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PostSubject: Louis Fredric (Disarmed, lol thats a bad joke)   Louis Fredric (Disarmed, lol thats a bad joke) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 24, 2010 8:22 am

Name:Louis Fredric

Age:12

Bounty:None

Species: Human/Cyborg

Occupation: None yet

Allegiance:None

Home Village/Ocean:Lougetown

Appearance:A little boy with brown eyes and short black hair, Has two Strong Metal Cyborg Arms that allow him to move heavy objects , wears blue shorts and a green shirt and brown boots. Very sad looking eyes but try's to smile even though people give him funny looks for having 2 robotic arms, hes not very tall being 5'5, his shoulders are very muscular , Carries A sack on his back full of his favorite toys, and has His fathers pocket watch hanging off of his shirt. He also Has a scar on his left leg.

History:Born and raised In Louge town Life was fine Until Morada's men came, Killing his mom and cutting off his arms he fainted in pain, After Nishki and Dakumaru Kill Morada and his men, Louis was taken to the hospital to get bandaged up. Desperate Gregory Fredric His father Did everything he could to get Louis arms back, After talking to many scientist's They told him it would be very expensive... Not having very much money Gregory Fredric Agreed to Work for the marines with 50 years paid in advance, useing the money he bought Louis Some new Cyborg arms, that was the last day Louis ever saw his father, Useing what little money his father left for him he lived by himself until he heard about a lottery in a newspaper: Attention Grand Prize A Cruise to Salamthia. Entering the contest Louis Used some of the very few berri's he had left, Surprisingly enough He won! Excited he boarded the "Sunset Silly" Hopeing for adventure and a purpose in his lonely life

Personality:A Very Quite boy, eyes look very sad, Does his best to smile,Gets mad when people push his buttons,Misses His dead mother terribly along with his old arms,thinking he used to be normal now hes a freak
Has self esteem issues do the children in lougetown Making fun of him.

Ship:None

Ship Flag:None

Devil Fruit: None

Special Abilities:
1)Strong Right, Punches With his Cyborg right arm
2)Quick Left,Punches with his cyborg left arm 3 times very fast
3)Super arms, uses his arms to pick up heavy stuff

Weapons/Items:A picture Of his dad and mom with him in the middle back before all this mess started (This is his treasure)

Goals:Wants to go out into the world and see what he can make of it, and to find his dad again someday.


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PostSubject: Re: Louis Fredric (Disarmed, lol thats a bad joke)   Louis Fredric (Disarmed, lol thats a bad joke) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 24, 2010 10:20 am

Turning a minor RP character into a major one? It is fine, but one thing that needs work:

Character appearance.
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PostSubject: Re: Louis Fredric (Disarmed, lol thats a bad joke)   Louis Fredric (Disarmed, lol thats a bad joke) Icon_minitimeWed Mar 24, 2010 10:38 am

KK i added more Appearance =)
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