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PostSubject: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 4:04 pm

Name: Goru Bakuchiku (muck stain on the marines)

Age: 18

Bounty: 1,000,000 belli

Species: Human.

Occupation: docter

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: north blue

Appearance: Goru is a taller man around 6 ft. His eyes are blue. Goru also wears a large leather overcoat with a white sleevshirt underneath. The right sleeve of the jacket has been cut off revealing the shirt underneath. He wears blue jeans that have been reinnforced with a thin layer of iron. His blond hair is spiked. on his back he carries a large trident. He also has a small medical kit on his belt.

History: Goru has lived a harsh life ever since he was five. his parents were severly injured in a fight between pirates on his island. He quickly learned to take care of himself by the age of six when a large lion attacked his village and mualed both him and his mother. at the age of ten his mother was taken by her injuries and he quickly took to medical science to keep his father safe with his fellow student and newfound freind Gennu. The docters were amazed at his skills as a docter that quickly increased through the years, but he could never stand still enough to stay in the hospital. So he took the role of collecting medical herbs. Goru came across the Hedoro Hedoro no mi in a expidition to find a special flower with incredible healing powers. After taking the chance and eating it he quickly discoverd its healing abilites by sealing a newly opening wound from his fight at 6 years. after a raid of his village by a group calling them the Jin's Might pirates at the age of 15 he discoverd he couldn't protect his freinds with just medical science when his freinds when his father died. Finally coming to a choice of protecting them by fighting for them he set off in his self-built ship to find and learn from the greatest fighters in the world. These trips led him to sinking and stealing from marine ships. His most notable exploit was his revenge on the Jin might pirates for their attack years before. in an unlikly fit of anger he sank the ship and finnally earned the attenition of the world goverment.

in his latest adventures he meeted and joined Iken namikaze, the Steel village pirates, becoming the groups third docter. during his trips he landed on a marine family island that was for uper class marine familys. the island itself was circeled by 10 marine warships. upon being a pirate entering this highly devloped and protected island, along with helping his comrades against the blood demon derge, His bounty sky rocketed. now heading for atlantis he at first had hesitation on coming. but took his duty as one of the crews docters and had promised himself to save his freinds life if they got wounded.

Personality: Usually he has a calm nature and will even go as far as to talk his way out of any fight he deems worthless. He however becomes very serious if anybody he see's as freind is hurt.

Ship: Village of Steel (A ship with a steel plating on the front along with a battling ram. Mid sized ship with many modern connivances with fruit trees
and a medium garden. becuase he joined the steel village pirates.

Ship Flag: with a skull that has discrimination written on it with swords sticking out of the skull symbolizing their efforts to kill discrimination.

Devil Fruit: Hedoro Hedoro no mi
type: logia
effect: The eater can create and control slime. The user may also change the tempature of the slime to heat up for healing wounds or cooling it to harden for deflecting attacks and creating makeshift weapons. This may be used to a lesser extent to become rubberlike.

Special Abilities: He has some konwledge on various sword techniuqes and fighting styles. His main field of power is in his intelligence and vast medical knowledge.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
hedoro bullets: Goru coats his hands or arms in slime and rapidly shoots at a target by firing globs of his slime.

chemical booze: after consuming a special mix from his med. kit he covers his arm in slime, then extending it to grab his opponents head. After forcefeeding his opponent their vision becomes blurred and extremly lightheaded. an effective means of disabling the target.

slime root: Goru sprouts roots into the ground like a plant. He can then make hardened spikes shoot from the ground.

slime mold: Goru makes an amount of slime needed and hardens it to protect him from weaker attackes for it is shatterd by stronger ones. if uses on his body by covering himself he is unable to move his hardend area.

slime web: using his fruit's powers he makes a intense system of spiderweb like strands and remains still after making a trap of spikes that luanch at the slightest touch of the strands.

hedoro armory: goru covers his arm in slime and shapes his hands into an array of weapons of his choosing then hardens his slime to increase thier force. for ex. swords, hammers, knives, and guns.

ooze shell: Goru covers his entire body in slime and hardens it to make an effective shield with the drawback of being unable to see.

hedoro armory special: Goru incases his hands in a large spiked ball and secretes a deadly poisen to add to its effetiveness in battle.

Herodo Wave: He throws both arms onto the ground to create a large wave of slime.

ooze marble: Goru compresses slime into a small marble that can be released to create a large area of slime coating.
goo graveyard: an attack that can be used as a follow up to ooze marble, the user uses the slime to cover the enemy and crush him/her.


Weapons/Items: Goru is always carring a large tident on his back. The tridents tips are coated from a special poisen he created with medical knowledge of bacteria and a Purple secretion of his slime. lastly He has a small medical kit on his back containing various anti-toxins and anything he needs to cure various injuries.

Goals:He wants to meet the worlds greatest fighters and become one's student.[center][left]


Last edited by deer556 on Wed Jan 26, 2011 8:43 pm; edited 12 times in total (Reason for editing : wrong wording for attacks, ablities, and bad history, im an idiot who forgot to read some of the rules)
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PostSubject: Re: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 10:35 pm

your history is way too short for that sort of bounty, i want you to explain it properly and include instances that the government would grant him such a high bounty. If not i advise you start at 0 beli and work your way up through rp
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PostSubject: Re: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 10:38 pm

sorry, still kindnew and needsome more practice, and I acidentillay put an extra set of zeros: i'll fix it and try better. only two days into this when he was made.
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PostSubject: Re: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 10:42 pm

ok.. still i need a explanation of how he got his bounty in your history.... i understand that you are new, do not worry, i am here to help you Smile now , just list how he got the bounty in your history
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PostSubject: Re: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 11:12 pm

well 10000000 was a typo I forgot to check, its really 10,000 for stealing from and harrasing the marines (im lazy so ill fix it up tomarrow). mostly stealing for his poor freinds, (stressing the laziness heer by slacking off and not posting whole thing.) now im at a standstill... Should he be noted fighting an org. of pirates that hurt his freinds?
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PostSubject: Re: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeFri Jan 21, 2011 11:22 pm

yes, that is very vital information,.......
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PostSubject: Re: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeSat Jan 22, 2011 10:39 am

finnaly fixed it, can i a rating, (approved, unapproved?)
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PostSubject: Re: Goru Bakuchiku (remastered)   Goru Bakuchiku (remastered) Icon_minitimeWed Jan 26, 2011 11:22 am

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