"Elegant Sword" Raphael Sorel

Name: "Elegant Sword" Raphael Sorel
Age: 32
Bounty: 5000 Berri
Species: Human
Occupation: Captain
Allegiance: Pirate, Captain of the Sorel Pirates
Ocean: West
Appearance: He wears a green nobleman's jacket with a high collar which extends into a cape. The inner of this jacket is red. He also has an armor which extends from under the jacket and shoulders. He also wears brown gloves with a metal coating. He has a brown dueler's pants with a belt with hip and side guards and brown shoes. His hair is dark blond and sickled back except for the front. See this link to get a better idea from the looks http://www.ptfighters.com/wiki/images/4/4c/Art_28.gif
History:Raphael, the young master of the Sorel family, grew up with the rapier and medicine as his playmates. His cool, unemotional demeanor created many enemies, but his quick and precise decision-making and execution skills were prominent features of his family amongst the nobility. Unfortunately, Raphael made a critical mistake and killed an insane noble in self-defense--a noble supported by his family. His family cast him out of their household and even aided the town and marines in their pursuit of the murderer. Raphael hid himself in the town to escape from his pursuers. There he met a young girl named Amy who hid the weakened Raphael from his enemies. For Raphael, this marked the first time he had ever owed his life to someone else, causing him to feel emotions he had never experienced before--Amy became an irreplaceable presence in his life and he became obsessed with creating a new world for her to live in.
Personality: He's quite serious has a lust for power. In combat he's very sarcastic and often mocks and plays with his opponents. However, those he sees as his friends, he's very warm and open towards, especially Amy. Those who hurt his friends in any ways, he sees them personally as enemies and will do anything to defend his friends' honor.
Ship: La Desmodontinae (French for: The Vampire)
Ship Flag: A angry looking skull with fangs, wings and 2 rapiers crossed beneath it.
Special Abilities: Master Swordsman: Fencing style (called La Rapière des Sorel), Superhuman Speed
Learned Techniques:
- *Normal Sword Techniques: Bond en Avant, Glide, Attaque au Fer, Riposte, Prise de Fer, Passata-Sotto, In Quartata, Conversation, Derobement, Croisé, Disengage, Reprise.
- Special Sword Techniques: Épee Storm (Sword Storm), Tornado Thrust (Jumps high in the air and comes spinning down like a tornado blade first), Defènce Rapide (Rapid Defense; combines his superhuman speed to swing his blade around him, parrying incoming attacks and bullets), Heartbreaker (first he cuts the tendons of his opponents legs and arms, then he catches them while they fall and finally he stabs their heart while looking deep into their eyes)
Weapons: Rapier (called Estoc)
Goals: Creating a new world for Amy.

*http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fencing_terms this site is for the Fencing Terms I used.

Write out appearance and add more to personality.

Done and done

Thank you, say can you also look at my character Olcadan??? ^^

in a bit. I'm about to go somewhere.

Ah ok ^^, well I'll see it in the mail so xD

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