Kristoph Valshmann

Name: Kristoph \"Death Bringer\" Valshmann

Age: 15

Bounty: 20 belli(for killing clients if they don't pay him)

Species: Human

Occupation: Paid Mercenary

Allegiance: Highest Bidder

Home Village/Ocean: East ocean. Rich port city named \'Whitehall\'

Appearance: 5\' 4\", Long green hair that flows down to his waist, brown eyes. Wears tan pants and red collar shirt, and a long black overcoat over it. Has a black wide-rimmed hat.

History: The only child of the wealthy Valshmann family. When he was ten his parents were brutely murdered before his eyes, so he has a hate for pirates. Still has nightmares of his parent\'s death to this day.(is that good enough?)

Personality: lust for money and power

Ship: The avenger

Ship Flag: crossed scythes with a sword down the middle.

Devil Fruit: None

Special Abilities: none

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25): Chaos Slash (slash from the left side), Destruction Slash (slash from right side) Death Slash (rotates and slashes those at short range), and Slash Shot (Slashes the air and makes a cutting air wave that has a range of 100 meters), hakurai(A much more powerful form of Rankyaku that is used by using both legs, it seems to cut the air in a larger area).
Weapons/Items: double-bladed scythe named \"Death\'s Moon\" (can i get it approved later? I need to finish up quickly)

Goals: When he dies, he wants to take as many with him as he can.

you dont need to keep reposting it, you could have just edited the original post. but whatever

Seriously, I this the right way?

yeah it's the right way, make shure to get the weapon, and crew approved.....

otherwise your char is just fine, you dont have to but I'd elaberate on the history more

otherwsie good work!


APPROVED!!! cant wait to meet him

oh my mestake, he's not in a crew is he? so you wouldnt have to get one approved LOL

Admin-sama wrote:

oh my mestake, he's not in a crew is he? so you wouldnt have to get one approved LOL

Like the title says, I'm joining iggy's crew. What was it called again? Kristoph has a dislike for pirates, but that doesn't mean he can't have a few allies, does it?

your gonna need to copy this character sheet and post it under the crew you wanna be in.

but the corkscrews are pirates.... why not join the BHA (Bounty Hunters Assosiation) or the navy?

I guess I could do that. But I'd think it'll be fun to be in association with a pirate crew.

((I have influence... LOL, to join a crew read how under "joining a crew" in "geting started"))

I gave him a rokushiki!

where? kamaitachi isnt a rokushiki move

then...f-ck it.

gave him a REAL rokushiki.

Rankyaku "Hakurai" (嵐脚　"白雷", Storm Leg: "White Thunder"): Used by Kaku. A much more powerful form of Rankyaku that is used by using both legs, it seems to cut the air in a larger area

yes.
Is he reapproved?

yeah just edit the move discription

done

I have no idea.
I think he copy-pasted it.

duh, the the only wayI could do that is by geting a japanese CPU,keybord and software, or downloading a diffrent font set