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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Monkey D. Shaunic Fri May 28, 2010 5:22 am | |
| Name: Monkey D. Shaunic
Age: 17
Bounty: 30,000,000
Species: Human
Occupation: captain
Allegiance: Pirate
Home Village/Ocean: Water7
Appearance: mostly as tall as a gorilla (not as fat though). Has black hair and shorts. My shorts are black and my shirt is red. My shirt is sleeveless. And I wear brown sandals. I am brown with medium sized locks. I have a six pack.
History: one day when I was a baby a was floating at sea. But then a person named Ray save me. Then after a year the navy showed up and killed Ray. Then the next day the navy was going to kill me…then a mystery pirate came to save me. He was powerful. He said for me to become a pirate to pay him back. But he didn’t have to tell me that twice I always wanted to become the pirate king.so then when I was certain I was becoming a pirate I trained fought a few people then I was ready. When I finnaly became 17 I set sail. On my ship and my crewmates/Nakama yet to be found. And here I am. Doing two things trying to become the king of the pirates and trying to find out who saved me.
Personality: Always funny. But strong when needed. FAIR WARNING: don’t hurt his soon to be found crew. Even If you hurt 1 Nakama….. you don’t want to now everything else. And I sort of have a charm. If you must know my charm is once I tell somebody they will join my crew they end up joining my crew. Usually I don’t boss anybody around.
Ship: the going sunny
Ship Flag: cross bone with a tail on the bottom
Devil Fruit: Saru Saru no mi type: (Zoan) effect: this fruit will allow me to turn to a human-monkey hybrid or full monkey
Special Abilities: MOOOOONKEY 10 HITS OF PAIN champion punch champion kick Learned Techniques: Monkey Monkey STRIKE(can only do it as a full monkey) Monkey Monkey blow back(can only do it as a Monkey hybrid and it will push anybody back and hurt them a little) Monkey Monkey confusion(can do it as both monkey and monkey hybrid and the enemy will see one fist but will get hit some where else)
Weapons/Items: hands and a dagger
Goals: 1.to become THE KING OF THE PIRATES 2.to find the mystery pirate 3.to fight the whole marine head on for revenge.(that might start world war 3)
Last edited by Shaunic on Sun Aug 22, 2010 3:10 pm; edited 6 times in total | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 34 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Fri May 28, 2010 5:24 am | |
| Need more history , more appearance, more personality, what are your special abilities one punch? more please | |
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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Fri May 28, 2010 5:48 am | |
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Redmerv Admin
Posts : 1982 Join date : 2009-02-07 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Fri May 28, 2010 6:13 am | |
| you cant refer to chars in saying as tall as, also this was 20 years for curent story line so luffy aint alive, personality history and even the appearence are way to short, | |
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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Fri May 28, 2010 6:21 am | |
| ok | |
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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 4:17 am | |
| changed it | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 34 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 5:08 am | |
| you need to add more to appearance, skin color and all | |
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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 5:09 am | |
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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 6:33 am | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 34 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 6:45 am | |
| does this character have a devil fruit? | |
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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 6:58 am | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 34 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 7:21 am | |
| ok, well done, appearance we will leave for now
APPROVED | |
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Shaunic
Posts : 211 Join date : 2010-05-28 Age : 31 Location : water7(my home town)
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 7:23 am | |
| yes | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 5:03 pm | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 8:41 pm | |
| seems alot like Luffy to me..But I like him Lol..Don't harm his Namaka? King of the Pirates? Its just me being picky..lol..carry on xD | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat May 29, 2010 8:48 pm | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:17 am | |
| Oh yeah..Lower the bounty..
200-500 is perfect for an ARMATURE PIRATE.. | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:20 am | |
| You've been told before..
Extend that history, appearance, and personality.. I don't even know how this got approved... | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 34 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:17 am | |
| Sigh, blackluffy, honestly, are you a mod or what? i dont see why you have to interrupt in others characters, if anything is wrong Admin sama would have said so and has said so clearly, so please dont. The history and appaearance and personality is all at the acceptable limits, right at the border. so i approved it | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:42 am | |
| Eh, alright..If you really think that's a detailed history.. But you do have to agree with me..that bounties crazy high | |
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nikz200
Posts : 7605 Join date : 2010-02-19 Age : 34 Location : Malaysia
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:13 pm | |
| yes the bounty is crazy high, and it should be lowered to a reasonable amount | |
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Layman Iconoclast Admin
Posts : 10667 Join date : 2008-07-01 Age : 32 Location : I am everywhere I see everything
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:57 pm | |
| is this character even active anymore? | |
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TheBlackLuffy
Posts : 1722 Join date : 2010-01-18 Age : 31 Location : Narina
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:49 pm | |
| He just made a thread on his character..check the RP..
No one joined it..
HMM I wounder why? O.o | |
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Gael Admin
Posts : 3372 Join date : 2009-11-12 Age : 30 Location : I am at a place... doing stuff... with things.
| Subject: Re: Monkey D. Shaunic Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:28 pm | |
| Okay, I know this is HYPER delayed, but do me a favor and change the last name. I can't stand the Monkey D. part. | |
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