Brynne trips her opponent with the blunt end of her spear, then uses the blunt end by jabbing it into the opponent gut. She uses this when she doesn't want to hurt them too bad

Weapons/Items: Spear

Goals: To find Winry, and the other Winter Rok Pirates, whether dead or alive


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PostSubject: Re: Brynne Sanpeter   Brynne Sanpeter Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 8:28 pm

This looks nice but there are a couple of things:

I know that you have a picture posted, but you must also write a physical description of your character's appearance. This is always required even if you have a picture.

Also, in the history:
Why did the pirates kidnap the children? Was it to ransom the children to squeeze money from the village?
What happened to those kidnapped (non-Winter Rok Pirate) children? Were they killed along with the rest of the massacred villagers?
It never explicitly said what happened to Winry; was that part intentionally mysterious or did she actually die?
(It's perfectly fine if that part was meant to be unknown; I just couldn't tell if you meant to convey that she was killed or not.)

Please write a description of the appearance and address a couple of details in the history and you'll be ready to go! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Brynne Sanpeter   Brynne Sanpeter Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 10:30 pm

Alright, fixed it Smile And the whole Winry dying or not dying part was meant to be a mystery. So did I catch everything this time?
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PostSubject: Re: Brynne Sanpeter   Brynne Sanpeter Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 10:54 pm

Great!
I forgot to mention you must get your spear approved in the weapons sections. After that you will be approved. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Brynne Sanpeter   Brynne Sanpeter Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 11:28 pm

M'kay, the spear is approved Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Brynne Sanpeter   Brynne Sanpeter Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 11:57 pm

Approved!
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