A rap battle

no I defintly spelled "submarene" correct, your thinking of Submarine

*submarene dives in to the ground and tunnels away*

HAHAHA....uhh.....
...
Oh shit, I'm out, it was all a trap.
I can no-way beat a three verse rap.
Intents was right, my lyrics are all crap.
I'm good for nothin', I'll just sit down and clap.

I'm sick of this fight, sick down to the bone.
Intents piping up like a big trombone.
Dishing out words that only send me home.
Call up my girl, and cry over the phone.

Where's fresh new blood for this rap fight?
Noone else joins in, boys, am I right?
Great job Intents, you gave 'em all a fright.
So scared of your lyrics, like a bird, take flight.

Yo Iggy, Yo Admin, in your submarene.
Digging through earth, must be real serene.
Join in the battle, we'll keep it clean.
Better yet, both of you join my team!

Oh my God, Admin-sama, please wait, let me get in the submarine too !!! I am begging you !

*tackles shadow*
GET BACK HERE AND RHYME!

Yo, Man this is bull shit ive entered the fray
You fools cant get the job done like the CIA
Go home and make some better rhymes
As a matter of fact, sorry to disappoint you but this is my time
Give me a break you fools think you can rap
Im better off with Vanilla ices crap
Did you think i would enter this battle unprepared
Damn you people have been served with some flair,
Plus i dont think weve adressed all the issues
Intents your rhymes are so bad you should take the mic home with you
So you can practice on your lame ass lyrics
So that you can prove that you aint no mimic.

(sorry its bad but i tried)

Why lookie here, everyone's gone
lettin Shadow face all and all alone
let me tell you what, I got no skill in rap
but tacklin me like that;
It just fires me up !
So I'll just stick around here like some Killer-bee
And show u why not to mess with ~ the evil king !
...

Yeeeeeah, I really suck at rap, thats the best I can think of right now lol

...
Wheres that subamerene?

... It left ? ._."

We will have to make our own then. But not a submarene, we need something better.
*builds wierd thing*
I call it, "THE PUBMARINE!" It has a pub inside.
Beers anyone?

Shadow and niks you rap worse than fleas
I guess I'll go and rap in japanese
さふてこぁういひくると
ながふぁがぱながたがと
By the way, that was complete gibberish.
But it ryhmed so WORD plish the fish.
Endark; you got space in the pubmarine?
I'm tired of rapping, it's not too keen.

Ok, I have no more lines, I suck at rap lol ... everyone that wants to leave like the rest, to the Shadowcopter ! *enters it and prepares to leave*

To the shadowcopter!!! Up up and away!!!!
WAIT WE FORGOT THE BEERS!!!
Somone aprove my charecter.

my name is strawhat and i'm here to stay
i think i want to enter this fray
you can't touch me
and you all will see
that you all are nothing and i make the beats sway
now everybody say hey!!!

Oh wait ... I ate the Beer Beer fruit, I can create, become and control boose ;D

*looks at Intents. Raises an eyebrow, indicating to the newcomer.*
*steps forward*
Yo noob, whats happenin', why you so queer?
This is rap, not poetry, that we got going here.
Go learn to lay a beat, then come back to us.
Hush little kiddie, please don't make a fuss.

And try to remember, avert this catastrophe,
When I write some rap, for the group to see.
These lyrics are mine, I dish em out for free,
so don't you dare even think 'bout copying me.

Theres a rapper here, with skills to pay the rent.
He's real good, ya, that's what I really meant.
Your stuck up ways, this guy will make you repent,
but enough about me, take it over INTENTS!

yeah your right i wish i knew how to rap
but when i hear your beat i think i need a map
you know and i know that i can't rap
but if you think i can't rap then your a sap.

whats up intents i haven't seen you around
i'm here to show some love now give me a fist pound
i like your raps they got a killer sound
when you get to it i'll see you around.

((I was reffering to strawhat luffy not being able to rap, not you.))

oh ok sorry

You better be.... Pikachu will find you...

haha strawhat prepare to be owned
Me and Endark, we'll beat you till you moan.
You should go and learn how to rap
Or you can go back to 4chan and fap.

You will be completely utterly devastated
By the two of us we'll leave you annihalated
Your dignity, it will be confiscated
Listening to your rap, my ears feel violated.

I agree
wholeheartedly,
to Intents rapsody.

So StrawhatLuffy4, whats up with the name?
The whole forums must agree, its really quite lame.
Not to mention that we seen at least three of the same.
But your uncreative, as we see, so we can't really lay blame...

Endarkened is a name that fills me with pride.
Username Intents, in epicness, is pretty much tied,
with me. So let us both take you for a little rap ride,
cuz if you dont learn to beat, you'll be dragged out by the tide.

Your avvy; It's horrible too!
It's some generic guy; doing kung fu.
Don't even get me started on your grammar
You never capatalize a word; I wanna hit you with a hammer

So just get the heck off, our rapping train
Cuz we're gonna ryhme you, into shame.
We're gonna beat you, again and again
Cuz once again; It's our time to reign!

((Holy shit, we were so good, he dissapeared of the face of the world.))

good job fellows ...