Shadow

Name: Shadow "The snail"

Age: 8

Bounty: 100

Species: Den Den Mushi. =O

Occupation: Messenger/spy (Knows enough cooking to get by, but not a proffesional)

Allegiance: Pirate

Home Village/Ocean: Grand Line

Appearance: Pic: CLICK HERE
In hybrid form: Just a larger denden mushi
In Giant form: A giant that deeply resembles a den den mushi

History: Shadow grew up in Impel Down, where his parents were used as security camera Den Den Mushis. Shadow always knew that there was something more to life, and that they didn't have to just be servants to the humans. He escaped Impel Down without a soul noticing. This was because he made sure he left through the hallways his parents were surveilling, and they purposely looked away, pretending not to see him. While in impel down, he found an impact dial that the guards had confiscated from a prisoner, and Shadow stole it. Soon after leaving Impel Down, he discovered the giant giant fruit on Elbaf, where the giants had no use for it, and gave it to him to help him acheive his dream.

Personality: Shadow is fun loving, and enjoys playing practical jokes. He sometimes pretends to be ringing, and pretends someone is calling, and then mess with people when noone is on the line.

Ship: N/A

Ship Flag: N/A

Devil Fruit: Giant Giant fruit
type: Zoan
Effect; Allows tranformation into giant, and denden-giant hybrid

Special Abilities: Shadow fights with an impact dial, and rarely transforms into his giant form. He pretty much only uses his regular form, and his hybrid form.

Learned Techniques (Keep it 1-25):
-Impact
Shadow faces the dial at his oe and releases an impact
-Jet
Shadow faces the dial at the ground and blasts himself upward
-Tekkai
The Tekkai (鉄塊, Iron Mass) hardens the users' muscles to the level of iron, in order to nullify damage taken from attacks.
-Eye shigan
Shadow plows his eye forward, similar to shigan, but his eye.

Weapons/Items:
-Impact dial

Goals: To prove that his race can be used for more than just transponder snail things, but rather pirates! Part of his dream already being completed, being the first den den mushi to obtain a bounty!

[Bump]Uh... hello?[/bump]

While I am not opposed to a den den mushi with some degree of personality, I am opposed to this character strongly. A den den mushi would be unable to fight, let alone have aspirations.

Keeping the personality, it would make an interesting "character" on a ship that used it on a regular basis, but otherwise I do not see this working as is.

Well den den mushis are still technically wild animals. They have been demesticated in a sense by humans, but any animal is still an animal. Den den mushis seem to also be able to comprehend human speech, given that they are able to talk in human tongue and give facial expresuons relating to what they are saying. Even if they are just repeating humans, they would eventually pick up on when to say words and for what reason, just as a parrot would learn to say hello or poly wanna cracker, by mimicking human speech.

Maybe you should give him one of those human fruits to make him more playable my advise doesn't matter cuz i have no authority here just thought i throw out a suggestion for you =)

Well I'd do that, but unfortunately, there is only one of those fruits, which is being used by another player.
Thanks for the suggestion though

Anorther sugestions is making a fishmen fruit or anorther race maybe a giant, or if you make a human and give him a den den mushi fruit, but that would ruin the story I guess

Well I wanted to save my third df user for later, but thanks anyways.

Okay, I made the changes irrational suggested. But I didn't change the goals part, because if it has a personality, shouldn't it have a goal?

Scratch that, Shadow has now eaten the giant giant fruit.

remove kami-e, which is auto dodging and I'll approve.

Removed

Thanks =D

Added technique.

wouldn't it be harming the eye then?

Not realy, except for getting blood in it.